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Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Retribution
Wow, vengeful Edward is very scary. Intense, intrigueing story. I am really looking forward to future chapters.
Author's Response: Lol, thanks. The next chapter is waiting for validation, so hopefully it will be up soon!
Reviewer: shasta (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Old Acquaintances
I got so excited when I saw the new chapters but instantly sad when I was so quickly finished with them! :( I would love to read more about how what each Cullen is going through!
Author's Response: The next chapter is in the queue - thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Harsh Reality
What is Alice so concerned about, yelling NO NO NO? Why doesn't Rosalie want to see Edward?
Do they have Victoria?
I'm so very concerned for all of our favorites... and I want Victoria to BE GONE.
Author's Response: You're questions will be answered eventually. Rosalie didn't have a problem seeing Edward - I meant that she was upstairs looking after Alice - sorry for the confusion there. As far as who they have - the next chapter is up, so you'll find out there, if you already haven't. Thanks for reviewing!!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Bliss, interrupted
YES! Edward is manning up and doing whatever it takes to keep Bella in his life. I hope they find Victoria and tear her limb from limb... Gooooo Cullens!!!
Author's Response: Lol, thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Innocent Victim
Poor Charlie!
Poor Bella!
I need Cullens ASAP!
Author's Response: Cullens on the way! Lol - thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Cudleskitn (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Retribution
That was great.. I had only gotten through the first chapter before work took over my life i cant wait to read more..
Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully you enjoy the chapters to follow as well.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Retribution
I love the intensity of this story. The characters are so passionate. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you - that's a wonderful compliment, and I really appreciate it. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Nissa (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Retribution
Wow, that was intense. Can't say Riley didn't get what he deserved though. I wonder how Victoria will take the fact the Bella's still alive. Thanks for updating so soon. The chapters are good, I wont complain any more about them being short either.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. And don't worry - I didn't take it as complaining, the first chapters really have been short. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 03:41 AM · On: Retribution
Woohoo! Keep going! Love the story so far.
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Reviewer: MisguidedAngel (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Retribution
Wow...vengeful Edward is HOT!!
Well written...can't wait for the next chapter:-)
Author's Response: Lol - thanks!
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 03:32 AM · On: Retribution
I think it was good for Edward to let out some of his anger and it was good he learned more about Victoria. Sometimes you just need to act out the anger and maybe this will help him not feel so guilty....nah, Edward feels guild about everything :P
Great story! Keep the chapters coming.
Author's Response: Yeah, Edward does feel guilty about everything, lol. Thanks!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 01:12 AM · On: Harsh Reality
I'm worried about Alice and what she may have seen to freak her out so badly, because it sounds like it may be bad news for Bella. But honestly it seems like a good thing that she's not in pain anymore? Is it Edward's venom in particular that made it better, I wonder? Anyway, I'm sad you had to kill off Charlie. I can't wait to see more about why Bella's change is so odd...
Author's Response: Ah - all of your questions will be answered, eventually. I don't want to answer them directly right now, cause it may take away from future chapters, you know? I'm sorry about Charlie too...it just needed to be done in this particular story, as well as some other things. However, wasn't Charlie absolutely great in the movie? Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Harsh Reality
Oh let them have Victoria. Please let Edward rip her apart!!
Author's Response: You'll find out soon - the next chapter is in the queue!
Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Harsh Reality
This is intriguing! I'm enjoying the story.
Author's Response: I'm glad - thank you!
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Harsh Reality
loved it as usual!
Reviewer: BloodRedNight (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Harsh Reality
ROCK ON BURN THE BITCH SLOW, and that is very thoughtful of Esme
Author's Response: Lol. Thanks!
Reviewer: Nissa (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Harsh Reality
So they caught one of them. I can only assume it to be Riley since Victoria escapes all the time. I wonder what Bella will be like when she wakes up. I'm sure she'll wanna take down Victoria for what she did. Poor Alice, I hope she pulls through ok.
Author's Response: Yes, they caught one of them - you'll see which one very soon, it's already in the queue waiting for validation. Thanks for reviewing Nissa!
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Harsh Reality
Thank you for the update. Good story. Its definitely keeping me entertained :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: Nissa (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Bliss, interrupted
Nooooo. Your chapters are to short. I need more. Your killing me with all the cliffies.
Author's Response: Hi Nissa! I know, they are short chapters, but they will get longer, eventually. Sorry about the cliffies - that's a bad habit of mine. I am trying to get chapters updated as quickly as possible, but I can only put one in the queue at a time, and then it has to wait to be validated. Thanks again for reviewing!
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Bliss, interrupted
Awesome! More please! Sort of ironic isn't it? How Edward is always trying to protect Bella and talk her out of becoming a vampire and yet if she was a vampire she would be able to get away faster or defend herself :P
Author's Response: Thanks! And yes, it is ironic - silly Edward.
Reviewer: Juvarni (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Bliss, interrupted
Please, sir, may I have some more? ;-)
Author's Response: On it's way.... :)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Bliss, interrupted
Wow. I am floored by the intensity of this story. I don't understand how you only have 14 reviews... this story is phenomenal. Its so well written and SO rivating. Its gut wrenching and passionate. I can't wait to read more. This is excellent.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was hoping for more reviews - I don't know, maybe it just takes time for people to get interested? I truly appreciate your review, and I'm glad you like it so much - I hope you continue to.
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Bliss, interrupted
Even though I already know what happens, I still love reading this. *Shudders at the thought of Victoria and Reiley*
Reviewer: Cudleskitn (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 08:45 AM · On: Innocent Victim
more please...
Author's Response: On it's way.... :)
Reviewer: shasta (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Innocent Victim
This chapter made me cry. :( It was really good. I can't wait to see the Cullen's reaction to everything as well as what happens when they finally get their hands on Victora.. :D
Author's Response: Thanks - I'm sorry it made you cry.
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