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Reviewer: truthordare (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Timing

moooore i luvs it!



Author's Response:

Thanks, and thank you for reviewing!! :)

Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Timing

I FUCKING LOVE IT!!! If someone throws something at you I will personally beat them...

 

 



Author's Response:

LOL - Well, I'm grateful to have you as a reviewer - you've just been upgraded to my personal bodyguard! I'm glad you like the story, and I'm so glad you are right there with me, waiting to see where this goes. THANKS!!

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Phone Call

"Images of motorcycles and cliff diving flashed through my mind, which made me want to make a few select comments of my own."

*Snorts* So true! Jacob was never careful with Bella; he could have gotten her killed many times.

 

Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 06:40 AM · On: Timing

Thank God she is waking up! I hope she can remember Edward and not isn't mad at Alice.

Loving the story.



Author's Response:

Yay! She'll be waking up at the beginning of the next chapter.  :)

Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 06:40 AM · On: Timing

Hey - don't worry about the trust thing.  Go with it and it will work out.  You have the story in your head and most of these things end happy.  So far I'm totally intrigued.  I think it's a very fresh, AU plot.



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks - that's a wonderful compliment. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.  :)

Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 06:35 AM · On: Bliss, interrupted

I'm enjoying this story - update soon!

Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 06:19 AM · On: Old Acquaintances

Good start.  :)

Reviewer: Selene (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Timing

Ok. I'm feeling a little better that Bella is waking up... :-)



Author's Response:

Yes - she will be waking up at the beginning of the next chapter - yay!

Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Timing

Very good chapter. I can't wait until Bella wakes up. Great story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing.  :)

Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Timing

Leesa  you can come out now.  I don't have you because of this chapter, but then again, I already know what happens  :P Luvs ya!



Author's Response:

Lol - thanks for letting me talk it through with you.

Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 05:23 AM · On: Timing

Thank you for the update. I hope once Alice has a little time to recover she will realize Bella wouldn't blame her for someone else's actions.



Author's Response:

Thanks! More to come soon, I promise.

Reviewer: twilightteacher (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Timing

OMG....the suspense is killing me. WOW! Can you post like 5 times a day? :-) I keep going online to see if you have updated. What a great story...Bella and Edward will be happy right....RIGHT??????? :-) LOVE, LOVE this story!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I can't even fathom that someone checks daily to see if my story has been updated - I do that to other stories, so it's really hard to grasp the idea of anyone liking mine that much, lol. Seriously, thank you. Also - as I've mentioned before, another reviewer opened a thread on the AU forum - I'll offer treats and previews, answer questions, etc. while we wait for upcoming chapters if people visit!  :)

Reviewer: stavanger1 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Timing

It actually makes sense what you did. Bella is the reason why victoria has noone, james and laurent are both dead because of her. So now she's taking away everything bella has so she'll be alone too. Great job lady, I liked it alot even if it is sad!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Yes, Victoria is at the very least, seeking a vast amount of revenge. Things will begin to change though, so hang in there!

Reviewer: Kellie (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Unresolved Issues

Ack! What happens??? I have to say, I was a bit put off at first when Charlie died.. and it seemed a little odd that Alice didn't see what would happen by Bella going in the house alone... but I got all caught up in the story, so I don't really care about that anymore, I HAVE to know what happens next! :)



Author's Response:

Hi! Yes, I know it was sad to do that to Charlie...it was necessary for this story, though, as are some other things...just hang in there. As far as Alice - Riley explained that for the most part. It may seem odd to some people, but even in the real New Moon, Alice missed seeing it happen, so I don't think it's too far off the mark. I'm glad you stuck with it, and I hope you continue to like it - thanks for reading and reviewing!! *Also, I will say this - what happens in the next chapter is necessary too; Victoria needs to come across a certain way, so again - hang in there!  :)

Reviewer: Anna (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Unresolved Issues

Those poor Cullens! (And Jacob too). Very curious where this is headed. I am trusting that Bella and Alice will pull through. You've again done a marvelous job with the characters; it's well written, and simply fascinating. Thanks for writing!

Author's Response:

Thank you! All that I will say, is just hang in there...this story has a long way to go, and many more things will happen. You'll start to see some changes with Bella soon. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Roonie (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Unresolved Issues

Oh crap! Oh good lord, I can't stand this. What the hell is going on??



Author's Response:

You'll see soon. Thanks for reading & reviewing!

Reviewer: TWILIGHTRULESZ (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Unresolved Issues

OH MY GOD! WHAT HAPPENED! ARGH...... IS BELLA GONNA DIE? YOU CAN'T MAKE BELLA DIE! so many stories have had Bella die and i always cry, my family already thinks i'm crazy - with being obsessed with twilight and all..... but i still love this story and it still has me at the edge of my seat.



Author's Response:

Lol...hang in there, you'll see things start to change with Bella soon. I'll try to hurry with the update.  :)

Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Unresolved Issues

ACK! Hell of a way to leave us hanging there. I need more. QUickly please.

You are doing a great job!



Author's Response:

Sorry about that - I'll try to hurry, lol. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Totoro (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Unresolved Issues

Very interesting story :)

Keep up the good work



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Cudleskitn (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Unresolved Issues

poor alice poor bella

 

You have me on the verge of tears



Author's Response:

Don't worry - hang in there!  :)

Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Unresolved Issues

Oh goodness!  I am getting to be very worried about Bella's change not going properly.  Please let it be okay.  Please!

Your Jake here is a good man, and that's more than I'm usually willing to say about a Jake.

Great job.



Author's Response:

Lol - not a fan of Jake, hmm? You'll see things start to change with Bella in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: KerriDia (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Unresolved Issues

Simply put - MAGNIFICENT!  Ok, so  I found a word to replace awesome.  I LOOOVE this one.  It keeps getting  better and better!  Keep up the great writing!



Author's Response:

Wow - thanks!! :)

Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Unresolved Issues

Poor Alice! Is her condition linked to Bella's strange metamorphosis? Please get the next chapter up soon. The suspense is twisting my poor brain like a dishrag.



Author's Response:

Lol - I'll try to hurry! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Unresolved Issues

I am sooo curious as to what is gonna happen. I just hope Bella makes it through!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Don't worry...hang in there. **Remember, everyone - a thread was started in the AU forum - if people actually visit, I'll drop in and offer treats!  :)

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 08:32 AM · On: Unresolved Issues

Holy crap!  That can't be a good sign!  Great update!  Poor Jacob... he feels like he lost her forever.  I can't wait for her to wake up!  Great job!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your wonderful review, as usual Dulcinea21bella! Something will happen soon. The next chapter should be interesting.

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