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Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance
Bella is just too observant to be kept in the dark too soon. He needs to tell her now. After that he needs to have that sex talk with Carlisle.
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In
“I can tell by your eyes that you hated every minute of that too,” he said with just a hint of sarcasm. I love Carlisle to death.
Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 8: Accident Magnet
all i can say it..... I love it :D
I cant wait to get caught up :)
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
I loved this chapter. Making out in the back seat of a car brings back fond memories. I think I'll go for a ride with my husband tonight.
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
Hopefully everything is going to turn out like it should! Great Job!
Reviewer: Lacey0186 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
Damn it you can't just leave it there lol:)
I really hope Edward rips him to shreds.
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike
“Are you okay, love?” I asked softly, my lips very close to her ear. I don't know abut Bella but that made me melt.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
Very actual packed.
Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
Yes, you're evil. Yes, I'm sure you already know that. Yes, I hate you. And yes, I'll be crawling back begging for more in no time at all.
~Mia
Author's Response: I'm sad that you hate me. Can't you love me despite my evil ways?
Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 33: Loose Ends
So mysterious. I love that you saved thatt tidbit about Alice saving her from Ethan until now. Well played.
~Mia
Author's Response: Thanks Mia. I've been wanting to put that in the story for the longest time, and I'm glad it finally fit. Happy you thought it fit too. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
“Too bad she’s clumsy as an ox,” snorted Rosalie. I love that Edward gets angry with his family for making fun of Bella's clumsiness. It's too cute. He seems to have more "protective big brother" feelings for Bella as a child. However you can see forshadowing of things to come in the last paragraph. Edward's family seems more supportive of the relationship than in the book. I hope this means that Rose has a better relationship with Bella in this story.
Author's Response: My Rose is much nice than book Rose. I've met a few "book Rose" types, and I detest them, so I couldn't write her that way. Thanks for reading and welcome to my story.
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
Ugh!! Cliffy hell! Awesome job!
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
OH! that was a close one. Edward the super hero to save the day. Give him a red cape.
Reviewer: nox76 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
Ok so throwing rotten fruit and veg would not make me feel better and nor would saying that you are a wicked harpy (LOL) so instead I will continue to abuse my already tattered finger nails in anxious anticipation of your next update!
Great as ever
Nina xx
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2009 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
Gah!!! Kick his butt, Edward! lol I vote for sequel, maybe even still from Edwards pov. His pov is always my favorite. =0)
Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
so good but damn the cliffies
Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
sequel from bellas perspective! please! and please update FAST! and i am not throwing virtual tomatoes at you. i am trying to be a very patient good girl. but that only lasts so long.
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
The My daughter is a Vampire sticker that's just awesome. I loved the dinner with Charlie and poor Alice to have to make such hard decisions.
Yes, the cliffy is more then evil. I hope Edward can drag James away before he has the chance to bite her.
I would really appreciate it if you would write a sequel. The story told out of Edward's POV is awesome and beside we all already know Bella's thoughts, so please stick with Edward.
Pretty please with Edward on top. :]
Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
I loved the dinner with Charlie, he really is taking all this vampire stuff pretty good. Hhahaha my daughter is a vampire bumper sticker! Perfect, I really think that sounds like Renee :P
I think that James needs to die slowly...
I just hope that none of the Cullens or Bella get hurt.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
*falls off bed, while taking laptop, charger that was plugged into the wall, and my bedsheets with me*
HOLY CRAP HOLY CRAP HOLY CRAP.
Now I'm off to a mani because crap I just chewed my nails down to a nub.
MORE SOON PLEASE!
Author's Response: That sounds like something that would happen to book Bella--lol! Thanks for reading, agiismsxx.
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
don't keep me in suspense too long, I'm dying to know what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: MissJadey (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
ARGH! There's absolutely no way I can study now. My attention will be completely bound for the rest of the night, wondering about this. I'm going to need a heck of a lot more than a mani, too - more like a nail transplant. There's nothing left.
I'm not going to boo or hiss, because even if I absolutely hate you on one level at the moment, this is brilliant story telling. I'm so glad I decided to read this story when I did; I wouldn't trade the excitement of waiting for an immediate answer, not by a long shot.
As for your decision: I think the way you've written it, we wouldn't really gain too much extra from Bella's point of view. Unless you've got a lot of material that we're not really aware of, I think the story would thrive a lot more from a sequel at this point in time. Though, again, it all depends on what material and what ideas you have floating around your brain. I have a lot of faith in your ability to construct engrossing, well-written stories with either option.
Congratulations on making the top ten! At this moment, you're currently eight on the list, and you deserve every single review.
xx Jade
Author's Response: The mom in me says, "Stop reading fanfic for now and go study!"--lol!
Sorry about the nail transplant. Thanks for the congratulations and for reading and reviewing so regularly. I appreciate you, Jade.
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
I love this chapter and can't wait for the next!!! I would love a sequel to see them get married and start life together.
Reviewer: loveroftwilight (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
please update soon & a sequal would be awesome!
Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
LIKE OMG A CLIFFIE BLAH AND I SAY SEQUEL SEQUEL HEHE its a great story and i sooo cant wait for next chapter
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