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Reviewer: maisydaze (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
great story...you have me hooked. I laughed out loud when the girls were ogling Cedric in Harry Potter!! Nice touch!
Author's Response: I really like pulling out the HP stuff in my stories. I always try to bring something to that affect in almost every story. I also like to pick on Rob sometimes too. But it's all in cute fun. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
U BTTR HURRY!... or else.... and by "or else" I mean i'll provoke the Volturi and blame u.
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
I like the pinnochio line- and I love the "Grinding with Edward" ipod folder..haha- THAT WAS GREAT! Good Chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for writing something about the funny things, Lynnlin. Glad those parts made you laugh. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Mayfair1285 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
ruh-roh! Updated soon please....I am hoping they will just make up instead of having a New Moon moment.
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
Oh no, no, no, no, NO! You better give "Emoward" a swift kick in his oh-so-gorgeous ass. Do NOT let him pull a New Moon and disappear. Nope, no way, not gonna happen. ARGH!
Reviewer: Melolabel (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
New Moon made me bawl like a baby. Tears streaming down my cheeks. If we're gonna need kleenex, give us a warning at the top! Can't wait to see how this is going to resolve!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
Poor Bella, I wonder how bad her bruises are? I'm assuming he didn't do anything worse than bruises, at least. I honestly can't blame Edward for feeling the way he does and for thinking the way he does. If it weren't for his family, well. That does make you think pretty bad things. Especially when he's so bent to not change her.
Sad chapter but it definitely addresses something that needs to be addressed.
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
I know I asked for angst, but...ugh. It's so good, but so bad at the same time. I love it though! Great chapter.
Reviewer: reviewgrl (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
is he really going to do this?update soon
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
NOOOOOOOOO!!!! Please don't torture us! Although Edward in his boxers does make up for some of it. Waiting impatiently for the next chapter.
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
Oh, no. Angsty-New-Moon!Edward ahoy.
Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
Facepalm!!!!!
He's just dedicated to stupid, ain't he? Deciple to the Church of St. Douchward, party of one!!!!!!
Please Alice and Jasper and Emmett, stop him before he kills again!! Metaphorically, speaking....
Reviewer: sizone (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
God, I love this story! Mike is delusional, and he kind of deserves to get some really scary nightmares where Edward hunts him down. I hope Edward hasn’t made a too drastic decision, and if he decided he was going to leave her, I fold my hands and pray it won’t be for too long.
Again I love the story, and your brilliant writing. Keep up the awesome work, and update soon ;)
~Sizone
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words, Sizone. Yeah, Mike's a dweeb. As for Edward making a drastic decision...can't say. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: lisa54aa (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
OMG, please no New Moon moment....Just let him bite her and get it over with! These two need to be together.
Author's Response: Just hang on. Thanks for reading lisa.
Reviewer: Suggie01 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
Really good, fun chapter -- nice and long too. And it keeps pushing the tension lemon free, which I know is important to you. I don't mind some angst, it works very well with the story. Otherwise it would be a pure fluff piece.
I'm really enjoying this -- thank you.
Author's Response: Thanks Suggieo. I'm glad you like what I'm doing. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
Whoa! I totally did not see that coming. I was like "WHAT!?!?!" Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Good. I'm glad I surprised you. Thanks for reading, twogoods.
Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
I am ok with your cliff hangers... I really am... You update fast enough where I don't bite my nails and your angst is fun!
I can't wait for more... thank you again!!!
Author's Response: Thanks Wicked. Glad you don't mind my cliffies.
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
Oh great...he leaves, again.
I get it, this time maybe not for too long. Well this time i hope she kicks his ass to the curb...I hate angsty self loathing whiny edward...he is SOOOO not sexy. AND he never considers HER feelings (or in this story that maybe his brothers might be smarter than he is)
Enough on plot, nicely written...you bring us right in. Up until he went all EDWARD on us, I loved the lightness, the fun at the dance, etc...E finally just got to be that horny 17 yr old...sigh.
Way to tell a story- seriously!! Thanks for writing it!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, dear! You are too kind.
Everyone's responses will be so not by the book. I'm anxious to see what everyone thinks about where I go next. I appreciate you so much!
Reviewer: MisguidedAngel (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
I just love your writing. You know how to keep me coming back for more and your right...you don't need to "Smut" it up to keep me coming back for more;-)
UGH...I just hate that he is more than likely going to break her poor heart but I understand the need for angst...just sucks.
Author's Response: But I hope my angst won't suck and hurt quite as badly as the book. Thanks for the kind words, Angel.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
Oh boy. Right up until the end, I was so content with this chapter... but I know that there has to be angst for the end to be better...
I am nursing a small hope that what he has to do is make sweet love to prove to both of them that he can control himself. However, I have a large suspicion that what he has to do is leave again. I really hope I'm wrong.
Author's Response: Just hang in there. It will be worth it, I promise. That's all I can say without giving away too much. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
I gasped so loud and so hard that my dad thought I was choking.
HOLY CRAP!! I can't believe that.
I can't believe, that even after Bella and Edward being separated for only a few weeks, that he could think it would be the right thing for them to be apart.
WHY? Why would he do that? Why would he think it was the right thing to do? URGH!! Stupid Edward.
I'm definitely kind of waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter =]
Author's Response: That's why I did it this way. I am evil, and I string you along by doing the unexpected--mwuhahaha! Thanks for reading agiismsxx!
Reviewer: Say It_Out Loud (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
This story is fantastic! Well done. I am also glad you are following your own voice with regard to the smut level. I would just hate for you to restrict yourself in either direction because of some stupid comment. Please know that there are plenty of us out there that like it (in context), and you should do what feels right to you. I mean, it has the rating it does for a reason, right? P.S. I am so glad you promised not to drag out the New Moon angst. I barely survived it when reading the books. ;)
Author's Response: Me too! I couldn't stand the whole middle NM part! I hated how Edward broke up and I hated Jake even more. So, it won't go on for that long, and it will be completely different than the book. Just hang in there and thanks for reading, Say It!
Reviewer: whynot (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
Very realistic. I like this better than the ones where he has such an easy time with being intimate. Please, though-no mini-NM, okay?
Author's Response: Hang in there. It will be worth it, that's all I can say, whynot.
Reviewer: sdfan92 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
NO NO NO!!! please do not NEW MOON ME!!!
Author's Response: No Jake, and it won't be for that long. No Edward going to Italy either. It will be different. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
Of course, we can't have a tale of Edward and Bella without pulling a NM for at least a brief period. Hmm I'll be curious to see how you play this out.
Author's Response: Brief being the optimim word. It won't take long in this story, and it's Jacob-free as well! Thanks for reading, Nashi.
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