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Reviewer: kyndria15221 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2011 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

i love this story and your other one they are wonderful great and fun as all hell keep it up i would love more of this story but i understand hope this finds you well


Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2011 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very cute.

Reviewer: Kandykanegirl34566 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

You should turn this into a short story. It was awesome. 

Reviewer: Newydd (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

More, more, more! Pretty please with naked Jasper on top? And if Jacob could make an appearance you'd make my day!!!

Reviewer: buzzj (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

Absolutely yumminess. Love cowboy Jasper stories! Wouldn't be sad if you ever decided to add more chapters...

Reviewer: faeries_aerrow (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

lol you should continue this story

Reviewer: faeries_aerrow (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

lol you should continue this story

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hehe, this was cute. It was hott, and I enjoyed it. Great job hun!

Reviewer: Artemisia (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

I think I've read this story six or seven times at this point and each time, I wish there was more.

Reviewer: ccoffman1 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 1

definitely a good story. I wish that it was a bit longer though. It would be nice if it was at least a small story (or series).

Reviewer: ambersky (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 1

i like this story if u can keep going with it would be good

ur writing makes me want to go back to being with girls again lol very sexy :)

Reviewer: Wanda W (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

I loved it and found it to be a really fun glimpse into a story I'd sure like to see more of as it has so much potential left to explore.



Reviewer: BEEternity (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

I like your style!

Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

OMG OMG OMG! Don't stop now. This has to have more. GRRRR. Need it.

Reviewer: Nade Brown (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

very interstiny, funny and absolutely sexy.
i hope ur werkin on di next chapter.
lookin very foward to it.=]

Reviewer: xxedwardforlifexx (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

i love the ending. :D the plot's sooo interesting. keep it going! i need more after this chapter! I read a Family Secret and i knoww this story's gonna be great. keep it going!

Reviewer: --Jakes-Girl-- (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

Ha ha ha!!!!! If I went home with a guy & he said "Do you want to stay the night? My mom makes amazing breakfasts!" I don't even know what I would do!!

That was an amazing entry to a very creative challenge.. hehehe

Lovin it - can't wait to read more of your work! (This is my 2nd story of yours :D )

Reviewer: cass23 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

make it longer!!!!

Reviewer: Minoy (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great story but it has to be MORE than a one shot!!  Give it to me sweetheart!

Reviewer: cerius (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

oh it was so good....

i luv this one soo much it is definitely going on both my fav authors and fav stories lists.

if u every wanted 2 i would be more then happy to give you my opinion on you stuff...

i just loved the way you wrote the whole story and the entire piece is free of grammer and spelling errors( i think it is wasn't looking to much paying more attention to the story itself...LOL)

hope to read more of your stuff

cerius or ceri for short

Reviewer: Aspen (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

Smokin' hot.  Are we getting a sequel with some Emmett action? Oh please oh please oh please?  I'm dying to see Emmett/Jasper.

Reviewer: Kellansgirl123 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

HAHAHAHA. Sweet story!! I wouldn't be dissapoined if you continued it! *waggles eye-browns*

Reviewer: sweetblood1145 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

NO way you can leave this as a oneshot.  The would Emmett thing and what the psychic said so many unanswered questions...... we need moore.

Reviewer: moonbeamdreaming (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

wow!!!  More please!!!!

Reviewer: neverland22 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'd love to see this continued. It's awesome.

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