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Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting
Awesome chapter and I am excited to see how this unfolds as I was not expecting the whole venom slowly changing her and I love that part and now...well I just want more!
:)
Reviewer: via_rocks (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting
Awww...Poor Bella! When does Charlie come around? Or does he at all...? Please update as soon as you can!
Reviewer: mvero (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting
Very good story. cant wait for next chapter.
Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting
I really loved this chapter, actually. Despite the fact that I absolutely can't stand Jacob on any level :P lol. I know...I'm weird :D lol.
I love that Bella's accepting what she is going to be. That's so awesome. I an't wait for more. I especially can't wait until Bella and Edward stop getting interrupted!! :D lol.
More please ;)
Author's Response: I can't stand Jake either--on any level. But, in keeping with the book, I brought him into it. If I had my way, he'd either always be a villan or non-existent. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: sizone (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting
I totally agree with you on the comment you made about Jake being a "Do now, ask later" type. A great example would be when he just went and kissed her in the book. I'd like to comment on one thing, even though I'm sure you already know... When Jake thought about how long he's liked Bella, Leah commented on his thoughts. But if I got the books right, the pack could only hear each other’s thoughts when in wolf shape. I don't know if I'm way off here, but I'd just like to point that out. That being said, I found the little exchange between Leah and Jake funny. And I like it when Carlisle gets a little mad, it's not good to keep everything bottled up inside.
Keep up the great work on your masterpiece, and update soon! ;) You rule my fan-fiction world!
~Sizone
Author's Response: You know, I think you're right. I hate the thought of redoing the chapter though. I'll have to think of what to do. I'll revise it in some way to keep the flavor of that scene without changing it too much. Thanks for bringing that to my attention, and thanks for reading.
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting
No, the eye roll WAS NOT directed to you but the tribe. I mean common sense would dictate if humans shouldn't know about shapeshifters/werewolves, why should they know about vampires?
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike
Oh come on Edward hurry up and ask her out. Great chapter
Reviewer: sizone (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling
I absolutely loved him telling Lauren off! It was so brilliant, I don't even have words for it. By now Lauren should have something else to bitch... or maybe whine about. Maybe she'll even need therapy!
Keep up all the great work, like you always do ;)
~Sizone
Author's Response: Thanks Sizone. Lauren better keep her mouth shut, at least as far as the Cullens and Bella are concerned. She is really terrified of Rose. Thanks for the kind words.
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting
I glad that Bella told the pack about the Volturi,Jake and Billy should be ashamed of themselves for saying anything to Charlie.
Reviewer: kallan0100 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
you are an excellent author and this story is the shizz!!!
Reviewer: kallan0100 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike
this story is insanely fantastic! i can't wait to read the rest!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting
I feel for Bella, but you have made Charlie a very loving father even though his world around him is going crazy. I remember reading the unvailing in BD and thinking that Charlie was pretty level headed considering what Jacob had told him. I can see where Bella gets her calmness from. Great job!
Reviewer: kimberly128 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting
I liked it, a chapter that needed to be written to get everything settled. I was hoping for a little love scene for a minute, but thanks to his family...update soon.
Reviewer: Stephanie Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting
Very good chapter!! I like it alot..lol! Can't wait for the next chapter..I just have a quick question..it has to do with the earlier chapters.Why are all the Cullen's in the same class as Bella in school..I thought Rosalie and Emmet were supposed to be older? Just curious thats all...Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: They aren't. Some classes in high school (at least the one that I went to) can be taken by either Juniors or Seniors concurrently. Does that make sense? I hope so. Thanks Stephanie.
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting
Poor Bella. I bet the phone call with her mom will be pretty awkward. Great update!
Reviewer: TessLouise (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
I didn't think any of it seemed inappropriate - I thought it was kind of sweet. Regardless, I love the fresh twist on the story - very engaging.
Reviewer: Joico (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting
Sweet....both boys were sweet to Bella! Too bad she is always sad! And have they actually had "time alone"....lol.
As always post soon..!!
Author's Response: She's not always sad. They had a great time in Aspen. She and Edward are going to face challenges because of their unorthodox relationship. Anyway, glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting
I'm also not a Jake person. I'm all TEAM EDWARD. I like you version of Bella and Edward of all the Cullen's. Bella is able to stand her ground. Edward is able to let go and have faith in her and her decisions. And I'm really glad that this whole Bella-in-love-with-Jake-thing will not happen in your story. Bella and Edward belonge together no space for Jake and I'm not sorry for that.
Thanks for posting.
Author's Response: Agreed, Laila. No BxJ. Not in my stories. He can have a crush, but she won't return it. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Melolabel (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting
excellent chapter, it was a necessary one, so I'm looking forward to how Bella's going to deal with her feelings.
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting
It was a good chapter;)
Reviewer: NicoleCullen (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting
I personally, am not a huge jacob fan, but I liked the way you handled him...he's not so in your face like he is in the books. by the way...if edward and bella dont combust soon, I certainly will! all the lead-up and teasing before they can finallyyy be together is killing me! ;)
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting
I love you too! I was wondering about Bella, but now I understand a bit more. Great chapter!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting
Poor Edward and Bella are never going to get together! I'm guessing we can't possibly be done with the wolves yet though?
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting
somehow i missed the last chapter, so i will now say that i liked the last 2 chapters very much. i loved the confrontation between edward and lauren. well done. and i love how bella took jake and sam down a peg or two during the meeting. i'm very much looking forward to more.
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting
Great chapter....you wrote the meeting well. I'm really, really interested in seeing more interaction between Charlie, Bella and the Cullens (and also with the tribal guys and Charlie) now that he knows.
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