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Reviewer: onnersmom (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Broken Hearts and Torn up Letters, Girl You Just Can't Dance Forever
WOW! i love it! never thought about an edward and jacob story but i actually like it!!! keep going!
Reviewer: Twilightlvr (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Meeting the Cullens
Ok, I'm going to be honest here. I really have no problem with slash. But what I do have a problem with is how callous Edward seems to be in this story. I understand imprinting and finding your true love and your soul mate. But within a day he totally replaced Bella with Jacob? After all they've been through he just so quickly tossed Bella's affection aside. And what of the family? They also so readily accept Jacob and find Bella so easily replaced with him? And Edward thinking his song for Jacob is so much sweeter than the one for Bella, I'm sorry, it just feels mean. Again, as I said I don't have any problem with slash, but it feels like there should have been more of a transition. I guess what I'm getting at is I would have liked to see him struggle with this a bit more and not so readily throw Bella away so quickly like she was nothing. Like I said, it just seems like he's acting so heartless towards her.
Reviewer: Nimoko (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Broken Hearts and Torn up Letters, Girl You Just Can't Dance Forever
Very interesting story! Your writing is very captivating, and the subject matter is one that I am always scrounging for more fics about. I do believe that Jacob and Edward would make an interesting couple.
I can't wait to see where you take this story!
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