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Reviewer: MrsDoctor (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
i cant wair for the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
What???? You are leaving us here???? DO I understand what's happening??? Well maybe, if he bit her....well then yes. BUT WTF...when did he bite her? or is this part of the illness??? Oh crap please dont leave me hanging on this long.....PRETTY PLEASE
Reviewer: sizone (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
What can I say? I have my theories about what's going on, but they're all most likely wrong, so I'll just leave it to you to fill in what's really going on. Um… I actually think it would ruin some of the fun if I speculate too much about what’s going on. Seeing you know the story better than anyone else, you, and you alone should lead the show.
Thanks once again for a great story! You truly are an amazing writer!
Keep up the great work and update soon! ;)
~Sizone
“Can’t you see me doing my happy dance?”
Author's Response: Thanks Sizone. I'm glad you like it.
Reviewer: lifesbliss (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
You updated!!! Yeah!!!! I check several times a day. I'm obsessed.
That was quite a cliffie! Hmmm.... I loved it. You write beautifully.
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
OMG!
Reviewer: Twilightrocks1984 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
wow I can not wait to see the next chapter
Reviewer: Sarinae (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
I am really enjoying your story. I believe that it is very well written. I just wanted to tell you. I believe I understand what is going on. I think she was slowly turning vampire with the vomiting and the being less of a klutz and I think now she is finally burning. Am I close? thats how I am interpreting it.
Sarinae
Author's Response: Bingo! Thanks for the kind words, and I'm glad that you are seeing the clear picture.
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
It's a great story but I have some concerns. I don't like how Bella is becoming very controlling. I admit that he has some undesirable traits, but she reminds me of those women who get a man then want to change everything about him. You get him so wound up that he has to double think every thought and reaction. Eventually, the man leaves for someone less complicated. His family is not helping him seal the deal neither, but make fun about him at the same time.
Author's Response: I'm sorry you are seeing things this way as no one else is. The list of concerns you made are not how I feel that I am portraying things at all. To me, Bella isn't controlling--she's confident, and she stands up to him. It always bothered me in the books that she basically took everything he dished out without question and was left berating herself for either not being good enough or in pain. Her standing up to him isn't her being controlling or vicious--it's a strength for her.
I don't think that I'm getting Edward "wound up". I see him as growing and learning. Bella isn't trying to change him, but she's not taking his crap either. Anyway, that's my thoughts. Thanks for being honest about your concerns, even if I don't agree with them at all.
Reviewer: Mayfair1285 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
uh-oh! Cliffy ahhhh!!!!! Update soon plz!
Reviewer: Say It_Out Loud (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
I understand what is happening, but good grief, you can't leave us on that cliff for long!!! Things were just reconnecting between those two and we were getting all squee. It is a great story, BTW.
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
Well...you got me.
I can't remember if the James event happened -if so she could be dreaming.
OR it has something to do with her being sick
I can't imagine he would have bitten her and not known it...but heck,it is your story.
Can't wait to read your explaination in the next chapter because I am stumped...
Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
Finally ingested a bit to much venom...
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
what the heck?
Reviewer: kimberly128 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
No, I don't understand. By french kissing she got venom? He kissed her before like that and this didn't happened. Is she still sick? The past couple chapters she hasn't throwing up. Gosh, so many questions and no answers. I'm dieing here. Can you help me?
Author's Response: Next chapter clears everything up. His family answers some questions. I always wanted to explore this issue of passing venom through kissing because Edward made such a big deal about it in the books. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
Uh oh, what happened? Was it the venom in his mouth? Oh boy, this is going to set off Edward's guilt again. But seriously, how can they possibly stop the change at this point?! Oh dear... and things were so perfect too.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
What's happening? Oh man, is she changing? I'm happy about that, but how? Was the kiss too deep. Did she swallow some venom? Cant wait for more!!
Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
YAY!!!!! This is just awsome... so he is turning her just by kissing her... That is sooo great.... I hope that he lets it happen... I can't wait!!!
You are such an awsome writer...
Reviewer: Nannabell (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
That cliffy was very evil... Evil I say! I am really enjoying this story.. I can't wait to read more.
Emmett's stick comment almost caused me to spit Vitamin Water all over my laptop. Great!!!
Keep the great work coming.
-De Anna
DeAnnaMBell@gmail.com
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
Uh oh, did she have a cut in her mouth? That is not cool! Although it takes away the problem of making her a vampire!
Reviewer: goldeneyedgirl (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
Hmmm...slow trickle of venom from the kiss, perhaps a cut in her mouth or her lip from biting it so much....Oh boy, here we go!!! he better not leave again...he promised!
Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
did he somehow bite her by accident? seriously, you are truly killing me here!
Reviewer: lutzlovingklutz (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 20: Snow Angel
OHHHHH i LOVE this story!!!! please write more, i am dieing to know whats wrong with bella, keep it up ur doing a great job!!!
Reviewer: MrsDoctor (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 20: Snow Angel
I love this story, it is such a nice version of it =] i cant wait for more, and to find out what is wrong with bella!!
Reviewer: lionslamb1901 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
Aww I love it! Bella's first snow (:
But, I wanna know what's going on with her!
So far one of favourite fanfics I've read.
Author's Response: Thank you, lionslamb. I'm glad you like what I am doing.
Reviewer: Jacquelyn Swan (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 20: Snow Angel
This was so so beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you. I thought that her never having seen snow was a possibility given where she had previously lived. I thought it would be sweet to share her first snowfall with Edward. Thanks for reading.
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