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Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Reciprocation
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Reciprocation
Wow!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Reciprocation
Wow, that was really hot! I think you captured Edward's angsty feelings about sex perfectly. Poor guy. And I felt even worse for Bella, who for most of the chapter felt like Edward was rejecting her. The BJ in the car was very sexy though, and I liked how you had Edward rip through his jacket. That seems like a realistic outlet for his, um. biting urges, lol!
xoxo Sarah
Author's Response: Thanks, Sarah! I'm so glad you thought my character portrayals were so realistic! :D
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Reciprocation
This is quite the hot little story. I love that this story is focused in Twilight verse, I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it so much, and the third installment is coming! ;)
Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Reciprocation
wow, very good, very... i dont even know. I love that you let edward give into what he wanted and then be have like stephenie meyer's edward and break away. great job, can't wait for the rest!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! :D
Reviewer: SassenachWench (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Reciprocation
Awesome story. Love your dialogue and descriptive abilities. Great tension.
Third chapter? Please? :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! And the third chap is coming! :D
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Reciprocation
OMG! That was very helpful. ; ) I have to tell you though, when I finished this chapter and came down and saw that there was no "next", I thought I was cry! *g* Great writing. Hurry!
Joan
Author's Response: LOL - I'm so sorry to have disappointed you! Rest assured that the third and final chap is about halfway complete! ;)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 05:44 AM · On: The Monster and the Man
Great story
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 03:37 AM · On: Reciprocation
VERY HOT!!!!!!AND, REALLY, CLOSER TO WHAT A 17YR OLD WOULD DO!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL, I'm glad you thought so! ;)
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 02:53 AM · On: Reciprocation
love it.....
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 02:28 AM · On: Reciprocation
I do think Bella would have been this bold when she started desiring a physical relationship with Edward. I love this story and can't wait for your final installment.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I like to think so too! ;)
Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 02:24 AM · On: Reciprocation
I think you do a good job with your Bella-she's not a brazen hussy, but a mixture of shy and horny that seems exactly right!
Jill
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Jill! I'm glad you think I got her right! :D
Reviewer: AshLove (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 01:55 AM · On: Reciprocation
The first two parts were wonderful! Can't wait for the third!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 01:23 AM · On: Reciprocation
NIce
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Reciprocation
Great story. Yeah, lets see how Edward can resist.
Author's Response: LOL. Yeah, I have a feeling my Bella will be a bit more persuasive than SM's Bella! ;)
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Reciprocation
I hope Bella gets her way in the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Me too! Lol. ;) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Reciprocation
interesting. Keep it up:)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: cfmom (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Reciprocation
Woo - hoo. It's up and it's still hot! Poor Bella though - now she has to go into school ridiculously aroused. Shame on him for leaving her in that kind of state.... lol
Loved it!
~Lisa
Author's Response: LOL - I know, right?? Thanks, Lisa! So glad you liked it! :D
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Reciprocation
Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: justjo (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Reciprocation
Oh, I would have gone with it! I bet she would too, really, if she hadn't been bound by the constraints of Mormonism...
Author's Response: Lol, well, there's also her younger audience to consider. But yes, I find the lack of sex in her writing to be frustrating. ;)
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Reciprocation
wow !!! Thanks for sharing :D
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it! ;)
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Reciprocation
He was a fallen angel, descended from heaven with severed wings. what a sad and lovely image. the other images, i must say, not sad but quite, uh, lovely.
Author's Response: LOL - thank you so much!
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 02:52 PM · On: The Monster and the Man
well i certainly hope that you didn't receive any negative reviews - you warned your readers. i thought you did an amazing with job with a "touchy" subject, one that i think a lot of readers were curious about, but won't admit.
Author's Response: Actually, all the comments I've received for this fic have been overwhelmingly positive! Thanks so much for reading! ;)
Reviewer: peygan (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Reciprocation
Very nice beginning...
Author's Response: Thanks! And a very nice ending is coming soon! ;)
Reviewer: littlemissy1503 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Reciprocation
holy cow...way to go.
Author's Response: Thanks!
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