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Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 12:42 AM · On: Memories

this is so sweet, i am getting a toothache. in a good way. this is just so sad and sweet, thank you.

Reviewer: brookie (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Memories

this is great. i love it. how many chapters are u gonna do? my faveroute twilighted story.

:)

Reviewer: KrystalCullen (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Memories

I have just began reading your story and I love it, it's very different to what SM wrote for Breaking Dawn, but I actually like it. And I completely agree with you about how Bella could've been the 'missing piece' of the Cullen family. She fits in so well. Anyway, great story!

Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Memories

Ok I managed to read this without crying till I got to the part where Alice kissed the cross.  That was so beutiful that Carlisle did the hidden symbols for Bella.  good chapter

Reviewer: professormoody (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Memories

I loved this chapter, made me abit weepy missing my Dad, wonderfully written as usual

Reviewer: danieblu (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Memories

I cant wait for more. youre doing a great job!!!

Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Memories

wow it was great really showed the grief it was good cant wait for next part

 

Reviewer: Stephanie Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Memories

That was beautiful!! I cried thru the whole chapter and in fact I'm having trouble typing it with my blurred vision..it was liek I felt Bella's pain and I can't wait for what you have planned next...you truely are a talented writer..you are amazing...I'm glad that the chapter was short..I don't have words to express how truely amazing you are with words...You rock!!!

                                       Much love,

                                                    Stephanie Cullen

Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Memories

Bella is working through her loss and grief it's good she has so much suport.

Thanks for posting.

Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Memories

Alice is so sweet. I love how you have portrayed her feelings toward Charlie. Now enough moping around, let's get to the revenge on Victoria but kicking thing.

Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Memories

Another great chapter.  So sad at Charlie's grave. :(

Reviewer: cb2brown (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Memories

So very moving -- it brought tears to my eyes.

Reviewer: maroonangel (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Memories

Good chapter...I really like the details in the cross =)  Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: amiebug (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Memories

that was good...happy it was updated so fast!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Memories

Please update soon? This was a good chapter.

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 03:19 AM · On: Doubt

Aww very cute :)  I'm glad Bella was able to emm kiss some sense into him :)

Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 02:10 AM · On: Doubt

nice very good cant wait for next xhapter

Reviewer: MasochisticLion (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Doubt

ooohhhh! cant wait for the next chapter! now you got me all exited!

Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Doubt

Sweet!  Insecure Edward!  LOL!

It was alittle short, but that's okay...it was still awesome!

Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Doubt

Silly Edward, thinking she only wanted him for his strength.  I hope he realizes now that isn't the case.

Now I wonder if they are going to move forward with their relationship?  Marriage coming any time soon?

Reviewer: amiebug (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Doubt

good chapter...when does the "lemons" come into play??? ;)



Author's Response:

They don't in this story - sorry. PG13.

Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Doubt

Awww that was sweet...hurry & update soon

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 11:33 AM · On: Doubt

Bella set Edward straight. Yay!

Good chapter!! Please update soon?

Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Doubt

Why they believe they are not enough for each other is beyond me.

Thanks for posting.

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Doubt

Yeah!  Finally they kiss!  I can't wait to read the next chapter!  Now that Bella is healing her mind, they need to spend some time exploring each other.  They were never able to do that before because of all of the boundaries.  Bella wants him.  She has always doubted whether Edward was truly sexually attracted to her because he was always pulling back.  He doesn't have to anymore...

Also, before Bella was turned, there was an outstanding marriage proposal out there.  Will that be addressed?  I love this story.  You are doing a great job!



Author's Response:

Ah - but keep in mind, just because Bella is 'less breakable,' Edward's morals are still very much so intact. As far as the marriage proposal issue, it will be addressed, but it won't be immediate - Edward is letting Bella heal, and doesn't want to push her. Hope that makes sense!   :)

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