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Reviewer: MrsCullen_887 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 35: Changes

yay shes changed =] i cant wait to see her powers!!! and their power!!!

Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 35: Changes

i luv how she was changed nice and quick with a quickie afterwords awsome cant wait for next chapter

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 35: Changes

I'm thoroughly enjoying the story & I'm anxious for more!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 7: Making Out 101

oooppss...that is NEVER a good thing!  So glad you have the chapter already up and I don't have to wait forever for it!  I guess that is the benefits of starting to read your story late!!!  HEHEHE

Reviewer: Amillyna (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 35: Changes

Love this story! Great chapter!

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 35: Changes

=] Hell YES! Get it Bella!!!

Is this the end of the story? or will there be more chapters?

Which story will you be working on next? *GIFTEDhinthinthint*

...YAY! You're still my favorite author on this site =D



Author's Response:

I will do some updating on my other stories and might start a sequel to this one.  I'll try and get at least half of it written before I post it.

I have at least two more chapters, if not more.  But we are getting close.

Thanks for the kind words and for reading, agiismsxx.

Reviewer: Chillis (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 35: Changes

Very well done!  Tasteful but hella sexy!

Reviewer: huntergirl89 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 35: Changes

wow best chapter ever!!! love the lemons in this one. cant wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: Melolabel (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 35: Changes

Excellent change scene, I like that it was short, because most of it was already done.  Very nice chapter!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 6: Afterglow

can't wait to find out what they will think!!!  GREAT WRITING!

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 35: Changes

I liked it!!! Can't wait for the next one!!!! :)

Reviewer: aussievamp (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 35: Changes

Fantastic chapter...but YOU HAVE TO WRITE THE PROM SCENE!  You promised Charlie remember!!!! sigh!!! Love it Love it LOVE IT!

Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 35: Changes

You know what? THATS HOW BREAKING DAWN SHOULD HAVE BEEN! Edward changing her ROMANTICALLY, then them having a NORMAL relationship. Not Bella being Super!Bella, and being PERFECT. THANK YOU!

Reviewer: nessiebells (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 35: Changes

OH Yeah!!! I think this is one of my favorite chapters. Thank you

Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 35: Changes

Yea! Yea!  A super Chapter!  Thanks for a great story!

Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 35: Changes

Freaking awesome.... AMAZING!!!! I love how Charlie told Edward to do it... hehehehehe

Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 35: Changes

just dandy chapter--I'll be interested in her going to this year's prom, or will she have to wait a few more decades?

Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 35: Changes

Thank you for updating!  I've been so anxious about this one. *biting nails again* You did such a wonderful job with this chapter.  I hate that Bella couldn't do a few more "human" things before her change like visit her mother and go to the prom, but I see why Edward had to do it now.  I can't believe Charlie gave his permission, but being a good father, he saw that she was too vulnerable in that world to remain as she was.  I'm looking forward to the next chapter.  Yes, I'm that greedy.  I'm already ready for another one!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you understood my motivation for Charlie giving his permission.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 35: Changes

This was perfect. I loved it. I'll be sad if this is the last chapter, but you did an AMAZING job if it is. This story seriously is one of my favorites. I would love to see a sequel!!! :) You're an amazing writer and I so cannot wait to read more of your stuff!!! 

Thank you so much for sharing and I hope there is at least one or two chapters left :) If not...Thanks!!!



Author's Response:

I definitely have one or two chapters left.  Still debating on the sequel.  I'll write a few chapters and see if they flow.  If not, I'll leave it in a good place so that the story can stand on its own.  Thanks D!

Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 20: Snow Angel

awww..that was cute.

She called him an asshole, he called her a bitch! How dare he! I still think Edward is the asshole, Bella was just provoked,  hmph! It's funny though!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare

outstanding!!!!  Hilarious!

Reviewer: leena (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 35: Changes

I loved it  it was a great chapter

Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 19: Road Trippin'

Wait, how can Edward think she's pregnant if they haven't done it?

I mean, wasn't that the reason he almost lost his control? That they pushed their boundaries? Did something happen at the back of the car? But how can they have done it there without Edward not losing control?

Reviewer: Evilangel6714 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 35: Changes

YAY!!! Wow I've never had a chapter dedicated to me before. I feel special! lol I'm so happy he finally changed her and i found it hilarious that she was the one that actually ended up "taking him for a ride" lol The UST must have really gotten to her. Any way thank you again for the dedication and I'm sad that we are almost at the end, but if you do decide to make a sequal I promise to make a banner for that one too.



Author's Response:

Thanks for everything!  The banner rocks!  I love it!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike

i am still loving your story!  It is completely different than any other I have read!   Great writing...and I really mean that! 

 

Sorry I am just getting to the story....I see that it has been posted for a while....better late than never, right?!?!?!?!?!?

Teacher

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