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Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 03:17 PM · On: The Reality of Broken Fingers
I really like the story please keep it going
Reviewer: onigiri06 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 04:19 AM · On: The Reality of Broken Fingers
I love this! please, please, please for the love of God and for the sake of everyone's sanity, please update!
Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:57 PM · On: The Reality of Broken Fingers
gah, Bella, why did you have to go and faint?!?!
Reviewer: naner26 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:48 PM · On: The Reality of Broken Fingers
yay!! love more, been waiting long time. happy ur continuing
Reviewer: ThatOnePVkid (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 04:24 PM · On: The Reality of Broken Fingers
OMG!!! love this fic soo much.
Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 06:45 PM · On: The Reality of Broken Fingers
I'm so everwhelmed I don't know what to say! This story is uber intense. Please update soon. My curiosity is really getting to me. What the heck is going on?
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 04:06 PM · On: The Reality of Broken Fingers
Oh I hope that at some point I am going to understand. I am so looking forward to that day. As the chemistry that you have put into these characters is astounding and I can't wait to see them together. ;)
Hope your knee is doing better.
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 12:34 PM · On: The Reality of Broken Fingers
Found your story today...and read the three chapters...BUT, as much fun as this is...each one of your A/N started out saying: IT"S BEEN FOREVER...please forgive me...
So, how much of a wait will there be to find out if Bella fainted? Do I hve this correct, the FIRST part comes after this part? Was she changing into something else in that part? Not sure if vampire is what Green eyes is...
Slightly confused, as you can see...although intrigued by what is going on...
Hope that you get the next one up quickly, with no apologies! LOL!
Thanks for sharing...
Kathe
Reviewer: piratehannelore (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 11:53 AM · On: The Reality of Broken Fingers
I'm in love with this story and with your Edward. lol. Can't wait for night out. :D
Reviewer: bennyjo (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 11:20 AM · On: The Reality of Broken Fingers
Hope your are feeling better. wow! I really like your story. I look forward to your next update.
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 07:03 AM · On: The Reality of Broken Fingers
I'm relieved to see this isn't abandoned, I had kind of given up hope! I'm glad to see this, and of course I enjoyed seeing that disgusting Flynn get his fingers broken. I also liked that Bella had just admitted she needed psychiatric help. Considering her scientific background, it made a lot of sense to me for her to do that. I will say though that I got quite confused on the timeline of the story, It may just be because my memory has faded on the previous chapters, but I got messed up on what happened when.
I love how protective Edward is!
Reviewer: moonbeamdreaming (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Imaginary Friend
interesting cant wait for more
Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Imaginary Friend
Is it sad that I loved the way you're developing Bella, but I really want some more Edward?
Reviewer: forever_dreamer (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Prologue - And So It Begins
I forgot to ask this before when I reviewed, but it's been bugging me.
Does the name Fred have anything to do with the story? [idk - something like Bella's subconscious telling her what Edward is] B/c in one response that I read I saw that you said that he was "oh....so....naughty".
But Fred means Peace Ruler .
IDK - it might be nothing. *shrugs*
But, again, great story. Keep going.
Reviewer: dazzled19 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Imaginary Friend
Your story has me intrigued, I can't wait for more!
And I love this line: "the freaky leprechaun dancing in horrid green tights over a pot of gold to my quintessential rainbow"
Author's Response: I'm glad I have you intrigued... I try.
The freaky leprechaun is a total incarnation of my boyfriend... he's a total ginger. The bronze hair and all, so I had this picture of him dancing on a pot of gold at the end of a rainbow with creepy green tights on... it totally scarred me for life, but I giggled! :-D
I'll update next week sometime! The story only gets better from here!
Thanks for your review, be sure to check back for the update when its ready!!
Reviewer: forever_dreamer (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Imaginary Friend
Great job - keep going.
Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement! I'll keep it going for as long as it needs to be. It should be about 30 chapters or soo... i'm contemplating a sequal, but is that just dragging out the characters? I don't know yet, i'll let the readers decide!
