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Reviewer: bubbadoghouse (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 02:12 PM · On: The Finale: Part One
Damn. Panty change in order! Wow...lucky girl, your Bella.
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 02:02 PM · On: The Finale: Part One
*giggle*
& that solves that...
Love this story :)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 01:52 PM · On: The Finale: Part One
Wow. So freaking hot. I'm in desperate need of a cold shower now...
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 01:43 PM · On: The Finale: Part One
THIS IS TOOOOO GOOOD!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOOOON!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 01:42 PM · On: The Finale: Part One
I think his plan worked. Haha. Please update soon?
Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 01:39 PM · On: The Finale: Part One
= D
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
Oh that was just evil. I love it though. Keep teasing me. Please?
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 02:18 AM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
Wow. This is so very erotic. I can't wait! I hope is DOES claim her!!!
Reviewer: Applefromatree (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
Wow :)
Love the story so far :)
please update very soon
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
oh PLEASE update soon.. Im panting over here.. its just not fair.
Reviewer: dhArma (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
hehe no no edward dont stop at all;)
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
He will definitely make her forget about Jake...if he can keep his anger about her dreaming of Jake under control!!
Reviewer: Wasbi215 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
plzzzzzzzzz write more very gooood
Reviewer: Wasbi215 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Intro
i love the begining
Reviewer: Eddielover (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
oh!!!! this is great!! hahaha keep it up i cant wait to see what is going to happen!!!!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 02:44 AM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
Dang it! Well her plan is working even when she's unconscious!
Reviewer: doowee (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 01:38 AM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
update soon! im having a heart attack!
Reviewer: BluEyeDevil (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 12:23 AM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
make her forget! make her forget!
loving it
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 11:46 PM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
Haha, this is a fun story. Jealous Edward is so funny, but I hope he doesn't regret it if he gives in... but knowing Edward, he will!
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 11:42 PM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
OMG...I got it now! When he said he wanted to "taste her tonight" he wasn't referring to the FUTURE (as is this stupid reviewer thought he woke B up in the morning and he was going to taste her that next night). OK, he is losing it and is tasting her now...so, we will see if he is all warm and fuzzy with the finger lickin' good deal or if he takes the plunge and jumps into the big boy end of the pool (OH PLEASE EDWARD PUT ON SOME SWIMMIES AND JUMP!)
Her boy tortures all of us, damn you SM...you didn't create a god, you created a monster...and there are a lot of us female types running up our water bills taking cld showers after reading this and other Edward-maintaining-his-virtue ff stories!
Loved it! Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
Tut Tut! I'll be waiting for the rest of this to unfold.
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Oh Jacob!
So I'm praying the next chapter doesn't actually stop where this one does! If so you are cruel cruel cruel :)
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Just Stop!
Bring on the lemons! Edward is such a self loathing wuss sometimes! But it is spot on his character. Cudos!
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Intro
Oh my you've created a monster named Bella I see. Should be interesting.
Reviewer: RobyPattinson (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Oh Jacob!! EPOV
WOW !!! I think he will make her forget about Jacob, how can't he ??? :D
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