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Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Reciprocation
great story im so tired or i would write more but i so want to finish
Author's Response: Lol, that's okay - thanks for reading!
Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 07:35 PM · On: The Monster and the Man
I am surprised there isn't more written like this..I mean she's a girl he's a vampire, it's bound to happen.
Author's Response: Yeah, it seems obvious to me too, lol. ;)
Reviewer: jemimag (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Reciprocation
nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
I think you layered SM's chapter in Eclipse aka (what "really" happened) in with your own beautifully! It was just dirty enough, too. I've seen some stories that are smut for smut's sake, with no foundation to support their actions. I don't like those types of stories. I could feel the love and desire these two had for each other throughout this chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so glad you thought I did such a good job "layering" the chapter, lol. ;) Rereading that scene while trying to figure out where I wanted to place this installment, I realized that would've been the perfect spot for sex. SM was such a tease, lol! So was Edward, for that matter - getting Bella all hot and bothered like that. ;) Anyway, thanks so much for reading!
Reviewer: nanny (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
tjhis was the best chapter so far
Please update soon Bella and Edward have so much more to do toghter
GREEEAT STORY !!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! But unfortunately this was only a 3-part story, so there won't be anymore updates. Again, thanks so much for reading!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
When I read that scene in Eclipse, I kept thinking "Hell yeah, they're gonna do it!" and then I was sorely disappointed. I love love love your version of that chapter. Fantastic, hot, and just a little on the dirty side. Great job!
xoxo Sarah
Author's Response: Hi Sarah! I can totally empathize there! There were several scenes, including that one, where I thought they were finally going to do the deed, and then when they finally did, it faded to black. :( Very disappointing. But I guess that's why we have fanfiction! Anyway, thanks so much for reading!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
This was incredibly erotic. I feel wholly satisfied now. Excellent trilogy!!!!
Author's Response: As always, thank you so much for reading and for letting me know what you think! It's very much appreciated! ;)
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
What a great smut filled chapter. If only Edward would of let himself go in the book series.
Author's Response: Lol, I know, right? Thanks so much for reading!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
THAT WAS GREAT
Author's Response: THANKS!
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
Loved that, wish that had been in the book, it made more sense
Author's Response: Lol, me too! I definitely would've enjoyed the books more had they been catered to an older audience, but I guess that's the good thing about fanficitiion! Anyway, thanks so much!
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
This was a great and sexy chapter! It says that it is not complete but you say this is the last chapter so is this particular story complete?
Author's Response: Lol, yes, it is complete. ;) I was waiting for the third chapter to get validated before I went in to check the little "completed" box, and it happened to get validated while I was away from home. It's now showing to be complete, though. ;) Anyway, thanks so much for reading! I'm so glad you liked it!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
Great story. Wonderful job, especially it being Edward's first time. Very realistic.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you thought so! Thank you very much for reading! ;)
Reviewer: Annabel_Lee333 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
This was awesomely great. :) You wrote the 'love making' scenes very naturally, there wasn't any awkwardness that happens sometimes when people write 'romantic scenes'. Very nice all around, can't wait to read more from you.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed my writing! ;)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
Totally loved it -way more SATISFYING tha the book version!!!!!Awesome!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you thought so!
Reviewer: bellaval (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:30 AM · On: The Monster and the Man
great story - one of the best i have read. Awesome.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
Just read the whole story - I enjoyed it a lot - please keep writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And I have no intention to stop writing! ;)
Reviewer: nanny (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Reciprocation
She promised she would be good but said nothing about how long this would lasts. Great story update soon !!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked it!! :D
Reviewer: mykale (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Reciprocation
I THINK IT WAS ABSOLUTELY CANON..
SHE WAS PRETTY BOLD IN ALL THE BOOKS.
YOUR STORIES ARE ALWAYS AMAZING
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoy my writing! :D
Reviewer: hochexplosiv (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 02:44 AM · On: Reciprocation
Why stop after 3 Chapters? This could become so much more. They already live in an alternate universe after this. Please?
Author's Response: Lol, mainly because I already have two multichaptered fics I'm writing other than this one, and I'm already behind on updates for one of them. Also, it could only go downhill from the third chapter - the "climax" of the story - pun most definitely intended. ;)
Reviewer: blueeyedbella (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Reciprocation
woot! i love this. great job!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: shayJ (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Reciprocation
Loving it... can't wait for the next chapter. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: Applee (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Reciprocation
Absolutely lovely!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: shayJ (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 11:57 AM · On: The Monster and the Man
Omg - absolutely brilliant. You should listen to Type O Negative's "Wolf Moon". (Damn, that song title is messing with my head now - how weird is that?!? lol) It could definitely be an inspiration for this uh, interlude. First time I read Twilight - I thought of this song... cuz if Edward was mine- I would SO hook him up every 28 days! Awesome first chapter, hon - onto Chapter 2 now!
Wolf Moon Lyrics
The 28th day
She'll be bleeding again,
And in lupine ways
We'll alleviate the pain.
Unholy water
Sanguine addiction,
Those silver bullets
A last blood benediction.
It is her moon time
When there's iron in the air,
A rusted essence
Woman may I know you're there?
Unholy water
Sanguine addiction,
Those silver bullets
A last blood benediction.
Hey wolf moon
Come cast your spell on me,
Hey wolf moon
Come cast your spell on me.
Don't spill a drop dear
Let me kiss the curse away,
Yourself in my mouth
Will you leave me with your taste?
Hey wolf moon
Come cast your spell on me,
Hey wolf moon
Come cast your spell on me.
Beware
The woods at night,
Beware
The Lunar light.
So in this gray haze
We'll be meeting again,
And on that great day
I will tease you all the same.
Unholy water
Sanguine addiction,
Those silver bullets
A last blood benediction.
Hey wolf moon
Come cast your spell on me,
Hey wolf moon
Come cast your spell on me.
Beware
The woods at night,
Beware
The Lunar light.
Author's Response: Lol, wow, I'm not familiar with that song, but it does seem very fitting! Thank you so much for sharing it with me - I just might have to buy it on itunes. Anyway, I'm so glad you liked my fic! :D
Reviewer: Azkadellia (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Reciprocation
Wow...is all that I have to say! It would have been great to see them have some sort of interaction like this before BD. Even if it wasn't full on sex. But just the oral stuff...yeah.
Great job! Can't wait for the third!
Author's Response: Thanks, and yes, it would've been nice! I found the lack of "fulling around" to be quite frustrating myself! ;) And the third chap is coming very soon!
Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Reciprocation
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: So glad you liked it!
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