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Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 31: Play
Oh I loved reading it! I wonder how this will affect her Sunday night!
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 31: Play
Can the vampires not tell that Bella is part vampire? I was just wondering if the venom can be smelled. Loved the hotness and all the humor. You were right, this update was funny as hell. Keep up the great work, I love this story!
Author's Response: You'll have to wait until the next chapter to find out the answer to your question, but I'll give you a clue: Notice that the last sentence is a question. "You've brought...a snack?" Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
Just found this story and read first chapter, I am hooked already, I love your take on the story. I can't wait to read on :)
Reviewer: Say It_Out Loud (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 31: Play
Edward trying to dazzle a "safe" out of Bella was hilarious. Great job, looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 30: Man vs. Monster
You really had nothing to worry about! The lemony bits were tasteful and essential to the story. Also, this scene was completely in keeping with the story. A pleasure to read- as always, I will wait for future chapter.
p.s. Did not detect grammar or spelling errors. xoxox
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
Really good chapter, and your explanation of a vampire mate sounded plausible to me.
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
Great chapter Now maybe Edward will totally turn her since the nomads showed up.
Reviewer: an_edward_chick (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
Great chapter. I liked your explanation of mates, especially the creator-singer-sharing of gifts portion. Very interesting. I'm sure the action is about to pick up, so I can't wait to see where you take it. Especially since Bella is due to have an episode starting the next day.
Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
that was great
Reviewer: Hermia (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
The ringtone already made me laugh, but I'm really looking forward to the explanation. :P
Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
I liked how you defined mating! Makes sense! I am curious about what third "power" Edward and Bella might share! I also wonder how you are going to have the next chapter now that the nomads have shown up an d since Bella is already changing! It should be quite different! Can't wait for an update!
Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
fun!
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
It's sweet that they are mated (married) now but Edward should have explained it to her first. Oh well his mind wasn't really working anymore I guess :) . Can't wait to read what is going to happen next. This was another awesome chapter thank you for posting.
Author's Response: Yeah--he should have told her, and he knew it. I think he thought that it wouldn't be a big deal since they were already engaged. Thanks for reading, Laila.
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
Yes I liked it very much. Including the explaination you wrote about soulamtes etc. That actually made sense to me. Pleaseadd to your story when you get the chance. =()
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
Jasper's ringtone was already humoruous to me, so I can't wait to find out the story behind it. And I'm really glad that you addressed the fact that their frenching was Bella's fault as much as Edward's. It did kinda bother me that they all blamed him so harshly but not her at all. So thanks for explaining that in the AN end note.
I loved all the playfulness in this chapter. From Hornyward at the beginning on the chapter to the teasing and banter at the baseball game. And I just have to say that I think you've come up with the perfect title for Alice and Rose...the pixie and the diva. Of course Alice is always called a pixie, but I don't think I've heard Rose referred to as the diva before which is strange because it totally suits her.
I loved your whole take on mates and that just makes me that much more excited for Bella's change to be completed. It's so romantic the connections between Bella and Edward and I'm definitely excited to see what her power will be and even more so what their third shared power will be. Should be totally awesome!
Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, TJ. I'm glad you liked it.
Rose is a diva to the core. It is the perfect nickname for her. I just thought about it last night.
I'm excited to see what their shared power will be as well--because I don't know. I've got some serious thinking to do. Thanks for reading, dear.
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
Loved it. Long review later. Bedtime for the shrew. This will give me pleasant dreams though! ;) Thanks, Fangs!
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
their relationship should have a warning lable on it lol..great chapter
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
I liked it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, and am looking forward to Edward changing Bella!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
wow great game i luved the banter between them its cute... cant wait for nextchapter
Reviewer: TwilightBellaDonna (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
I just found this website as i am new to the Twilight Series.. This is my first story on this website and i must say that so far iam hooked...
Your writing is very good and you are keeping the charactors in check.. I can't wait to read the other chapters youhave posted..
I have already added it to my favorite. It grabbed me from the first chpater..
I will review at the end of the last chapter otherwise you will have alot of reviews to read..
Thanks for making my first story on this site one of the better i have read.. I also read and adultfanfiction and fanfiction.net..
Take Care
Mari aka (TwilightBellaDonna )
Reviewer: sizone (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
Loved it, all of it! The way you make Edward take more chances and believe more in himself is great. I always found it a little annoying when he was always "playing safe". The baseball game was exciting to read, and I could just imagine the look of disappointment on Edwards face when Bella didn't get dazzled by him. Anyways, great chapter as always! I’ve Been Waiting for You for Forever, is definitely my favorite fanfic! I simply just love it.
Keep up the awesome work, and update soon ;)
~Sizone
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the game. I had so much fun writing it. Thanks for the kind words, and I'm honored that you think so highly of my story, Sizone.
Reviewer: silverfaire (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
I like the explanation of their bond!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
Kristi, why's Jasper's ringtone Dude Looks Like a Lady? Please tell me! Great chapter, btw.
Author's Response: Of all the things to be hung up on in this chapter, C, you pick that?--lol! It will be really funny, trust me.
Reviewer: LeprechaunFury (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
Okay, so I'm not much for reviewing chapter by chapter but overall I gotta say that was a great fic. Loved the angst, humor, drama etc, so much so that I can easily overlook a few spelling errors. Great work...
Author's Response: Now that I'm wearing my glasses and not my contacts, I'll go and recheck my spelling. My eyes just hurt so badly last night, but I wanted to post it anyway. Thanks for understanding and for the kind words.
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
*whines* why later? I wanna know now!! I wanna know everything now *stomps foot theatatrically, Grins* Great writing, this was an awesome chapter. The mate explaination was fantastic and everything with the baseball game was well done and it was just plan wonderful!!
Keep up the fantastic writing!! Can't wait for more,
jace
Author's Response: The whole Jasper ringtone thing is quite funny and things were just a bit too dramatic at the end to bring it up. Thanks for the kind words, Jace.
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