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Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Unresolved Issues
"you're killing me smalls", you can't end it there. That's just mean and torturous. Absolutely love by the way.
Author's Response: Lol. Thanks! Oh - Stavanger1 started a thread for Choices in the AU forum, so if people show up, I may offer previews, or answer questions... :)
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Unresolved Issues
Thanks for the update. I guess Bella isn't going to be your run of the mill vampire with the way Alice is reacting. You're definitely keeping it interesting :)
Author's Response: Alice is reacting to something...I'm just not saying what. Don't worry, I won't take too long with the update. :)
Reviewer: sick_masochistic_lion (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 05:22 AM · On: Unresolved Issues
The end of this chapter has me waiting to see what has happend to Alice and i can't wait to find out!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: stavanger1 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 05:01 AM · On: Old Acquaintances
I'm starting one right now!
Author's Response: Yay thanks! Now we'll just have to wait and see if anyone actually shows up, lol. :)
Reviewer: Selene (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Unresolved Issues
Great story but I'm gonna be really upset if you kill Bella!
:-)
Author's Response: Hang in there! :)
Reviewer: stavanger1 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Unresolved Issues
This is getting really angsty and I love it. What's going on with Bella? Is she going to be ok? What about Alice?
Man, I hope you're able to update again soon. In the meantime, if you want something fun/scary/creepy to read, check out my story "In the Town of Grafton"
Great job!!!
do you have a thread on the forum?
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review, and I'll update asap. You'll get your answers in a while, but I'm not giving anything away. :) I have threads for my other two stories, but not for Choices. Feel free to start one, and maybe if people show up, I'll give previews / answer questions! :)
Reviewer: riverspirit (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Phone Call
I'm enjoying this!
Reviewer: TopazOynx (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Phone Call
I just read all six chapters and I am really intrigued by your version of the story. i was shocked to read you kill of Charlie but saw how it was needed for this version. I am really excited to read more and find out what happens to Bella and why she is still unconscious.
Author's Response: Thanks! I am sorry about Charlie - I hated to do it too, but yes, it was needed for the story. Thanks for taking time to review.
Reviewer: twinut (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 05:16 AM · On: Phone Call
I absolutely love your story, i just found it yesterday. Update soon! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you found it! :) The next chapter is already in the queue, so it shouldn't be long.
Reviewer: Anna (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 03:51 AM · On: Phone Call
Your characters are very well done. I'm glad Edward is trying to help Jacob through this. Bella would be pleased.
Author's Response: Thank you - I appreciate the compliment about the characters - that's important to me.
Reviewer: Anna (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 03:45 AM · On: Retribution
Well, I have to say it was sort of icky. Well written, excellent POV, but icky. However, I think I do understand Edward's rage. At least he knows Victoria's plans/methods.
Reviewer: Anna (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 03:39 AM · On: Harsh Reality
I don't mind short chapters - I'm just happy to have one to read. I suppose they've got Riley in the back. Boy, is he in trouble! I hope Edward will be able to help Alice. Or at least Bella can fill her in on why she wasn't able to see Victoria.
Reviewer: Anna (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 03:33 AM · On: Bliss, interrupted
Good job with Edward's POV. (And Bella's too, of course). Can't wait to keep reading.
Reviewer: Anna (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Innocent Victim
Oh poor Charlie. Poor Bella for having to be there. Nice job capturing Victoria's madness/sadistic nature.
Reviewer: Anna (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 03:22 AM · On: Old Acquaintances
Very interesting and well written beginning. It's a great "What if".
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 03:19 AM · On: Phone Call
This story is so good. I am really enjoying it. I can't wait to read more. You are doing an excellent job!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!!
Reviewer: Nissa (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Phone Call
Poor Jacob. He loves Bella but he really needs to imprint on someone else. I can't wait to see what happens when they catch Victoria.
Author's Response: Hi Nissa! Thanks for reviewing. As far as Jacob goes...don't worry about him too much. ;)
Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 11:08 PM · On: Phone Call
yeah the chapters need to be much longer but I love the story line... Adding this to my faves to keep up with it
Author's Response: Thanks for adding it to your favs! I'll work on lengthening the chapters, I know some of them have been short. :)
Reviewer: TWILIGHTRULESZ (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Phone Call
this story had me at the ecge of my seat!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking time to review!
Reviewer: Delta_Skelta (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Phone Call
WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE! MOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay I'm done now.
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks - the next chapter is waiting to be validated. :)
Reviewer: Delta_Skelta (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Old Acquaintances
AHHHHHHHHHH! WRITE MORE OR SO HELP ME!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Phone Call
Now Edward is strong again. Resolved. And your Jake gets some respect for this chapter.
Looking forward to Ch. 7, and hoping all goes well with Bella's change.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you thought Jake was alright.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Retribution
Wow. Edward here is really powerful. His love for Bella lets the killer come out - I feel like he probably needed this release in more than one way - for hurting Bella, for having to finally accept a changed Bella, for frustration over Victoria... his emotions are ridiculously on point for what I imagine.
Excellent job!
Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Phone Call
wow you weren't lying when you said it was short.
Author's Response: Sorry. :(
Reviewer: BloodRedNight (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Phone Call
Nice one this is getting interesting :), wonder how this will affect Victorias plans? and how will Billy and Jake deal?
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
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