Reviewer: bella_edward05 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 4 - The Ball - Family, Friends, Goodbyes, New Beginnings, & Fights -
This is getting soo good. Personally i like your writing i havent found anything wrong. I just see a great story that keeps on getting better.
Reviewer: mellovesyou (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 4 - The Ball - Family, Friends, Goodbyes, New Beginnings, & Fights -
oh god edward is disgusting.. at first when you hear is point of view it sounds good, admitting he was bad, but then when i saw his goal, ah he is such an ass. but i love super bella, andd this story.
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Reviewer: Twilight_fan_girl (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 4 - The Ball - Family, Friends, Goodbyes, New Beginnings, & Fights -
xD go carlisle i bet he could pack a punch. loving this bella she's like super cool!!! and connections near the queen? Sweet! hating this edward though they can not get together! he doesn't deserve her hell he's worse than lauren. okay that was a lie but it's a close tie. you totally rock! write more or i may have to inflict bodily harm because i need my fix of this xD ;)
love ya! xo
Reviewer: Crista Irene (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hangups, Apologies and Mission Control
Go Esme!! Haha! This story is awesome! Keep it up! I can't wait for the next post :)
Reviewer: peanutmachiela (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hangups, Apologies and Mission Control
I love it!!!! I can't wait to read more! Lauren needs to vanish and I want to see all the Cullen kids become truely jealous at the ball.... maybe all the celebrities should be all over her and Lauren make an ass out of herself at the ball.... I don't know! It's your story and its awesome! keep up the good work!!!
Reviewer: PawntoQueen (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hangups, Apologies and Mission Control
Go Esme!! Sure did put Lauren in her place.
&& Bella is just perfect!
Reviewer: Autumn Dawn (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hangups, Apologies and Mission Control
Oh my goodness, I love this story please hurry up with the next chapter. Also, GO ESME!
Reviewer: Mrs Jasper Hale (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hangups, Apologies and Mission Control
This is one fantastic story. I am in awe of your writting. It is freaking fantastic. Can't wait for the next chapter and I am so glad that ESME was the one to tell Lauren off.
Reviewer: Twilight_fan_girl (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hangups, Apologies and Mission Control
Omg! Go esme and bella!!!! write more more more more please.
write more write more write mooooore...pweaseeee *looks cute* :D
you rock! xoxo
Reviewer: Lblinky_Winky (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hangups, Apologies and Mission Control
I really love this story......very well written. Big thumbs up from me!! hehe.....please dont take too long posting the next chapter cant wait to read it!:)
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hangups, Apologies and Mission Control
I really like the story, but the POVs seem a little awkward, for example "we...", "...us" just doesn't sound as good as a single person point of view.
Reviewer: sherilynn (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hangups, Apologies and Mission Control
Go Esme!! This is one of my new fav s tories..
Reviewer: lisa54aa (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hangups, Apologies and Mission Control
OH please keep writing.....i am always a bit sad when I get to the end. I can't wait for Edward to dump Lauren and am waiting with baited breath when he tries to make a move towards Bella.
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hangups, Apologies and Mission Control
Way to go Esme! Never have cared for Lauren much, and in the story it is 10 fold! And this Bella....I really like her with so much confidence. I'm still out on Edward, just waiting for him to make the right moves. And Tanya in the mother mode is real easy to take!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hangups, Apologies and Mission Control
Yeah! Go Esme!
Reviewer: PawntoQueen (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Starting over
Ugh Lauren!? Make Bella put her in her place. And then Edward can get on his knees and beg Balla to pay attention to him.
Love the story! Update soon please
Reviewer: twilightlover96 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Starting over
THIS IS UCH A SWEET STORY, UPDATE SOON!
Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Starting over
awesome awesome awesome! i love it!!! plz update soon!
Reviewer: Autumn Dawn (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Starting over
Please hurry with the next chapter
Reviewer: Autumn Dawn (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Starting over
Please hurry with the next chapter
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Starting over
:)
Reviewer: Twilight_fan_girl (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Starting over
Ha in your face bitches! you should of got bella to give them pay back by lets say....eddie facys her and she turns him down and he luks like an ass? but then she gotta get with him in the end ooooo spill wine on lauren pleassseeee pretty please with sugar on to? :D
you rock xoxo
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 1
Looks like a promising start. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: lisa54aa (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 1
Keep it coming! I like the setup and how you have made Bella into a woman who can stand on her own.
Reviewer: MonCherie (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love so far and I wants more :)
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