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Reviewer: where9 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
Hey! You can't just leave it like that! *Hiss angrily* Sorry, but please update quickly!
Also, I really like this story, so I don't want it to end soon. Can you write a sequel? :)
Author's Response: Thanks where9. Sorry to leave you hanging--well, not really. It keeps you reading and wanting more--lol! I'm evil--I know.
I'm thinking sequel, but I'll write several chapters before I decide to post. That's what I did with this one. Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: Hiraedd (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
omg don't leave me hanging to long!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
I wait...
Reviewer: Vec (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
I can't wait for thenext chapter!
Reviewer: siouxchef (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
I'd love a sequel, and I'm reserving my review until the cliffie is over. :P
Reviewer: michelleaz (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
I will love the story no matter what you do with it. It is so good!!!
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
it was great.. no tomatoes
and I love carlisle
He grinned. “Great. All I need is another stubborn child. As if you, Rose, and Alice aren’t enough.” LOL
Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
Listen Pussycat, I'll read what ever you write about, but personally I'd like a sequel. Perhaps during the sequel you can include some flashback Bella POVs--that way we get the proverbial cake and eat it too!
Thanks for the update--hope getting it posted cheered up your evil work day.
Author's Response: Thanks for your opinion, viola. I could do so much with Victoria and the Volturi.
I took a hot shower when I got home and it help. And the posting did cheer me up. But more importantly, the reviews did.
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 33: Loose Ends
I love this chapter, part of me wants to say that she is slowly starting to have a "heart attack" or something coragious to throw into that last episode. Bella knows that its happening, but she wants to try to keep it off until at least after Charlies....I'm excited to find out what is going to happen next!
Sorry I haven't been in the forum :( Been trying to write a story that could barely compare to yours! I LOVE YOUR STORIES!! ....
when were you going to update cinderbella? :)
Author's Response: Such a kind review, Lynnlin. Thank you. And I bet your story will be great. If you ever want to bounce ideas off someone, pm me. Anyway, I look forward to it and bet it will be great.
Ah, Cinderbella and my little neglected family of other stories. Well, I want to finish this one and then start back on those. I'm getting close to the end, and then I'll possibly write a sequel or the same story from Bella's POV--I don't know. But I'll write it leisurely, as I started this one, so I can focus on updating everything else. So, I can't give you a time frame. Right now, I'm feverishly possessed by this story. I think it's turning me into a vampire with all the late nights I'm pulling. That's the only time I have to write, except for days like today. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 33: Loose Ends
Ooooo, wonderful happenings....I hope Bella's fainting is because of the change....Please???
Love that Bella's one of them and in their family permanently. Even without her turning to a vampire, this is really great too.
Love the storyline and all your humour, wit and writing. Sorry, no time to visit on Forum, got more reading to do.
Author's Response: Understand about the time thing. Thanks for taking the time to read and review though. I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 33: Loose Ends
*scared* What's wrooooong? Supid Bella wanting to wait...
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 33: Loose Ends
Thanks for the James free warning. :) Oh so sweet and now it is a matter of time...Florida? URG! I love it!! More please!!!
Reviewer: artsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 33: Loose Ends
This story continues to be one of my favorites and so different from anything else--I love it! Thanks!
Author's Response: I absolutely love your reviewer name! It's hilarious! Emmett may have to use your name in a sentence sometime.
Thank you for the kind words and for reading, artsyfartsy.
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
WOW! this is exceptional, love the twist in the story line; Jazz's and Em's spoof on parental responsibilities; the pink fuzzy bathrobe and the remaining doubt about James's thoughts.
Have yourself a home made cookie....
Author's Response: Thanks for the virtual cookie. It's yummy! And thanks for the kind words, antipyro.
Reviewer: forever-his (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 33: Loose Ends
Can't wait to find out more.
Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 33: Loose Ends
There is no liking this chapter...I freaking LOVED it! :D lol. Seriously, you just have a way with these characters and are constantly reeling me in!!
I loved how you opened this chapter...The catcalls and such were hilarious and I want to see those pictures of Jasper ;) LOL
I really cannot wait for Bella to turn. I'm so worried about James and all that. Grrr. I understand her need to say goodbye, though. It's important. Like Bella said, she is going to die. That's just scary no matter how you look at it :)
I'm SO excited for the next chapter because that means we're closer to her actually turning :D lol
Brilliant, as usual ;) lol
Author's Response: Thanks so much, D.
So...where's the next chapter of Insomnia? Hurry please!
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 33: Loose Ends
I love all the teasing, just makes me set here and smile. I probably look like loony to my coworkers. Like I care :P
I loved how Edward thought Bella was licking her lips because of the group of school kids.
Author's Response: Just blow raspberries at your coworkers--lol! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: scimomyyy (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 33: Loose Ends
Hmmm? Very intrigued as to what is going on with Bella. I am anxious for Edward to just bite her already. :) I hope that James is an issue quickly resolved. I really want all that destined mate stuff for them to work out!
Post soon please! Great chapter.
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 31: Play
Yes, the game was well played, by all parties. LOL
I'm surprised that Bella didn't stutter a bit in calling Edward 'out' after being dazzled.
I would think that 47 seconds would be plenty for Edward to run away with Bella???? Maybe they would be seen regardless???
Author's Response: The other vampires would have smelled them, and the three of them would have cornered Edward, even with his speed. At least that's my thoughts. Thanks for reading, antipyro.
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 33: Loose Ends
please don't let bella have heart failure before edwards has the chance to change bella
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 33: Loose Ends
Edward + pink bathrobe=hilarious. The catcalling and the embarssing pictures of Jasper were great. I can't wait to hear more of that story, lol. Loved how things moved along in this chapter....the whole explanation of the blood thing, and Bella's nonbloodlust. Her seeing the Cullens as guardian angels was sweet. And Alice explaining about the Ethan thing, wow, didn't see that one coming. The debate for the hottest guy at Forks High...I have to cast my vote for Jasper, lol. And I'm definitely intrigued about Bella's blackout and chest hurting. I have a feeling she may not get to accomplish all that she wants too before the change. It's a funny reversal of roles now that Edward wants to change her immediately and she wants a little more time. I understand why she wants more time, but the switch between their roles is cute. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks TJ. Glad you liked so many things. I've been wanting to add that tidbit about Ethan for a long time, but I couldn't make it fit and didn't want to force it. This just seemed right.
Jasper would be my second choice for hottest guy. Edward is number one with me, though I adore what they did with Jasper's hair in the movie. I want to run my hands through it like I want to with Edward--lol!
Since the sex issue is already over with, the roll reversal is my substitute for their roll reversal about having sex before the wedding. Hope that makes sense. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: sizone (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 33: Loose Ends
Great chapter. Loved how Edward turned the threatening right back on Jasper with the picture thing.
I have a bad feeling about Bella's chest pain... really bad feeling.
Keep up the excellent work, and update soon :)
~Sizone
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 30: Man vs. Monster
Great chapter and a lovely way to put the xxx to xxx in, even though I don't mind reading something more graphic. It was very loving and not too harsh at all.
I especially love the 'mate' sentiments that Edward refers to, it's very touching and so meaningful.
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 33: Loose Ends
This chap was lots of fun to read :-)
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 33: Loose Ends
Deadly curious about the next chapter, I've really enjoyed reading your story! Thanks!
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