The next update will be out sometime next week! I hope you enjoy! Check back and let me know what you think when you read it!
Reviewer: McDoogle (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Imaginary Friend
OK
I have to lean tword Edward being an angel, but he has a last name.....hmmm and there is also the hint of a 2,000 year war in the description.
GAH!! give us the story already, I am very impatient :-D
Author's Response: Angelic Edward, yummy. Although you... and a few other readers think that Edward is a messanger of divine origin, I assure you... he is not. He's oh.. so... naughty, and i'm pretty sure that they'd kick him out for it, lol. No, seriously, you'll soon find out exactly 'what' Edward is. I love the speculation though... what else do you think that he could be? In a sense, he could be an angel, he could be Bella's guardian angel, he could be a guardian of something else, perhaps a guardian for some sort of information or truth, or he could be the guardian of Bella's family? Hmmm, who knows... oh, wait.. yeah, I might. But you'll love where this is going, I promise.
Good insight, the 2,000 year war is a huge hint as to what Edward is a part of. You will also find out what that is all about much later in the story. it's pivotal to Bella's actions in the future.
Check back next week for an update, it should be out by the end of the week. Or, at least it will be up for validation by then. Let me know what you think when you read it, I loved you're insight! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Imaginary Friend
Ok, I am with the others.... What is Edward? The flashback was an awesome insight (I am guessing Fred is really ED). How did Esme not see him? When going into middle school and he spoke to her again invisible? I am very very curious! I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Author's Response: I had a lot of fun writing the flashbacks. There are a few others that must be included with this story. It is pivotal to understanding the relationship between Edward and Bella. You have guessed correctly, Edward is Fred. So how old do you think 'Fred' is? Is he taking on the protective role that Jacob inherited for Renesmee in SM's Breaking Dawn? Do you think it's slightly creepy, as Robert Pattinson put it best... for Edward to be essentially 'stalking' Bella? In any other world, Edward behavior towards Bella (of which you will learn more about later) would be considered warranting a restraining order. But hell, wouldn't you want a Bronze Haired Adonis to be following you? Fuck yes. I would. I'd give my right foot (and thats saying a lot since i'm a soccer hooligan) to have my own personal Edward Cullen/Robert Pattinson.
Esme and Carlisle do not see him... for a particular reason, one that I cannot reveal at this time. HOWEVER that will be revealed by chapter 7. In fact, the how mystery of Edward will be revealed...
What is Edward indeed... he's my favorite brand of stalker, a nighttime admirer who is having control issues. It's fucking fantastic... hint, hint... Bella has a sex dream coming up... flashback? reality? future foreshadowing?? Hmmmm.... Yes, he has control issues indeed.
:-D You'll love it.
Update should be shipped out to the validation BETA sometime next week. Come back and read and review, i'd love to know what you think, and try to answer more of your questions!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Prologue - And So It Begins
Wow! Looks like an interesting start. I can't wait to see where you will take this story. :)
Reviewer: McDoogle (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Prologue - And So It Begins
wow. i am intrigued.
Reviewer: invisiblevampire (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Imaginary Friend
So...what happened to Bella's parents? I really like this, keep going!
Author's Response: Thanks for your interest! I'm so glad that you like it! I'm still unsure of myself, but i'm getting more comfortable with this story.
The happening with Bella's parents is very important to the story, so I cannot reveal it here.. but perhaps a teaser?
Bella's parents knew about the other side of The Veil....
Thats all I can say about that right now, you'll find out more in the next few chapters. I promise.
The next update will be sent out to the validation BETA next week sometime, so look for the update! I hope you like what you read from here on out! Let me know, come back and read and review!!!
Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Imaginary Friend
Wow. Just, wow. You have done such a great job of creating the feeling of feeling isolated at the same time as feeling always watched. It's quite the conundrum of emotion. So how far out is the prologue? Does she meet Edward when they go out that night? Is there more of a build up?
