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Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 04:08 AM · On: I Stand Corrected

Great chapter. Hope Edward and Jasper find a way to crack the code soon. What is Jacob up to? Where is he going? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Reviewer: noni LG (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 01:01 AM · On: Merman's Lullaby

hmmmm lucky Jasper was smart enough to turn music to muffle "other sound" down... =P cant imagine how Bella blushed madly for being caught that way *chuckling*

Reviewer: noni LG (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 11:33 PM · On: Charmer

hahaha lovely!!! the 'seems' cold hearted Edward suddenly turned hot & heavy... ;p well some dreams indeed came true..

Reviewer: sprinkles (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 05:52 PM · On: I Stand Corrected

balancing chemistry equations and translating spanish verbs



Author's Response:

Ohh, those are good ones. I find fishing mind-numbing. or political television. :)

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 04:00 PM · On: I Stand Corrected

I was just thinking of this fic the other day and I'm so happy that you updated. :) I hope that they are able to stay together after everything gets resolved. I'm getting very curious as to what jake is up to.



Author's Response:

Everyone's curious about Jake. All will be revealed, I promise. ;)

 

Thanks for reading! :D

Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 12:50 PM · On: I Stand Corrected

Jake does seem a little a suspicious. I'm curious about what he's hiding. The file is definitely important in solving this mystery and now the Volturi are involved. Great chapter! I was so excited to see this story update.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for sticking with me! :)

Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 04:51 AM · On: I Stand Corrected

I was happy to see the update.  Glad to know you are not going to abandon the story. 

Reviewer: miah wolfe (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Pale Horses Believe

ahb.. ghr... weh... i am at a loss for words. aaaaaack!



Author's Response:

Lol. That's a good thing, I guess? I hope that means you liked it! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Pale Horses Believe

I'm so happy you got to update! Good chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: ddiva (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Pale Horses Believe

You had better tie a rope around that muse and lock her up tight! I found your story this afternoon and literally devoured it in one sitting. I'm totally hooked and begging for more! I love everything about this story from the plot to the characters and can't wait to see where you are taking it. i'm not real good at being patient so I hope you'll take pity on me and update soon.:P

oh and I added you to my favorites so I won't miss those lovely updates!



Author's Response:

I'd love to lock the muse up and make her work 24/7, since I miss writing like I used to, but she's a mean bitch. lol. I'm quite flattered you liked it so much to read it all in one sitting, that gives me the warm fuzzies.

 

I hope I don't take as long with the next update, but things are happening in the next couple of months that might delay me. :( I want to try to get something done over the holidays, though, so don't fret! Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Pale Horses Believe

Glad you updated.  I still love your story and want you to finish. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it, and I'm trying really hard to keep going. I don't plan to ever abandon, but I can't say I can have regular updates either. :) Thanks so much!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Pale Horses Believe

Great chapter. I'm glad Bella went back to her old home and faced some of those bad memories. Hope Edward and Jasper can crack the code quickly and figure out what got Charlie and Renee killed. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

I've never forgotten my mum's birthday and suprise shouldn't be just one colour. That would be ruining the suprise :)



Author's Response:

I can't say surprise would be any one color either, and maybe it's never the same color twice. Depends on the surprise, yes? lol.

 

I'll try my best to update as soon as I can, but RL is going to be killer soon, so it all depends. I'm pushing to get something done during the holidays. No guarantees. :D

Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Pale Horses Believe

You're back! Long time no seen so thanks for the update.

So the plot took a leap forward with Bella finding the file. I'm a great fan of Tolkien myself, but I've not heard about that book before, sounds interesting. (In my opinion The Two Towers and The Return of the King are the two best movies ever made, and Viggo Mortensen as Aragorn makes me droole every time, lol!) It will be interesting to see Edward and Bella decode Charlie's notes.

And why do I have the feeling that Pete isn't quite the good guy he seems to be...



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the update! I felt so bad for taking so long.

Yeah, I became a giant nerd when the movies came out and read the books and managed to find that book about the languages he used and made up for the stories, so I used a bit of that in the story. We'll see what B/E decode. :) Aragorn was pretty tasty looking in the movies. ;)

Reviewer: LadyTx (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Merman's Lullaby

See, I'm telling you that Pete is not one of the good guys. But AWE... Edward and Bella. They are so cute together!

Author's Response:

Haha, yeah, cute is what I was going for. ;) I'm glad you liked the story so far and the next chapter is off to mah beta! Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: LadyTx (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 05:22 PM · On: The Fear You Won't Fall

I could swear in an earlier chapter she told Jasper & Edward she had some work stuff of her Dad's. Was she intentionally lying to Pete?

Reviewer: LadyTx (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Charmer

Wow! What a kiss! I'm glad it didn't end with one of them running off saying what a mistake it was...

Reviewer: LadyTx (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Gives You Hell

Wow! We're only in chapter 6 and they are already having trouble keeping their hands to themselves! LOL!

Reviewer: LadyTx (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 04:20 PM · On: No Surprises

Jacob must have arrived!

Reviewer: LadyTx (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Nice To Meet You

That would be awful to have to deal with 2 bodyguards invading your privacy. Here you are used to living all alone (and preferably so) and all of a sudden you have people move in your home and one of them is attached at the hip.

Reviewer: LadyTx (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Stronger

Only 16 reviews??? Well now, we'll have to fix that! Good story. I'm curious to see if Bella remembers Edward from high school.

Reviewer: Lespin01 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Gives You Hell

Jacob is behind it!!!!!!! Case closed!!!!!!!!! I don't like Jacob very much. I always thought of him as a cocky jackass.

Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Merman's Lullaby

Please update soon.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 12:23 AM · On: Merman's Lullaby

Great chapter. Glad Bella met Alice and I liked the E/B interaction. What's in the file?

When I was little, my dad worked in real estate and accomodation so we spent our weekends driving all over the country, from state to state, checking out potential homes and places to build hotels. The car rides were always fun and some of the places we went were really beautiful tourist locations.

Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the chapter. We'll find out more about the file next chapter. :)

Oh that sounds like awesome times from when you were a kid! I love car rides.

Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Merman's Lullaby

That was an incredibly hot lemon!  *fans self*  And very sweet, really.  I love these two.  Glad to see Alice make an appearance.   I still think Pete's up to no good.  Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Hahah! I'm glad you liked it! I was a little nervous for the lemon bit, but everyone seems to like it, so I guess I didn't do too badly. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: MrsCullen30 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Merman's Lullaby

Keep going! I'm going to need a cold shower after that chapter! :)

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! I was a little nervous for that part, but everyone like it. :) Thanks for reading!

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