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Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 02:42 AM · On: Oh Jacob!
I can't stand Jacob. I hope Edward gives her what she wants and she stays away from the dog.
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 02:11 AM · On: Oh Jacob!
Hot, hot, hot! Can't wait for the EPOV! Loved it!
Reviewer: twilightcrazz (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Oh Jacob!
oh, shoot, please do continue. this is getting to be much better than the orignal though i don't like bella to have such wet dreams about Jacob. sorry but i am Team Edward! anyway, thanks for sharing
Reviewer: doowee (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 12:41 AM · On: Oh Jacob!
hahahha fuN!
Reviewer: elphabacy35 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Oh Jacob!
Gah! I can't believe you ended it there!
Reviewer: brittanycullenn (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Oh Jacob!
when are you making the next chapter! hurryyyy!
Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Oh Jacob!
blla needs to take matters in her own hands
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Oh Jacob!
Haha, this is so funny. Great chapter. I'm glad you updated!
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Oh Jacob!
Brilliant!
Reviewer: Natesgal55 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Just Stop!
Bella is a whore!! Edward should fucking tease her with the ever beautiful Tanya and see how much she fucking likes that shit thrown back in her slutbag face!! Edward should just let Jacob have her, Edward is way to good for Bella, always has been!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Natesgal55 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Oh Jacob!
Your story sucks!!!!!!!! Edward always gets the shitty end of everything!!! Bring in someone better for him and make fucking Bella (the cuntbag fuckrag) jealous, lets see how the two timing whore would like that!!!!!!!!!!!! As I said before Edward is wayyyy to good for her especially if she wants to fuck the mutt, who is nowhere near as enchanting, beautiful, sweet, funny and goddamn sexy as Edward!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Natesgal55 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Just Stop!
Bella is a whore!! Edward should fucking tease her with the ever beautiful Tanya and see how much she fucking likes that shit thrown back in her slutbag face!! Edward should just let Jacob have her, Edward is way to good for Bella, always has been!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Oh Jacob!
LOL....loving this!! Pure torture for Edward!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Oh Jacob!
I can't wait to see how Edward handles this. Please update soon?
Reviewer: montepython4life (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Just Stop!
ahhh I can't wait for more lemons!!!
Reviewer: Eddielover (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Just Stop!
can't wait!! glad you updated!!!
Reviewer: dhArma (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Just Stop!
i love wen edwards jealous. more jealous edward plz :)
Reviewer: darkcullen (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Just Stop!
Thanks for updating! I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: darkcullen (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Just Stop!
Thanks for updating! I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: r-pks (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Just Stop!
This is seriously an awesome and terrific story but it would be great if you could update more. And maybe make the chapters a teeny it longer. And I also really don't like Bella. Sorry for all the complaints but this really is a wonderful story, I'm just very specific.
Reviewer: Leesh (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Just Stop!
That was good...very tease-ish though :o) Can't wait to drink some nice cold lemonaide :o)
Reviewer: littlelady (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Just Stop!
Alright. I got scared there and thought that was the end! Yes, more lemony goodness will be nice! Bring it! I like it so far... : )
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 04:34 AM · On: Just Stop!
Well Edward is a jealous guy, but hasn't quite figured out what Bella needs...and he must know that "that mutt" can and would give it to her. He is playing a very dangerous game with a very hormonal teenager...hmmm who would those lemons be with? Will Assward give in or will she find relief with the mutt...hmmmmmm
Not expecting answers, just musing along here...
Nicely written. I am glad you posted! Thanks you SO much! Have a wonderful weekend thinking about torturing Edward in the next few chapters! Tee Hee...he really needs to channel his inner "Emmett man-whore" ! LOL
Reviewer: seethesky (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Just Stop!
Great Story!
Reviewer: Sarahcini (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Just Stop!
im so ready for the lemons!
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