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Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait
Please do create a sequel so I can see where you take us while they deal with the Volturi, Vickie and Tanya. Though I know Tanya's only going to be very minimal, especially once she realizes the depths of the bond... I'm hoping. Unless you decide to make her go psycho.
I also hope that the Volturi don't even attempt to kill or seperate Bella and Edward!
Reviewer: lovetoplay (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait
WOW!!! I'm not even sure where to start- this has become one of my all-time favorite stories! Although I like AH stories, canon-type has always been my favorite- especially ones in EPOV. And I can honestly say I think I like your story better than the original Twilight!! I LOVED how they knew about Bella from her birth & followed her throughout her life. And I much preferred your characters & the way you developed them. I liked the addition of their physical relationship, as it was much needed, and although I'm sure eveyone has their own opinion, you did a fabulous job with it! I'm sure it's a double edged sword having feedback while writing a story, but you did rate it NC-17, and anyone who doesn't want to read about certain activities, shouldn't be reading that rating in the first place. The slow transformation was a nice surprise and I thought your ideas on vampire mating & what that means was BRILLIANT! I much preferred your James & he wanting to steal Bella as opposed to eat her. And when Edward finally does change her, the way it happened was perfect & beautiful. I'm so glad you had them get married- it was touching how much Edward wanted to tie himself to Bella. Again- having this in Edward's point of view was the BEST! You really are a very talented & gifted writer & you came up with a fantastic plot. I'm so glad you chose to share your gift with us! I know you mentioned you might continue this story, but I didn't see one. Are you still planning to? You had some great ideas in your author's notes so I'm hoping you will. In the meantime I'm going to try some of your other pieces. I've definitely become a huge fan of yours. Thank you for the amazing entertainment! :)
Author's Response: I'm really honored by your words. What kind and thoughtful things you've said. Thanks for the great review.
Yes, I plan a sequel. I've gotten four chapters written, but I'm not sold on them, yet, and I won't post until I'm completely ready to do so.
I am working on another two stories, and I am working on my first novel.
But, all this has to take second place to my family. And I've unfortunately had a sinus infection for over a week, so I haven't felt much like writing. I'll get to it soon. Thank you so much for reading.
Reviewer: esce (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
Really totally enjoyed this story
thanks for such a great read
Reviewer: danced_in_the_rain (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait
my new fav story. it was so great.have .'Rob Pattison' be in the crowed made me LOL.
maybe her power will be having a baby?
loved it
Author's Response: Nope--no babies in my stories. Sorry. Not a Renesme fan, at all.
I like putting Rob in, and making Harry Potter references too. Some people get annoyed with it, but I think it's fun. It's a challenge to make him fit in. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: danced_in_the_rain (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 37: Trips
OMG i loved this chapter, it didn`t feel like a "filler" to me at all.it was so full of great lines, some of my fav being
"And he shall buy you a new one as soon as possible."I stated
and i loved emmett doing the cabbage patch, how did you know my victory dance, the snow fight was a great.
there were time when reading this i wished SM had done something like it in the books.
keep on rocking it.
Author's Response: My husband, who is very Emmett-like, does cabbage patch victory dances--lol! He's who I base my Emmett off of.
Glad you like what I'm writing. Thanks for the kind words and for reading.
Reviewer: danced_in_the_rain (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 16: Making Up
i still found this chapter very nice.the auther has to be comfortable with what they write and i found this chapter still very sweet and steamy.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: e1r3mom (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait
i loved it. Although you have wrote a sequal i dont think i will read it. When too much drama enters there lives i stop reading i like this happily ever after.
Author's Response: The sequel might have some drama, but it's mostly going to be about their senior year in high school and their shared power. But thanks for reading anyway.
Reviewer: e1r3mom (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In
I love that you didnt make him completely angsty cause that always irritates me about the Edward in most FanFictions but I think you got him right! Hes not a complete prude.
Author's Response: I wanted this Edward to be a little more in touch with his inner seventeen-year-old. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: e1r3mom (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
I have searched for strories like this one. And I must say I love it! LOVE IT!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
Reviewer: danced_in_the_rain (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike
loving, loving,loving this story.i love storys were one or both partys know that the other is there soulmate.the family helping and scheming little pixie alice are both GREAT.can`t wait to read the rest.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really appreciate your kind words.
Reviewer: IvoryCrayon (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait
Good story, just finished reading it. One of the better Twilight fics I have run into. I hope to read more from you when I can.
-IC
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words, and I am happy to have you as a reader.
Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait
okay, i thought you were going to write a sequel! where is it? and why havent you updated SAV II? those were some of my absolute favs and i want to know why youve dropped the ball! please hurry!
Author's Response: Sorry dear one, but I have kids that were home all summer and I wanted to devote all my time to them. Plus, this story wouldn't let me alone until I wrote all of it, so I have been remiss in my duties to my other stories. I hope to work on them soon. So sorry for the delay.
I've written a bit of the sequel but am not sure I like it as of yet. I won't post it until most of it is written.
Reviewer: QueenRaven (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait
WOW I loved this !!! I have just read te story from beginning to end and as a result missed several hours sleep but I think it was worth is.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. What a kind thing to say.
Reviewer: craigs_girl_48167 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 8: Accident Magnet
Edward? Too protective? No such thing!!
Reviewer: tesa (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait
Wonderfull !!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you kindly.
Reviewer: Marjojo (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
So did Carlisle change Edward by kissing him?!?
Author's Response: Uh...no. Absolutely not. He bit him. Edward doesn't realize he's changing her. Carlisle premeditated Edward's change. Huge difference.
Reviewer: dioli17 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance
The best story i have read so far it doesn't lack anything, thanks for writing such an awsome story. I look foward to reading some more of your work for twilight.
Author's Response: Thank you. That is beyond sweet. I'm so glad you liked it. I was truly possessed by this story. It wrote itself. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: lilspidermonkey (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait
this was a good story thank you for writing it
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: lilspidermonkey (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 31: Play
bella is always the spoiled baby yah she is last on my love the Cullenn list
Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait
Wow - awesome story!! I enjoyed every single chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: lilspidermonkey (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
i love that edward gave in to his 17 year old side and was not a stick in his ass over a kiss
Reviewer: lilspidermonkey (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
i really liked it i do not think edward was creepy stalker molester type at all i also like that the family was helping him watch her grow up in a safe way
Reviewer: Mimigrace (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
oh i'm so glad you picked up on the whole 'venom pooling in mouth' but not getting infected by kissing thing.
i never really understood it. i love the concept in this story though!
Reviewer: Mimigrace (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
So sweet, it sounds kind of like the 'imprinting' the wolves go through to me (if there's anything creepy about your edward, its not really that much creepier than SM's characters. quil was playing uncle to a girl he'd one day be with etc.)
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait
I absolutely love it that you use Rob as a character! it makes me laugh so hard every time. love the story, and wish it didnt have to end. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Glad you like my use of Robert and his two roles. Thanks for reading. There will be a sequel sometime this fall.
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