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Reviewer: werucchi (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 24: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful

I really like this "what if". It's sooooooo amazing, and I can't wait for more chapters! Really, this is maybe my favourite fic in here :D



Author's Response:

Awww shucks.  Thanks for the sweet comments.  I appreciate you reading my story.

Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 24: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful

if you dont post a ton, really quickly, there will be hell to pay! how could billy! and as for everything, did you mean absolutely positively everything? the whole werewolf/vampire crap load? PLEASE, you are killing me here, again!

Author's Response:

I can't tell you all that he was told.  You have to wait.  I'm working on the next chapter, but I'm also working on an update to another story, so I've got a sort of divided focus right now.  Hopefully I'll have it done by Friday.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within

 

Question:

What songs are on the Grinding with Edward Playlist??



Author's Response:

I dunno.  Use your imagination.  You probably know more songs like that than I do.  My teen years are from the 80's, so I can't really make a playlist.  I just did a little research and found two songs that fit the bill.  Thanks for reading, Humble.

Reviewer: snowwolf (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 24: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful

Yet, another awesome chapter!

Reviewer: kay321 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 24: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful

I can't wait for the update!!! 

Reviewer: iheartquestionmark (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 24: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful

that was deffinately a cliffie! but i love it. i cannot wait for the next next chapter!!!

Reviewer: twilightlover1 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 24: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful

   plz continue

Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 24: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful

I love it. I dón´t like insecure Bella but that is SO her !!!!

I can´t wait to see where your story takes us. Good work.

Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 24: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful

Oh my God. Charlie knows wow that's gonna be interesting how will he react? What will the Cullens do about the Quileutes? I just can't wait for the next chapter to get the answers for the questions. I think i said that before but i simply love you're story. The what if's are great. You an amazing writer. And let me tell you this you're crazy brain thinks up awesome stuff.

Thanks for posting.

You're fan Laila.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Laila, for all the kind words.  I appreciate your review. 

I always wondered what would happen if Charlie actually knew.  The whole Cullen/Quileute thing will be fun to write.  It'll be pretty tense and intense for a minute or two, at least. 

Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions

I love the ending of this chapter!  I have now added Sentimental Reasons to my ipod!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it.  I love that song.  It's my favorite.  If I ever eventually have a big party for a milestone anniversary, I want it to be played while I dance with my hubby.  It's so incredibly romantic, and it sums up the feeling of truly being in love with someone so well.  Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you like the song.

Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes

I love this chapter!!! This is the best ever!!

A gradual change!! The family knew and were so supportive!!! I love this!!!

I cannot wait to see what happens next!!!

Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 18: Twenty-nine Steps

I love that his family chose to stick with Bella!!!!

Reviewer: gjmb2000 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within

Just enough to keep me coming back for more.

This is really good.

Reviewer: gjmb2000 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare

Your story gets better by the minute.. or should I say

Chapter...

Reviewer: gjmb2000 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses

This was great... ever since I read about Jacob

enprinting on Nessie. I pictured Edward loving Bella

since the day she was born :)

Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions

Ah, the saccharine feeling LOL, seriously I love your story, keep writing!

You have a great writing skill, use it more.

Now I will need an update soon :)



Author's Response:

I have four other stories, all quite different from this one, so you might check them out.  I have writer's block on most of them right now, and very little time to work on anything but this one.  Thanks for reading.  I'm glad you stuck with it.

Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes

I liked your twist on the story, somehow it clicks!

I could´t help myself and was singing the son: Ch, ch, ch, changes (Queen I believe?). Ha, ha, ha.

Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons

WTF I don´t understand I´m slow!!! Have to read.

Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 20: Snow Angel

Very good, indeed!

By the way i love Colorado snow.

Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 19: Road Trippin'

She gave in too soon; Wait, what am I saying It´s edward for crying out loud!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 18: Twenty-nine Steps

Ha, Ha, Ha, I know it´s supposed to be sad but I can´t stop laughing at Emmett´s name calling:"Bastward", "Assward", "Jerkward"

i can´t stop laughing!!!! Your sense of humor is great.

Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within

Oh, No, !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What the HELL!!

Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 16: Making Up

Ha,Ha,Ha the Harry Potter bit, that was too much, I was laughing so hard my daughter looked funny at me, LOL.

Great chapter, HOT too!!!

Reviewer: twilightlover234 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses

i really like this(: i can't wait to read more of the chapters :D

Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty

"Damn, that´s old"  LMAO That´s all folks.

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