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Reviews For Incubus
Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:39 PM · On: The Reunion

Oh, what a wonderful reunion!  So tender, so heartfelt, so sexy!  I love it!  Thanks so much.  Can't wait for the rest . . .



Author's Response:

I was hoping it was all of those things, so I am happy you thought it succeeded!

Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:58 PM · On: The Reunion

This was the perfect homecoming!!! I loved it and I so cannot wait for the rest...I hope Edward trusts Bella's choice :)

Update soon!



Author's Response:

I am so happy you loved this chapter!  The next one will be up soon!

Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 11:39 AM · On: The Reunion

omg yes! this is the reunion i was waiting for! perfect... i also noticed no condom... >.> hmmmm lol

<3



Author's Response:

No babies!  Just a careless writer when it came to the details.

Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 09:42 AM · On: The Reunion

This is a great story!  I just began it today and read all that you have written so far!  Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  The next chapter should be up in a couple days.

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 06:49 AM · On: The Reunion

Aww, it's almost over?  :-(

Anyway, I agree with Alice that Bella needs to make an informed decision...but I have a sneaky feeling that Bella will want to be with Edward forever, no matter what!  Your lemons are hot, btw.  :-)



Author's Response:

That lemon was not in the original story.  I thought it needed something in this rendition!  A little challenge for myself.

Next chapter is decision time!

Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 06:21 AM · On: The Reunion

Beautiful reunion.  I'm guessing that since this story is almost finished, Bella is going to decide to be changed soon?  Not sure how else she could decide as they've both now said that they could never be parted again from each other. 



Author's Response:

The decision will come next chapter.  Thanks for continuing to follow along!

Reviewer: TwiDi (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 05:01 AM · On: The Reunion

AWE! that was AMAZING! I loved their reunion! it was absolutely breathtaking!

I can't believe this is gonna be wrapped up soon!

Loved your work!

Cheers!



Author's Response:

I am happy the reunion was everything you were hoping for.  The story is wrapping up.  I might continue their tale after I finish my current project.

Reviewer: edward-bella70 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 03:31 AM · On: The Reunion

This story is really great! It seems like there should be more than just a chapter or two left. Unless you plan on having Bella become a vampire soon. That would be a cool way to end it. Please update soon!



Author's Response:

You'll have to let me know if I wrapped it up OK in the end.  I did leave some questions left unanswered.  No cliff hangers, but potential to continue this story in the future.

Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:33 AM · On: The Reunion

Wow, that was GREAT!



Author's Response:

I couldn't half-ass that chapter.  They have been apart too long.

Reviewer: inlovewithavampire12 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:14 AM · On: The Reunion

oh so good.....



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: imloki (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:36 AM · On: The Reunion

so sad to her it's ending i originally was not liking this version of edward but i grew to love him i wil miss this universe



Author's Response:

Someone suggested that I do a prequel to this story.  Edward during his Incubus years.  I may do that, or do a sequel later.  I am glad you came to love my version of these characters.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Selene08 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:07 AM · On: The Reunion

Gawd, that was hott! I hope Edward changes her, it would suck if he doesn't.



Author's Response:

Thanks.  The original ending of that chapter after they were standing there holding each other was:

"After a moment, she raised her eyes up to me, and pulled me towards the bed. We laid down then, and I spent the rest of the morning making love to my angel."

I just felt like it needed a bit more detail.  :-)

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:52 AM · On: The Reunion

mmm...I bet you have a good 5-10 chapters left in you ;-)



Author's Response:

I think I probably do now.  I originally wrote this story for FF.  At the time, my muse totally disappeared on me where this story is concerned.  Now that I have gotten back into this story for Twilighted, I might start writing a sequel, or someone suggested a prequel that follows Edward through his Incubus years.

Reviewer: roja (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:45 AM · On: The Reunion

Awww.  Only two more chapters?!  Well, then, I guess Edward will be turning her.  I love your writing and I know you'll end this beautifully.

Thank you!



Author's Response:

It may be the end of this story soon, but I think this is the start of a series.  I did leave this story in a way that it has a future.  No cliff hangers, but open to be continued.

Reviewer: Audrella (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 11:25 PM · On: The Reunion

Yea!  He's back...and oh what a way to come back!!  She wants to be with him eternally, I think her choice is made.  Can't wait to read the rest, even if it is close to end, it has been a good ride.  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading!  The next chapter is called "Family Meeting".  You can guess what is going down.

Reviewer: goldeneyedgirl (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 11:12 PM · On: The Reunion

I liked it, however, I remembered from earlier in your story that Edward was always "careful" even a mention of condoms, we aren't going to have another little Renesmee running around, are we?????



Author's Response:

The devil is in the details, isn't it.  Curse me for wanting to give you guys a hot lemon, and forgetting to describe Edward wrapping it up!  ;-)  No babies.  Sorry for my carelessness with that detail.

Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:40 PM · On: The Reunion

wow great reunion cant wait for next



Author's Response:

Decisions are made next!

Reviewer: Goodygurl (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:24 PM · On: The Reunion

Good chapter, but now I'm wondering if any little Renesme's are going to be born, lol. I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

No babies.  I was just careless, and forgot to add the detail of Edward wrapping it up.

Reviewer: effward (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:00 PM · On: The Reunion

I just love that line with a crooked smile and a wink.  Oh she knows it's gonna be good.  Oh to wake up to Bedward.



Author's Response:

Tell me about it.  My original end of that chapter was just:

"After a moment, she raised her eyes up to me, and pulled me towards the bed. We laid down then, and I spent the rest of the morning making love to my angel."

I thought it needed a little more lemony goodness.

Reviewer: Cullen Loverr (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 08:46 PM · On: The Reunion

i really love this story i hope you let edward change her please !!!



Author's Response:

This is not his decision.  It is THEIRS.

Reviewer: Willowfyre (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 06:47 PM · On: The Reunion

What?!?  Just one or two chapters left... *sniffle*  This story is so great...I'm not ready for it to be over.

Okay, that was my selfish side coming out to play.  You've done a great job with this story and I'm eager to see how you will write the ending.



Author's Response:

I do have a sequel or prequel in mind for the future.  Maybe after I am done with the story I am currently working on (not Incubus, this one has been done for almost 2 months now).

Thanks so much for reading!  I am sure we will see these guys again in the future.

Reviewer: an_edward_chick (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 06:42 PM · On: The Reunion

Great reunion.  I loved the way they just held each other for a while, that's so much more intimate than the sex act itsself.  I found this story late in the game, so I can't believe you are close to the end.  I can't wait to see you resolve everything.



Author's Response:

I agree about the intimacy of them just holding each other.  I originally ended this chapter with that.  I guess I have been reading too many of the smuttier stories, and they got me thinking.  ;-)

Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 06:19 PM · On: The Reunion

better be two very long chapters!



Author's Response:

They are what they need to be....in my opinion.  I won't leave you hanging.

Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 05:56 PM · On: The Reunion

great reunion!  very well done.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm so happy Edward is back!

Reviewer: roja (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 01:21 AM · On: Italy Calling

This is a great story.  I love the flow and the pace and it your unique perspective.

I'm reading it everyday you post.

Thanks.



Author's Response:

There will be a slightly longer pause than normal between chapters, because I have some elaboration I want to add.

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