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Reviews For Unlikely Savior
Reviewer: leeseeq (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 01:00 PM · On: one-shot

For me, this was much more true to life than any of the other versions I've read.  This seems much more in character for Edward to me, it really resonated with me.  I loved it and I'm so glad you wrote it. 

Reviewer: twilightgirl98 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 05:12 PM · On: one-shot

This was really good. I always questioned what went on during that time. You are a really good writer. ;-)

Reviewer: rockchick134 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 03:04 AM · On: one-shot

Aw, that was really sweet the way Edward was in the end...

As much as i hate Breaking Dawn i would have loved to see a scene like this written into it...

X

asha

Reviewer: corelee (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 07:10 AM · On: one-shot

cool. this was around my favorite part in the book.



Author's Response:

me, too - I just REALLY wanted to be inside Edward's bed (uh, I mean, head)....to know the thoughts going through his mind when he was the 'burning man'.  I always felt like, deep down, he wished things could be different with the baby.

 

Reviewer: georgiagirl (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 08:15 AM · On: one-shot

that was great, now all you need to do is the rest of the story from EPOV and i will love you forever! hahaha

Reviewer: Carlisle060 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 06:10 AM · On: one-shot

awwww :)

but the thing that happened with rosalie was so sudden and random that I think it was well written :)

UPDATE ASAP!!!!!
(if there is more to the story...)

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:58 PM · On: one-shot

so i know how obvious this is, but it never, ever, occured to me that carlisle was planning on aborting his own grandchild.

and when bella pleads with edward, just heartbreaking, not to mention exactly what i would expect her to do.

Reviewer: Elisabethe (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:00 PM · On: one-shot

Spectacular!! This is exactly how I imagined the leading up to Bella keeping their child!

Reviewer: islandgirl (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 04:59 PM · On: one-shot

I really enjoyed your story!! I would love to read more, maybe a different story than BD - I would love to see a different story with Bella and Edward regarding the pregnancy.



Author's Response:

thank you so much - I plan to do a story from Edward's POV when he hears Renesmee from the womb......I will let you know when it is finished!  thanks again...

Reviewer: Vamplover (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 08:45 AM · On: one-shot

This is brilliant.  The problem with BD is that everything happens so quickly and there isn't nearly enough analysis of situtations and feelings - it's all left to the imagination and with jacob taking over the narrative you feel really distanced from Bella in her last month as a human.  It's like she undergoes another transformation (ill, protective pregnant woman) before becoming becoming a vampire and you're just not ready for it.

I'd love you to write some more fillers for this section of BD - how about Jacob's narrative from Bella or Edwards POV?



Author's Response:

I agree about Jacob taking over - I planned to stay up all night and read the book, and then when I turned the page and saw "Jacob", I threw the book down and turned off the light!  I would much prefer Edward's POV!

 

Thanks for your great review!  Another reader suggested I write Edward's POV when he hears Renesmee from Bella's womb for the first time - what is going through his mind as he falls in love with his child.

 

So I think I might!  Hopefully I can start that project soon.......

 

thanks again!

Reviewer: Imagine (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 10:05 AM · On: one-shot

AMAZING JOB!! totally captured the moment.



Author's Response:

thank you so much!  I was so afraid of reviews, but the response has been great!

 

thanks again!

Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 08:42 AM · On: one-shot

Great story - I really like the detail



Author's Response:

thank you so much!  I love getting reviews - I was afraid of them at first, but so far they have been positive!

 

thanks again!

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:53 PM · On: one-shot

Oh, I had hoped for this whitout knowing it. And it is so belivable, things could well have gone this way. Thank you

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 08:14 PM · On: one-shot

You don't know how disappointed I am that this is complete. I was sooo hoping to read more. Please change your mind and continue, maybe a shot at the moment Edward hears Renessmee's thoughts in Bella's womb? Your writing is wonderful. and I can just imagine the magic you'd wield with this scene.

BRAVO!

Author's Response:

thank you thank you thank you!  I was so afraid of reviews - but yours is so sweet!  Thanks for the suggestion for another story....I really think I will write about that.  I wasn't sure if I would do anything else - this was just something I felt compelled to do and am so glad I did.  I loved being in Edward's head - he is so passionate and perfect. 

 

thanks again - you made me smile really really big!

Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 06:30 PM · On: one-shot

This was really good.  You did a great job of showing edward's emotion throughout this.  Especially esme and carlisle.  I cant even desribe how perfect this was...so in synch with the book.  Love it!!!



Author's Response:

thank you so much!  I was so afraid of reviews - but so far they have all been very positive!  Makes me want to write more!

Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 06:01 PM · On: one-shot

I'm so glad you took this on.  This is such an interesting time period and I wish we had more insight into the dialogue that went on behind the scenes.  Bravo!  Love it!  Edward is tender and in character - but brave and protective of Bella.  Loved it! 

Doing more???



Author's Response:

thank you so much!  I was so afraid of reviews -

 

as far as doing more, another reader thougtht I should do a story from Edward's POV when he reads Renesmee's mind from the womb......so I think I will!

 

again, thanks for the great feedback!  It makes me high on life!

Reviewer: Jenbarn76 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 05:25 PM · On: one-shot

This is written very well.  Dialogue was very good and seemed like the real thing.  I would love you to write more from Edward's POV.

 

Jen



Author's Response:

thank you so much!  Another reader suggested I write a story from Edward's POV when he reads Renesmee's mind from the womb.....I'm seriously considering it!

 

thanks again for the great review!

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