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Reviews For Incubus
Reviewer: nox76 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Family Meeting

OMG so did'nt expect that! LOL Of course it was lovely, it just ended too quickly for me. Update soon.

 



Author's Response:

If this ended too quickly for you, then it is really about to come to a halt, because the next chapter is my last for this story.   Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Family Meeting

That was actually a very sweet chapter.



Author's Response:

I thought it should be.

Reviewer: LadyJ86 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Family Meeting

o_O *gasps* A cliffhanger?! I am shocked and surprised! How dare you cut me off like that! Write, I say! Write! *giggles* ......Please?



Author's Response:

Last chapter is going to my beta as soon as I am done with my author note.

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Family Meeting

I can't review this. Sorry. I'm just crying too damn much! SOBBING!

Author's Response:

*hug*

Sorry to make you cry.  Hopefully they are tears of joy.

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Family Meeting

*falls out of her chair in shock*

Okay, not really, haha.  But I loved the family meeting. And I also liked how Edward somehow didn't make a huge deal about Bella choosing to be a vampire.  Yea!



Author's Response:

I really wanted Edward to just be so happy that she wanted to spend forever with him.  To be humbled by it.  I always disliked how he always dismissed Bella's choices as irrational and almost treated her like a petulant child.  I wanted her to be someone whom he respected enough to know she had thought things through.

Reviewer: snoodles (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Family Meeting

Ok, If Bella changes before Aro comes back what will keep Aro from taking her anyway?



Author's Response:

Review #300!!!

Very good question, though one not addressed in this story.  Next chapter is the last.  You'll see, and I hope you are content with where I leave it.  It is open to future writings.

Reviewer: Strix (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Family Meeting

(scream) Oh my goodness

Shock and awe

Shock and awe

I can't believe it. I never saw that comming!

(is that what you wanted?)

Loved the chapter cant wait for more!!



Author's Response:

LOL!  I'm glad you liked.  The conclusion of the story is next.

Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Family Meeting

I'm shocked!!! No, just kidding. Even though I saw it coming it was touching to read. I like how you handled it. No angry Edward or arguing...



Author's Response:

Acceptance has been the theme of this story.  I had to end it on the same note.  Next chapter is my last.  I hope THAT is not to big of a shock for you.  :-)

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Family Meeting

Our odd family was now even=BRILLIANT LINE!!!



Author's Response:

I always worry that lines like that will come off as corny.  I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Family Meeting

That was so sweet!! Please update soon?



Author's Response:

Last chapter is up next.  I just need to finish up my author's note, and it will be sent to my beta.

Reviewer: Goodygurl (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Family Meeting

LoL...that was doing very sweetly without too much mushiness. I can't wait for more! Update soon!!!



Author's Response:

I wanted it to be sentimental, and done out of love for all involved.  I am glad I didn't go over the deep end.  :-)  Last chapter will be up soon.

Reviewer: msangela2u (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Family Meeting

OMG WHAT?! :) I really like how it is not just Edward being the passionate one in regards to making Bella a part of the family. Totally interested in seeing how the change comes when it is not under physical duress (a la Renesme).



Author's Response:

In my best Jessica voice, "I know, right!"

It was important to me that it not be just Edward and Bella fighting it out.

Last chapter is next.

Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Family Meeting

I love it!!  I enjoy all the happiness and I hope it will continue and have lots of humor instead of angst.



Author's Response:

Angst is done.  Last chapter is next.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Family Meeting

What!  How could she have chosen Edward when she could have had ALOT of money!  LOL, your note is funny!  Yes, I knew she would choose Edward, but I'm still enjoying your story.  You write well, I hope you write more stories!



Author's Response:

I know...that crazy girl.  Eternity of love with a hot ass man!  Who the hell wants that?!

I do have more stories in my arsenal.  I plan on posting my next when this is done...if the fine ladies of this site accept it.

Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Family Meeting

This was the perfect way to tell Bella and even if I knew what her choice would be, I love how she worded it! Wonderfully done, as usual! :D



Author's Response:

I tried to make this memorable, even though it has been done before.  My own twist.  I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: BellaWillow (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Family Meeting

Nice Chapter. Wow, she decided to stay with Edward ;) Seriously, I really enjoyed how you played out the decision scene and the fact that they laid it out on the table for Bella as a family.



Author's Response:

They ARE a family...and now they are complete.  :-)

Reviewer: chloe9 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Family Meeting

Aww, that was very sweet! I wonder if there are any more surprises in store for them though. :)

Author's Response:

No more surprises.  The final chapter is next.  I hope this one didn't leave you with too much of a sweet tooth.  ;-)

Reviewer: inlovewithavampire12 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Family Meeting

very food chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: TwiDi (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Family Meeting

AWE! I loved it.. I soooo loved it :)

It was so sweet and i loved every bit of it... from the breakfast he made her till the resolution she came to!

GREAT WORK!

Cheers!



Author's Response:

And I sooo love you for sending me reviews through this whole process!  I wanted this decision to be wrapped in love and not desperation.  Last chapter is next.

Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Family Meeting

LOVED IT! It makes my heart full of warm fuzzies. Lol. Great job! Keep them chapters coming.



Author's Response:

I'm glad I walked you to your happy place.  I am afraid that I won't be keeping chapterS coming.  The next one is the last for this story.  I am considering doing a prequel (the Incubus years...yum) or a sequel (you'll see where I can still go) in the future.  The author note at the end of the next chapter will explain it all.  Thanks SO SO much for all the great reviews you have sent all along!

Reviewer: MyWorld (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 09:05 PM · On: The Reunion

Sooo sad that there are only a few chapters left, but I guess you have almost told the whole story that you set out to tell. I have enjoyed reading this story very much.  It is always fun to read a well written story (I'm sort of picky).  Thank you for taking the time to write this for us to enjoy.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I have more stories in my arsenal, and hopefully they will make their way up here as well.  I might do a prequel (the Incubus years) or a sequel (you'll see what that will entail) in the future, if my muse finds me again.

Reviewer: roadkill2105 (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2009 12:30 PM · On: The Reunion

um what happened to sex safe edward who knew about humans having children?

 

nice chapter,

don't want the story to end,

update

x x Cassie



Author's Response:

Curse thee brain, for forgetting to include that detail into my writing!  It was not intensional.  No vamp spawn in Bella's uterus in this story.  I just forgot to be detail oriented.

Reviewer: zahir (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 06:49 AM · On: The Reunion

Wow!!!! that is something i wasnt expecting... i love the fact that you made them more real... they have real stories and a past to deal with... dont get me wrong i love SM Bella and Edward!!!! but knowing that they both have something to recover from makes it more real...

at least i can keep dreaming on my vampire...jajaja :-)

well like i said before great work... i can't wait for more...

good luck!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  The one thing that always bothered me about the canon stuff is that Bella seemed to have no past.  No friends.  No stories, other than Renee/Charlie drama.  I wanted to give them both a rich past to bring with them into their relationship.  I'm glad you liked it!

More soon!

Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 05:11 AM · On: The Reunion

Loving the story, but no condom? Well I'm going to hope they'll be either lucky this time...



Author's Response:

Yes.  I'm an idiot.  I forgot to write that detail in.  Sorry.  No babies.

Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 05:28 PM · On: The Reunion

YAY! I'm so happy they reunited. I'm sad to read you'll be ending this soon. Just know I'm a huge fan and you've got wonderful talent.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  After this, I will probably move some of my other stories over from FF.  But, after posting this one here, I have renewed interest in continuing this story either as a prequel (Edward: the Incubus Years) or a sequel (won't give away this ending).  So it depends if I am in the mood for love or lust.  Hahahaha!

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