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Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 1

Yea, great beginning to the new story.  I'm excited.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'm loving this sequel!  But Edward needs to let both Bella and Carlisle know about his nightmares.  She deserves to be allowed to help him, like he helped her.



Author's Response:

Yes, Edward does need to open up to both Carlisle and Bella.  He is rather stubborn though, so don't expect any cooperation from him in the near future.

I'm so glad you liked the first chapter.

Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

i have to admit i skipped the sex scene but the rest was really cute! i loved the "Mrs. Edward Cullen" thing and how Bella isn't phased by the whole James thing!



Author's Response:

I can't promise how many sex scenes there will be in the future.  Edward is in control of this story and he more than proved that with this first chapter.  I had no intention of going into his past, but he insisted.  I thought Bella took control of the first story quite a bit, but I am totally amazed at where this first chapter went.  I'm anxious to see where the rest of the story goes.

Honestly, this is the first time in years that Bella has felt relief.  James has made her life a living hell and she finally can relax.  I think that is the one thing a lot of people overlook.  She has lived through the worst trauma he offered and dealt with it, so what happened actually set her free.

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review.

Reviewer: chastity19 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

aww i love your stories.. i had a problem like this except with an ex boyfriend.. so ur storie reminf me of me and my love.. thanxs for writing about stuff that actually happens and that even if it horrible you can get thru it... so keep writing as much as possible and know i heart u and ur stories lol!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like them.  It makes me happy that they are believable.  I tried my best to keep it as real as possible.  I'm sorry about your ex.  I want to show that it is possible to have some of the worst things imaginable happen and still be able to move on with your life and be functional.  That is the hardest thing to do in a tragedy but definitely possible.

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

SQUEAL!

LOUD HIGH PITCHED FAN GIRL SQUEALS!!!

AWESOME chapter hes goingto make her dreams come true deep breath sigh awww LOL  Looking forward to the next chapter SQUEAL  LMAO!



Author's Response:

I totally love fan gril squeals!  Of course I'm usally the one squealing.

I'm so glad you liked the chapter.  This story is going to focus a lot on their relationship.  There will be a little suspense in there, but this will mostly be a love story.  Thanks so much for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

Quite the twist to have him having the nightmares instead of her.

Veryyyyyy interesting.....as the good Dr. Freud might say.

Loved  My Sarificed, looking forward to this story in his terms.



Author's Response:

Hehe.  I'm so glad you liked it.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: sambois (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

aww that is sweet and I am glad you are continuing this story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved My Sacrifice so much so this one will definitely be added to my list of favorited stories! I've seen the same concept that was in that story many times and I think it is a testament to your writing that it was so well received...i.e. you're a brilliant writer! This story is starting out great. I love the role reversal (Edward having nightmares and not Bella as is usual in most fics) and her dreams. I can't wait until he pops the question. I wasn't expecting the sequel to be posted so soon so it was a pleasant surprise to find this!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I'm so glad you liked My Sacrifice so much.  I debated for quite a while on doing this one in Bella or Edward's POV.  Birdee suggested Edward since he was the one struggling now.  Poor Bella needed a break from her drama.  It's time for Edward's story.

I have so many ideas floating in my head for this story that I just had to get them out.

Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 1

Fantastic chapter hon! I loved 'My Sacrifice' and I can tell this is going to be another wonderful story!

Your writing has really gotten more rich and complex - its obvious you have a talent and that talent keeps growing. This chapter really reflects all that you have learned over the course of your first story. Its so much fun to watch that happen and to enjoy the results. Thanks so much for sharing your stories and your writing talent! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  That was my initial goal when I started writing.  My little brother challenged me to write and I decided this was a good way to improve.  It means a lot that my improvement shows.

Reviewer: kelsey_jim (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

I am so glad that you did a sequel. This was so good.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 1

So glad that you are continuing with EPOV!  Really good start.  I wonder how he will deal with his nightmares!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I'm glad you like Edward's POV.

