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Reviewer: instantkarmagirl (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 14
Finally they did it! Geez!
And it was perfect in an imperfect way...but the writing of it, the telling of it was perfect!
See ya next chapter.
Reviewer: instantkarmagirl (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 8
Poor Bella and her commitment issues. And yay Jasper. What great use of Jasper! I love his line about Edward saying her name so much, it's totally something that others would pick up on but that Bella would pay no attention to.
She's going to chicken out, isn't she?? On to the next chapter...
Wait, have I told you that i love this story?
Author's Response: Haha, yes you have.
And that line is one of my faves too! Thanks for reading :)
Reviewer: instantkarmagirl (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 5
Okay, again, I love it. You think that a Christmas fic is going to be all hearts and flowers and ribbons and then you give me ANGST and I adore you for it.
I love the development and how Edward and Bella don't really have to hide it because EVERYONE already knows (except stupid Tanya) and truthfully, I like the B/E relationship here becuase it's casual, people who've known each other from birth but who have deep unresolved issues/feelings.
I am enjoying this very, very much.
Reviewer: instantkarmagirl (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 4
I'm sorry, I just said it like five minutes ago, but I LOVE this story. I promise I'll be more detailed soon.
Reviewer: instantkarmagirl (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 2
OMG, I totally love this story!
Reviewer: instantkarmagirl (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 04:52 AM · On: prologue
I really like this prologue...even if it ended here, it was pretty fulfilling, in an oddly strange way, but of course, I'm excite to proceed to chapter 1.
Awkward teenagers. :)
Reviewer: Noelani (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 15
oh my goodness! that was fricken great!!!! i'm sad it's over but it ended well and made me feel complete. some stories have lame arse endings, but your's was just right. love you and love this story. great work!
Author's Response: thank you x
Reviewer: hobardi (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 15
Thanks for the ending! I've loved reading this story, even though (or because) Bella was such an idiot for most of the beginning... ;) Both Bella and Edward were great characters, and their chemistry palpable.
Author's Response: thanks for reading :)
Reviewer: Lozz_5159 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 15
Nooo...I never wanted it to end.
But hey, what about this?
I Can’t Live Without You
You defy everything that makes me whole.
A slender touch,
I know I’m home.
Once a year, you come to me,
Whole again,
So I can see.
You make me whole,
You know you do,
You shout at me, I don’t hate you.
There is this feeling,
Deep inside,
I can’t tell you.
I have to hide.
Promise me, you feel it too,
A slender touch,
I need you.
And yet, we’re here.
Back to square one,
I can’t help it.
My life’s undone.
You do this to me, you know you do.
I can’t help what I feel for you.
Tell me that you feel it too,
You know I can’t live without you.
Bella you’re mine,
The perfect design,
You’re pale white skin,
To me, you shine.
I don’t want her,
My conscience tore,
I look at you,
My heart is sore.
Tell me that you feel it too,
I can’t live without you.
You do this to me, you know you do.
I can’t live without you.
I know I’m weary,
A little unsure.
Show me that your love is pure.
Help me prove my love is real,
One sweet kiss is the perfect seal.
My heart beats fast,
Visions of memories past.
I’m stuck on you,
My heart is too.
You do this to me,
You know you do.
There’s no way I can live without you.
I don't know if Edward's handwriting comes out on this but i wrotte it a while ago and it fits perfectly with your story i think :)
What do you think?Awesome story i l read it in two days and i adored it.
Take care xoxo
Author's Response: You wrote this?
It's perfect. Fits.
Thank you :)
Reviewer: Marjojo (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 15
Aw, very sweet ending! I did enjoy this fic. It was different in a good way. Thanks for writing it.
Author's Response: thank you :)
Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 15
Good Story!
Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 3
love where this is going
Reviewer: vampgirl138 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 15
Good story!!!
Reviewer: weirdstar007 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 15
AWWW
Reviewer: Nuttyginger (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 15
OMG, what can i say. BLEW ME AWAY. I laughed, i howled, i threw things at my laptop and you made me cry. Not a few tears, buckets of big fat salty ones!. It was funny, and OMG do i love your Bella!
Thank you, thank you,, thank you for writing such amazing stuff and most of all for letting us read it.
OK, its 3am and i am up at 7am.
Nutty
Author's Response: Hehe. I'm glad you enjoyed it
I had a lot of fun writing
Reviewer: ShanShan (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 9
Make her take the freaking bus! Jesus freaking Christ...
Reviewer: my vampire man (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 5
ain't drinking age in the states 21, which means edward and bella wouldn't be in the bar? unless they had fakes.
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 15
That was a kool chapter,....
Reviewer: Kris Butter (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 15
that was good-
i read your whole story today. absolutely loved it. especially about edward screaming bella's name when releasing. that part was hilarious. again- great job.(:
Author's Response: hehe. that part seemed to be reader favourite
Reviewer: kkmay (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 15
oh my fuck that was amazing THANK YOU. I just spent the last 6 hours (give or take) reading prologue and all 15 chapters and it was AWESOME.
I'm so sad to see it over. PLEASE consider writing a sequel/follow-up. maybe some time spent in Paris? I think, if you wanted, you could really go somewhere good with a sequel, cause these two definitely have (and will probably continue to have) plenty of things to work out between them.
wow, again, thank you.
Author's Response: haha. I did contemplate writing a sequel. Maybe sometime in the future, tho I doubt it will be anytime soon.
Thanks for reading :)
Reviewer: spanglemaker (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 15
Wow, I'm sorry I just found your story today when you posted your final chapter, because it was amazing and I'm only reviewing now at the very end. I pretty much ripped through it start to finish. Oh, I stopped to do my job for a while this afternoon! :)
Seriously, this story was fantastic. I love your Bella. Such a screwed up, interesting mess. And I mean that in a good way. And loved their messed up relationship and how they finally managed to sort it out. It felt very honest and real. Love your writing.
Author's Response: Yes it was a pretty screwy path for the two of them...glad you found it interesting - I loved writing her
Reviewer: SuperFrog101 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 10:36 AM · On: prologue
aww cute
Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 15
awwww i sat and read it all today (even snuck in reading it on my iphone at work) =) and it was so wonderful! love it!
Reviewer: Noelani (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 10
haha i like the chapter end notes.. "why took you so long?" that's how locals in hawaii speak sometimes cuz we talk pidgin lyk dat das why.
haha so much for proper english when u hang with friends.. i assume you must know some pidgin especially because you use terms lik ganga and make references like bob. so right on :)
Reviewer: yiotatort (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 15
Yay! I liked! I've been getting frustrated cause the stories I've been reading have started out fairly decent and then start going downhill. Thanks for one I kept liking to the end.
Author's Response: awww, thank you for reading and liking.
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