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Reviewer: melissaaax3 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2011 01:31 PM · On: Spaces (K)

I like this story, the Leah/Jake thing kinda threw me and I almost had a conniption when you said Sue was Bella's mom.
Explanation please? :p

Reviewer: Lobo19 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 10:04 PM · On: Spaces (K)

that was good. you should continue on with the story.

Reviewer: mrsblackandlautner (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 09:26 PM · On: Spaces (K)

OMG! I love the idea of Bella as a Werewolf. I always wanted to see Bella as a bad-a**. But.....Jake with LEAH??? How bout Jake with Bella? UPDATE!!!<3

Reviewer: alice18431863 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Spaces (K)



Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 03:01 AM · On: Spaces (K)

i like the story, but im confused to no end..... maybe a little explaining could take place in the next chapter.... update soon!!

Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Borderlines

Bella is a werewolf...but Jacob with Leah, ick!  Let's hope that changes!  Can't wait to find out about her genes...

Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Borderlines

Bella is a werewolf...but Jacob with Leah, ick!  Let's hope that changes!  Can't wait to find out about her genes...

Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Spaces (K)

When is edward gonna find out???? What's he gunna do???

Reviewer: merryXgirl (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Spaces (K)

Very interesting twist.  Charlie has some explaining to do!

Reviewer: alice18431863 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Spaces (K)




you know you love me,



Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Spaces (K)

Whoa!!! What a way to put a twist on does this effect Belle's relationship with Edward and Jake?  And why is Leah being such a bitch?

B. Quinn

Reviewer: klarsen117 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 03:20 AM · On: Spaces (K)

OMG! this is getting Soo Good! I hope there's an update soon!

Reviewer: klarsen117 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 03:15 AM · On: Borderlines

Jacob and Leah?? NOOOOOOOOOO!

Reviewer: klarsen117 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 03:07 AM · On: Realization

poor alice, she gets all the blame

Reviewer: SkyDancer (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Realization

woah woah woah woah!!!

wow i love this.... the best twist i've read so far!!

but, why cant jake and bella be together?? :,[

PLEASE let them be together!!

Reviewer: embracethewerewolf (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Realization

okay guys, sorry. I was hoping I would be able to get the chapter up before my flight to Wellington. I'm down there showing horses, so, yes. But, alas, the chapter wasn't written. I have a few more weeks down here, and then I'll be back home to write once more. :)

Reviewer: cullenboys4ever (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Realization

o my god! is BElla a werewolf? nooooooooooooooooo

Reviewer: ejdisme (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Spaces (K)

Wow this is such a different type of fanfic, I'm not usually into such stories, but this one has me hooked! Good job!


Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 03:24 AM · On: Spaces (K)

Dang! Ok, you got my attention...

Reviewer: lostinthought (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Spaces (K)

i am really liking this! Weird twist! Update soon!

Reviewer: alice18431863 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Spaces (K)

oh my GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I seriously need more. Please update again soon.




Reviewer: ChulaB (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Spaces (K)

Hmm.. crazy.. Need more;-)

Reviewer: creamandroses (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Spaces (K)


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Spaces (K)

This is such a unique story.  I am enjoying it!

Reviewer: WndrngY (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Spaces (K)

Holy Crow! Interesting plot twist. I was all set for Billy to be her bio dad which would've been hell on Jacob. :) I'd like more detail from just about everyone involved, but that's good story telling! Keep going!

Author's Response:

yep the next few chapters will further involve everyone and maybe I'll throw in some Embry and Leah POV's.

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