Reviewer: Twilight_fan_girl (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

come on im having a must have more moment. weres all the violence, the revenggggeeee! surley victoria would like a swing at bella. no wait if you didi do that i'd probably hate you. kidding but seriously. what about the gossip??? what ever will the other students think? actually they might not gossip out of fear of being brutaly murdered hm.....

well what ever you do please do it quickly!!! i need another chapter!!!!! by the way my sacrifice was awsume and you totally rock for writing it oh and more emmet, yes defo more emmet. :D luv ya

xoxo



Author's Response:

LOL.  The next chapter will include going back to classes.  There is one week of classes and then finals left in the semester.  There will definitely be reactions from the students.

Thank you so much.  I'm so glad you liked "My Sacrifice".  I love Emmett and plan on having more of his comic relief.  Since this is in Edward's POV there will be more of the Cullens.  Edward is a bit more difficult to write, but I'm hoping to be able to stick with my weekly updates on the weekend.

Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 1

Not complaining about the early marriage. My parents were together for less than 9 months before they got married, and were together for only a year, total - dating and marriage combined, before I was born. And they've been together for 28 years. So I know it does work for some people.

Hmmmm as for Edward's issues, methinks he and Bella need to talk both together and with a therapist before he even pops the question. Otherwise it's going to be strained. But that's just my suggestion. May I suggest that the person to be the therapist be Angela or Emily?



Author's Response:

I didn't think you were complaining.  I just wanted to let you know where I was coming from.  That is awesome that your parents have been together for 28 years.  I'm looking forward to that.

Edward and Bella definitely need to talk.  It would make her feel a lot better knowing that he hasn't lived this perfect little life.

Reviewer: stephdc (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 1

oh i'm so glad you've decided to do a sequel!  Can't wait to get more into the story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  I have so many ideas in my head and can't wait to get them all written out.

Reviewer: Twilightlover4ever (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

Awwww im sooooo glad u decided to do a sequeal....its reallly ...um..wow

I cant wait for more ......



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 1

Ok. So I am going to be really honest and please don't judge me BUTTTT-I totally squealed like a little fangirl when I saw that you updated. I think "My Sacrifice" was in the top 3 of my all time favorite fan fics and I can tell this one is going to be JUST as good =D 

This chapter was amazing (cue me favoriting it as soon as I'm done with this review) and I know it's only going to get better. It's a little bit weird that Bella is sleeping so soundly while Edward is having the nightmares =[ I'm so glad he saved her. He never would've forgiven himself if something had happened to her. 

I hope he proposes. I know they're young but I hope he does =] Idk if Edward's family was wealthy but he could probably support them if they were. Did I mention this chapter was amazing? 

I loved Emmett's teasing =] 

More REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY soon. Please? 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I love that you squealed.  I do that quite a lot over fanfiction too.

Bella has had a huge weight lifted off her shoulders with James dead.  Of course, who wouldn't sleep soundly in Edward's arms?  Edward had to save her.  I coudlnt' do that to him.

We will learn more about Edward's family in future chapters.  Bella doesn't know antying about his birth parents and he will have to give her all the details.

Emmett's teasing brings me such joy.

Edward is very difficult to write, but I hope to be able to stick to updating once a week.

Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow! Another great chapter. Thanks for taking the advice of your audience and writing a sequel.

And damn. Poor Edward, he really needs to talk to someone about his nightmares. They are going to hurt more than help the relationship. Especially when Bella finds out about them and what they are about. Knowing her, she'll feel guilty as hell and try to push it away.

And marriage? this early? OMG! Bella's going to flip, and though she'll say yes, she'll probably ask for a long engagement, at least until Edward graduates with his bachelor's degree.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.

Edward has a lot of issues to deal with that have been burried for a while now.  You know our Bella, if she can find a way to make it her fault she will.

The whole marriage thing really doesn't seem that fast to me.  I started dating my husband in February, we were engaged in March, and married in August.  We have been happily married for 14 1/2 years.  I know it doesn't always work that way for everyone.

Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 1

Thank you for the sequel :) It makes me happy!



Author's Response:

You are more than welcome.  When you are happy, then I am happy.  Thanks so much for reviewing.

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