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Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
wow great chapter opmg u have to hurry with the next one
Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
Mmm... I vote that they just fuck hard and... hard... and... Jake? Jake who?
Reviewer: bananaapplepie (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
omg keep writing, i wanna know what happens!!! really hot adn sexy!
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
Bella dreaming about Jacob = double yuck... but if it gets Edward going, then go Bella!
Reviewer: roadkill2105 (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
Hoped you would have added a bit more, rather then just a retell,
but still good.
Update soon
x x Cassie
Reviewer: MIna (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
PLease make her forget Jacob, I want to read this.I hope Edward takes her hard and sweet. PLease continue soon,
Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
Cruel to stop where you did, but effective!
I'll be back for more...
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
I wonder what he's going to do.....Let's hope Edward wins. XD
PLease update soon?
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
WooHOO! Next Chapter Please!
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
oh, what a cliffie! Can't wait for your update!
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
oh, what a cliffie! Can't wait for your update!
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
why did you have to stop there?
Reviewer: dhArma (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Oh Jacob!
oh man usually we get a brooding jealous edward but this is way hotter lol ;) i cant wait for the next one dont keep us waiting :D
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Oh Jacob!
I can't wait for that chapter. That was seriously hot. Nice that you had the first real sex scene with Jacob.
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Oh Jacob!
I loved it! It was so painfully short that I practically pulled my hair out! Here's to hoping that you'll update soon! Great job!
Please update soon and keep up the good work!
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Oh Jacob!
hot. update soon!!
Reviewer: darkcullen (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Oh Jacob!
That was awesome! I can't wait for EPOV!!
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Oh Jacob!
Too HOT!
Well let's hope VIrginWard will get the HINT and put out ! How interesting that he said, why is it jacob can fuck you and I can't. I am sure Edward was meaning bc of his control, but it almost sounded like she wouldn't let him, or he wasn't able to...which I guess is what he thinks. But it is fascinating that he tasted her (and didn't do what he thinks he will - explode and take her with him into the white light!). Looking forward to EPOV...but I gotta tell you I am looking more forward to the chapter AFTER that when he actually MIGHT do something (bc if he keeps stopping BELLA isn't the only on who is going to get pruney in the cold shower!)
Loved your work (as always) thank you so much for posting! I am enjoying this So much (not as much as B in the dream, but almost! LOL)
Author's Response: Thank You!!:) The rest of the story has already been written, but I'm waiting for them to get posted... I absolutely love this story! I've written about 7, they just need to get posted...waiting...waiting...waiting... Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Oh Jacob!
AWESOME! more please...
Reviewer: littlelady (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 05:20 AM · On: Oh Jacob!
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Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 05:08 AM · On: Oh Jacob!
Wow. I can't wait!
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 04:18 AM · On: Oh Jacob!
I read all the chapters. A little bit too short for my taste but so far so good.
Keep writting. Can´t wait for the next chapter.
sincerely,
Karina.
Reviewer: 321go (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Oh Jacob!
Hahaha bella is so busted. Love love love : )
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 03:12 AM · On: Oh Jacob!
oh gosh. hmm, nothing like jealousy to speed things up
Reviewer: RobyPattinson (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Oh Jacob!
can't wait to see Edward's reaction to that vivid dream !!!!!! :D
haha so much fun is coming !!!!
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