I really loved Fred, and then the middle school scene. It was like she always knew he was there, and took it for granted during her teen years. I can't imagine how Edward must have felt when she was out with other guys, though. I'm surprised he didn't stop any of her encounters. I'm glad you're updating weekly, I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Bella is very isolated. Can't you imagine how lonely it is to have a secret that you cannot share with anyone because you fear the reprecussions. It is excruciating for Bella and a few times she will almost crack. He friends and family know that something is a float, but they never truly come to the brink of the knowledge until Bella has a big reveal. You'll find out about that in a few chapters. It might take a while for it to sink in for Alice and Rose, but it becomes a matter of life and death for them... and who better to sweep in and save them... none other that Jasper and Emmett.
Yes, I know they haven't been written about yet... but you see... Bella doesn't even know they exist yet.
The prologue will take place between chapters 5 and 6. Thats an approximation, but thats around the general time frame. It is soon. The following chapters after this one will be a lead up to the events that cause Edward to step in a remove Bella. It's the chapter that originally sprung to mind... it's intense. You'll love it. Yes, Edward finally becomes more than a pair of eyes following Bella... but you'll read in a chapter or two, Bella has a sex dream... is that reality? Imagination? Foreshadowing?? Hmmmm.... The build up will be done to perfection, I wouldn't have it any other way.
You'll find out about what Edward thought about her dates in later chapters. However, Bella always knew that something was missing from those relationships. How could she not, when she feels so secure with the comfort of an unknown presence. Most of the time, it was Alice and Rose's meddling presence that forced Bella out on dates., many times even without Bella's explicit permission.
Flashbacks will be apart of the next few chapters, and you'll see that Edward does intervene into one of them... a man only has so much control. It's one of my favorite scenes and I really hope that you like it.
The next chapter will be sent out to the validation BETA next week, probably around wednesday, so hopefully you'll have it by friday. it'll be just as long and just as wonderful! I hope you come back and offer your insights, I really appreciate them! They help me generate ideas as well... so it's a two sided street. I hope I answered your questions so that you're satisfied. i can't give too much away, but if a thread starts on a forum... I would consider putting up teasers every week... quotes and plot teasers and such! Food for thought!
Check back soon, and thank you SOOOOO much for your review!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 04:56 AM · On: Imaginary Friend
I love your character development here. It’s crucial to your story and I appreciate the effort you’re putting into fully rounding out the characters. I love the flashback of Bella and “Fred”. Very sweet.
I can’t wait for more. This is so original that I’m truly excited about it! Please post more asap!
Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH for your insight into my character development. I want this to be quality, and I don't feel like I can do this successfully without giving you the real meat behind the characters. I hope that i'm doing a good job so far!!!
Fred is my favorite, but jealous Edward is my second favorite... hint, hint... Bella goes on a date. :-D It's adorable. But it's all in Bella's POV. I don't know if i'm going to do any others in this story. I might get one or two Edward POV's much later in the story, but I promise that these upcoming chapters will be memorable.
I'm going to update next week. That is, i'm going to send the next chapter out to the validation BETA probably in the middle of the week next week, so hopefully it'll be out by friday! Let me know what you think, I'd love to hear your opinions. It stimulates my writing, honestly! Thank you for your review! It's always a joy to read something insightful and endearing!
KISMET!!!
Reviewer: asimpledesign (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Prologue - And So It Begins
brillant intro this is da type if story i like i love long chapters update soon!:)
Author's Response: I absolutly eat up long chapters. I'm trying to keep my submissions about 5000 words so that at least you guys have something substantial to read when I do submit. I'm glad you like it so far! Be sure to read and the review the new chapter I just submitted for validation! Let me know what you think!
Reviewer: forever_dreamer (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 10:11 AM · On: Prologue - And So It Begins
I really like where this story's going and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I think I do too... lol. No, I really do. The progression is going to be slow because there's so much detail I want to develop. Hopefully I do it right. The new chapter was just submitted for validation! Hopefully it will be out soon! Thanks for your review, come back and let me know what you think of the new chapter when it breaks!
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