What a cute ending to the chapter!  I loved in BD how Bella finally accepted clothes, and looking nice, and I'm glad that you incorporated here, along with her continuing practicality.

I can see her power of pushing people away can come in handy during a fight!

i'm excited that now bella is looking for victoria...update soon

It's going to be interesting to see how Bella is going to destroy Victoria.

Thanks for posting.

Just started reading and it's really good can't wait for more.

Awww very nicely done.  I'm glad Jacob is being so reasonable about all this.  And I feel heartsore for Billy :(  I'm glad Carlisle has made it easy for him to get to the grave by cutting the path.

Very well done, now update update update :)

OMG are you going to do more chapters plz do because this is about the best fanfic i have read and i have read heaps of them!!

I know Bella has a lot to deal with - a whole lot. But I am suprised that their physical relationship doesn't seem to be progressing at all now that she isn't breakable. You've written that her grief is passing quickly even for a vampire and they are up all night kissing, just suprised it hasn't moved forward.

I like Jake still wanting to be friends, glad she isn't gone forever rather than freaking her out because she's a vampire. And that he's accepted that Bella really does love Edward. They can still be friends - as long as they stay downwind of each other ;)

Author's Response:

As far as their physical relationship - just because Bella isn't breakable anymore, that doesn't change Edward's morals. Her fragile human state wasn't the only thing stopping Edward from moving forward with her when she was human. He's still the same Edward. Also, Bella isn't the same carefree, wanting to make out all the time person she was as a human. She's been through a lot - and is still trying to figure out a lot, as well as process things. Hope that helps.   :)

 

Beautiful chapter ;).  Obviously it was excellently written.  It may have been short, but it was great...so I'm happy.  Looking forward to the next, and I will definitely be checking out Burned--I was ubber excited when I got the email in my mail box showing that one!

This chapter was perfectly titled.  It IS Closure.  Great update.  It's nice that Bella's emotional roller coaster has hit a little lull, everything was happening so fast for her.  Are her and Edward going to discuss the outstanding marriage proposal?  I hope so... at least they know they are committed to each other.  I am eager for more.  Wonderfully done!

Good chapter. Please update soon?

So does Bella have other Vampire characteristics?  Does she sparkle in sunlight?  Since blood tastes like normal food, can she eat normal food?  Anyway, love the story, keep up the great work and update soon!

This was such a beautiful chapter.  When Bella visited the grave, and saw the cross, I just about cried.  It was so incredibly touching.  The details on the cross were perfect, and I could visualize it in my mind.  What a wonderful tribute for Charlie.  I always loved his character, and you paid him the highest tribute I have ever read.

Sorry I'm so late in reviewing.  I was out of town, and am trying to catch up!

I'll be short today ;).  Great chapter...you have me tearing up!