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Reviewer: juliebee (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 02:18 AM · On: The Monster and the Man
I read this story months ago, when I was first introduced to fanfiction. At the time I didn't even realize I was supposed to / could review!
Anyway I was just getting back to reading it, and I wanted to say thank you! It's a wonderful piece, well done. I've always thought this was important subject matter since SM glossed it over in the books, and you tackled it beautifully.
I just rec'd it over on The Gazebo.
Great job!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story as much as you did! And thank you for the rec, but I was wondering if you could give me the link to The Gazebo. I thought it was an LJ community, but I can't seem to find it. Again, thanks so much!
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
okay, so THAT is how it really happened! Not the sanitized version we got in Eclipse. Thank you so much!
Author's Response: LOL - Yes, that's the way the scene would've been written had I been the author of the Twilight books and not SM. ;) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Reciprocation
Good for you Bella! Nicely done!
Author's Response: LOL - Glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 11:18 AM · On: The Monster and the Man
excellent writing. The topic is sexy as hell, too. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Jes85 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
That was HOTT!!!!!!
Author's Response: Glad you thought so!!!!!
Reviewer: faithpuppy101 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
holy mother of god that was so hot!! you have a talent my friend. i read this weeks ago and have been checking constantly for updates. i was so excited to see a third installment. i had to read it all over again to get to part three. cant wait to do it again for part four. thanks for writing!!!
Author's Response: Lol, while that's very flattering, unfortunately there isn't going to be a part four, as this was a three-part story. ;)
Thanks for reading, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 01:10 AM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
So I'm wondering why this hasn't been nominated for any awards yet?!!!! If I'd found it a bit earlier, I certainly would have nominated it! This is so good it should be cannon! I think it really could have been if Bella would have gotten to the point where she was willing to get brave about her own modesty (she certainly was lusty enough in the books! And might have pushed E more if he had slipped even once!)
Thank-you for writing this! I too have been less than satisfied and am sooo glad you set your imagination loose for our benefit!!! :) This one of the most satisfying "what if things had gone here instead" stories I have read yet! You delt with the subject with the perfect tone. This would be very matter of fact in their world. I can think of a place this could have gone (him loving her "trash") that would have been sick. You're story most definitly wasn't! Just sensual use of a vamps food source! lol
[Pretty sure my husband wants to thank-you too! :D ] I'm reviewing this morning because I...put the computer down and...went to bed. ;D
Tightly written and left me tightly wound! Couldn't have been better!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! I'm very glad you enjoyed this fic as much as you did!
And I agree that it wouldn't've taken much to get Edward's self-control to "slip." Lol. Glad you liked the blood stuff - it's not normally my thing, but when dealinf with vampire's it's just hot!
Again, thanks so much! :D
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
OK, that was freakin' hot!
Author's Response: Thanks! ;)
Reviewer: pinkpanthercsi (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
LOVED IT!!! one of the best stories ive read, by far!!! Keep writting more PLEASE!!!
Author's Response: Lol, thanks! And I never stop writing! ;)
Reviewer: t_m_d (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
i love what you did with this story canon edward was so irritating in his self doubt and morality it was nice to see him actually give in and not have the moment go black as soon as things got sexy. im off to read your other stories now love your writing
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm very glad you like my writing!! :D
Reviewer: achelle131 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
i'm so frustrated! i had just completed a 3 paragraph review of your chapter and when i hit submit, my log in had expired! I'm a bit frustrated right now.. anyway let me try to recollect what i left you:
Your set-up/introduction of the lemon was beautiful and flawless. I think you captured his feelings upon his homecoming very well and in a very believing way. this could most definitely replace that chapter in eclipse had SM not cockblocked them until their wedding night, lol.
That being said, what the hell was I thinking when I first skimmed your chapter and was shocked that they went all the way? I think, though, that it had been uqite some time since I read the first two chapters of this series, so my mind was thinking of ultra-canon-compliant MD and IPoN.
THAT being said... the sex was HOT HOT HOT! I love that they're so embarrassed/afraid yet so eager. PLUS, your Edward... delicious. I love that he is so GENEROUS in offering/giving her multiple opportunities to "bring her to completion" to use your words. You have to love a generous man. especially a hot, generous, gentlemanly man like edward. RAWR.
As always, i loved it, and of course i love you!
Sincerely,
Mariecel
Author's Response: HA HA HA! Glad I can throw you and show you that I'm not always so "canon-compliant"! I once was, but I'm stretching my wings a bit! ;)
Anyway, I'm glad you thought it was so hot, and again, I have to thank you for the amazing banner to go with it! And yes, Eddie-by is pretty generous in this, isn't he? How many men do you know who would lick up their own ejaculation to give their girl pleasure? Well, I guess some people are into that sorta thing, lol. ;)
Anyway, again, glad you liked it!
Reviewer: cherforty (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 12:00 AM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Reciprocation
that was hot. i could totally see Edward sitting in his car, internally freaking out because he's about to get something he "wants but can't have." that poor jacket. :) good job
Author's Response: Lol - thanks, I'm so glad you liked it! ;)
Reviewer: Powered by 23 Kicks (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
Ew-lah-LAH! Holy cow in the pasture, did I EVER have a great time reading this. I am embarrassingly aroused now.
You did GOOD.
(Is it hot in here?)
Author's Response: LOL - so glad you enjoyed it! :D
Reviewer: aylah50 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 08:32 AM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
This was awesome! Really well written! I'm sad that it's over!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And I'm a bit sad it's over too, but alas, I have other writing projects I'm currently working on! I invite you to check them out!
Reviewer: jennmo (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
yay!! go bella
Author's Response: LOL. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: jennmo (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
yay!! go bella
Reviewer: agosbac (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
Love it!
Author's Response: I'm so glad!
Reviewer: jemimag (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
great story!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: palenaki (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
Great story...loved their first time together.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 04:49 AM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
This chapter is great. THE BED deservered to be used thoroughly by this two. You kept the core of the relationship between B&E even consummating it.
Author's Response: LOL, the bed did deserve to be used didn't it? SM was such a tease! Anyway, thanks for reading! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
Oh Karri Ann...I just love your stories! This one was a real winner too! Great feelings were depicted in the chapters. As well as a real sense of sexual torture/frustration on both of their parts...but it was all worth it in the end! Great writing!
Author's Response: As always, I'm so glad you enjoy my writing, and your comments are very much appreciated! Thank you so much for reading!
Reviewer: cfmom (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:32 PM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
Hooray - imagine my surprise to wake up this morning and find this had been updated!! So excited. Again, I have to laught at the fact that you're saying I helped you dirty it up - you know between the two of us that I'm the vanilla one. ;)
Love, love, loved this finale to your three parter. I thought it was a great way to make that chapter from Eclipse come the climax (haha) we were all wanting.
~Lisa
Author's Response: Did I never respond to this? Oops - I was more behind on my reviews than I'd realized! Anywho, yeah, weird - it's like our brains temporarily got switched, and I was the vamilla one while you were the dirty one! I'll take my dirty mind back, thank you very much! Lol.
You know I love you. ;) Thank you so much for all your help, with all my stories!
Reviewer: katstrat (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
I absolutely enjoyed this story! ;-) You really didn't need to be concerned about it being too "vanilla"... I think you pictured their first time in a great way: It was very sweet and emotional but also really, really hot...
Author's Response: Lol, well, trust me when I say the third chapter was very vanilla - at least in comparison with the first two - until cfmom got a hold of it! Anyway, I'm so glad you enjoyed it so much! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Mutual Satisfaction
A+
Author's Response: Thanks!
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