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Reviewer: twilight_pasychoe (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

That's pretty good. Awesome one-liners!!! :)

Reviewer: EdwardsBrand (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very good.  To short though!  I think you should add on to this one!  Emmette's got to have his turn too!

Reviewer: luv_edward_jasper_emmett (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez write a second chapter

Reviewer: imloki (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

i know you said it's a one shot but please more i mean you had me at a

naked emmett DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING

Reviewer: porche911turbo (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

in ur other story u wanted to know if u shood contiue this one or kepp it as a one shot

well i say keep the story chapters comming this could get interesting

Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really really liked this.  It was fun and sexy and I kinda wanted more! 

Manda

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

MORE!!!!!  Will you please continue the story??  I loved it!!!!

Reviewer: oh that little shinny volvo (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

omg i love it make it a story and i will read it like crazy!!

Reviewer: oh that little shinny volvo (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

oh my gosh that last line was soo funny

Reviewer: seth_is_my_pup (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

this was great! I love a Family Secret and now this! please write more. the whose line is it anyway is a really great touch

Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was awesome.  Very enjoyable read, and I chuckled quite a few times!

Reviewer: vampirebyheart (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

you need to continue this story its awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please write more fast

Reviewer: Mrs Jasper Hale (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

Really good!  Are you sure you don't want to continue with this. I think you have an excellent story on your hands. I would like to read more!

Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

You should definitely add more chapters. This story is too good to end as a one shot! I feel like I am missing something, like there is still so much left to the story. :)

Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 1

Guh. I wish there was even more to this story. I wish I could play voyeur and watch the whole thing play out, on and on. I really enjoy your writing, love.

 

~Mia

Reviewer: laurenaked (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 1

I really liked it and think you should write more of this story.  It definitely ended with room for more.

I didn't know they still had the rodeo at the Astrodome, I thought it was at Reliant Park.. but then, it's been at least 5 years since I've been to HLSR.  I'm from Houston though, so it was neat to read a story set there :)

XOXO
Lauren

Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2009 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

LOVELY twist that Edward & Rosalie are the couple - both are kind of uptight, aren't they?!  Alice and her infectious enthusiasm is a prefect match for Emmett.

One complaint, does this HAVE to be a one-shot?!?!?  Can't we get some more???

Reviewer: lily_zen (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

ZOMG. That was so feefing awesome and so incredibly hot! Loved it! ^-^

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

Awesome! I love Bella with Alice, and I love A Family Secret too :)

Reviewer: jenn8581 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

LOL write more please! Hilarious story!

Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting twist - too bad Emmett was so late for the party!

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