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Reviewer: rohan (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
can't wait for bella's change and i hope she decide's to do it sooner than later
Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
awsome chapter totally cant wait for next
Reviewer: MrsJasperHale (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
Great chapter. Love the scene with Edward, Emmett and Jasper at the end.
Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
Great chapter! I loved the balance between serious and funny in this one.
Reviewer: werucchi (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
Great ending! As always..
Wo-hoo, Edward's gonna change Bella completely? Great! James left me kinda suspicious.. :/ I don't like that guy at all. He's creepy ;o
Anyway, awesome fic, keep going ;>
Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
please give us the family reaction to the fuzzy bathrobed Edward--no sneaking in without being seen! great chapter!
Author's Response: You betcha' viola. It'll be the first thing up. Already planned it. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: TwilightBellaDonna (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
Wow ... Great chapter.. I have really enjoyed this story.. Your writting is amazing...
Can't wait for the rest of this story.. I can't wait for them both too be changed and see how they act towards each other.. Hot! Hot! Hot!
Hurry and update the next chapter.. Lol.. Hope to see it soon.. Keep up the great writting..
Take Care
Mari (TwilightBellaDonna)
Reviewer: sizone (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
I'm laughing my ass off right now! That was hilarious, best start I've had to a day in a long time actually. Emmett is like the ultimate tension reliever, with some great assistance from Jasper. Can’t wait for the next chapter, I’m practically dying to find out what happens next in Bella’s changing.
Keep up the great work as always, and update soon :)
~Sizone
Author's Response: Glad to make your day a little brighter Sizone. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: simplicity (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
Ahahaha okay the pink bathrobe is the best! hehe SO glad he is willing to change her but I can't help being worried. Thanks for your hard work!!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
I can't say more than this. I LOVE THIS STORY. EVERY FREAKIN' WORD. Sigh...
Author's Response: Thank you. You are really kind to say such things and I'm honored that you would think so highly of what I've writeen. I'm sincerely humbled.
Reviewer: Jynxx (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
Ahh, what fun! I just love Emmett and when Jasper is around to help, it's even better. I do hope that they either change her before james gets to her or else he doesn't get the chance to bite her.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
OK.......................PLEASE let him change her ASAP-before JAMES BITES HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!also so they can have HOT ANIMAL SEX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
i thought it was a great chapter! this is really getting exciting.
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
That Almost-Sex-Scene was HOT!
Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
There isn't much I DIDN'T love about about this chapter!!! I liked Laurent's thoughts. I always rather liked the idea of him actually being a pretty okay guy!
I'm seriously worried about James! I mean, we all know what the jackass is capable of!!! It was rather interesting that Victoria went back and forth between wanting to consume Bella and wanting to please James. It did seem fitting that James would be annoyed with Victoria. He's not the romantic type :P lol
The mini-turn scene was TOUGH. I felt awful for Bella because she's going to have to keep going through that until Edward turns her. However, and you can call freaking weird or morbid, but the whole drinking blood and talking thing was just adorable :D lol. I know that most would find that rather disgusting, but I thought it was perfect. Oh!Oh!Oh!Oh! Don't even get me STARTED on that hot scene because I was like Oh.My.God :D lol. HOT! I was totally bummed when they had to stop. I know...I know...sigh :D lol. I am going to freaking LOVE when they don't have to because that has promise of being freaking WILD :D
Yeah...my thoughts are freaking out there tonight...I'm tired and full of caffeine :D lol.
I laughed my ass off at Emmett and Jasper...I love those two. Too freaking funny! It was SO wrong that Emmett could smell the, uh, aftermath of Edward's...ya know...release :D lol.
Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant...I've decided that you just need to hear that all the time and I'm thinking you just SO don't mind ;) I mean, I got that feeling the last time I said it :D ROFLMAO.
Loved it and can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: To me, blood is a vampire's chocolate or whip cream, if that makes sense.
Thanks for all the kind words, D. I appreciate them more than you will ever know. I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: MrsCullen_887 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
yay i cant wait until he changes her i want to see what power she gets ohh and if they get a 3rd power that would be soo cool =]
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
ROTFLMAO! God this is hilarious!
Loved the interaction between Edward, Jasper and Emmett in this chapter. That was hilarious. And of course I think you got the personalities of James, Laurent and Victoria perfectly. I always felt that Laurent was the most decent of the three, and had he met the Cullens on his own without James and Victoria, they could've become friends.
Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
LMAO! Rose's bathrobe. TOO funny.
Author's Response: That's payback for Bella and Edward's prank on the way to Aspen. Thanks for reading, Miss Poison.
Reviewer: aleene35 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
I so want to know what is coming next. PLease tell me he does it before someone else does it. I just couldn't bear it if Edward was not the one to finish her change.
Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
GOOD ONE! With the fuzzy robe. Wonder if he goes back with it on or in his birthday suit???
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
LOL loved it
Reviewer: Cully (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
Just loving the whole story and your unique take on it. Can't wait to find out what the combination of singer, creator - creation and soul mates means in terms of gifts for both Edward and Bella, especially the third shared gift.
Thanks for writing this. It is awesome!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen
Bow chick a wow wow! LMAO!
I hope she has a great birthday I will have to wait until tomorrow to find out!!!
Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 31: Play
i don't like the end of ths chapter. i like that you were totally original. why did you draw in the book? great chapter otherwise.
thank you for writing.
Author's Response: Not sure I understand what you mean with this. If you are talking about the mating thing and the book that contains that information, then I don't understand why you don't like it. Not sure what you didn't like, but I can't please everyone 100% of the time. I'm writing what I feel, and not every chapter or every story, for that matter will please everybody. So, I write to please myself. If I'm happy with it, even if others aren't, I'm okay with it. I still appreciate your readership and your honesty.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance
squeal! I am so excited now!
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