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Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Anticipation
Oh, I can't wait to see Victoria get what's coming. Eek! I'm so excited. As Emmett would say. . . "Bring it!"
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Anticipation
Hah! You're not sorry at all! Mean ;)
Author's Response: Honestly, I did cringe a bit when I hit "submit," lol. It was a big cliffhanger... it was just the best way to split it really, lol. :)
Reviewer: ncchris (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Anticipation
ARRRGGGHHH!! Can't. Wait. For. Next. Chapter. Soon?? Please??
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Anticipation
This was such a good chapter!!! I can't wait to see the Bella/Victoria showdown.
Please update soon?
Reviewer: sick_masochistic_lion (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Anticipation
WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!
THATS THE WORST CLIFF HANGER IN THE WORLDDD OMG I NEED TO KNOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN I NEE TO KNOW I NEED TO KNOW RIGHT NOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL - again, sorry, everyone - sorry. I won't keep you waiting long though. :) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Stephanie Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Anticipation
I just threw a pretzel at you..lol! AHHHHH so good....I'm shivering with anticipation..that was a very good chapter..You Rock!! PLease hurry..Please Hurry..Update soon Update soon...lol..love Stephanie Cullen
Author's Response: Lol - I thought something like that might happen...sorry about that cliffie. :)
Reviewer: Melodic (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Breaking Through
Loved the last two chapters!
Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 01:03 AM · On: Breaking Through
I really enjoyed this chapter! I feel like they finally get to do something, and Bella will finally get her revenge. Will you have her fight the newborns? Would Edward be accepting of that? I know in BD he had trouble with training her to fight.
I really enjoyed Alice being all fiesty! She wants to take them on as well, and Edward seemed to enjoy that too.
Reviewer: ReeseB (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Breaking Through
wonderful! I cant wait to see how it plays out...this chapter may have been short but it certainly propels the story forward which is ideal!!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Breaking Through
Great chapter. Can't wait to read more! Please update soon?
Reviewer: KerriDia (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Breaking Through
You've done it once again. Choices gets better and better. Another awesome chapter! This is one instance where I'm looking forward to a Bella/Victoria reunion...
Reviewer: ncchris (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Breaking Through
AWESOME story! I can't wait to see the next chapter!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Breaking Through
Great job
Reviewer: snowwolf (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Breaking Through
Great chapter! Bella is intense!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Breaking Through
OK, you know what everyone wants- for Bella and Edward to be intimate- SEX- Bella REALLY needs some comforting, even though she is grieving, she needs that, too.
Reviewer: stavanger1 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Breaking Through
Yay!!! It's getting clearer. I can't wait for the battle. Well done, it was a great, fun read!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 04:19 AM · On: Breaking Through
Great update. You can really feel the tingle of a battle approaching on the horizon!!!
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 02:18 AM · On: Breaking Through
I like the way you are describing the fractured workings of Victoria's mind. She is definitely one unhinged character.
Reviewer: shorti (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 02:09 AM · On: Breaking Through
I hope you update soon.
Reviewer: sick_masochistic_lion (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 02:04 AM · On: Breaking Through
oooooh YAYYAY FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT!
GREAT CHAPTER!!
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 01:06 AM · On: Breaking Through
Yea we are getting closer to tearing Victoria apart!!!! Good chapter ..update soon
Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Breaking Through
ohhh yaay vic is gonaaa die woot lol
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Breaking Through
Wow Bella is going to kill someone. Victoria is going crazy that is going to be a bad suprise for Victoria when she finds out that Bella is still alive (haha).
Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: Stephanie Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Breaking Through
Good chapter!! I loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter! You are doing very good with this story! I can't wait to see Victoria's face when she ses that Bella isn't dead and that she is going to tear her apart!
Reviewer: KerriDia (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Combined Strength
Brilliant as normal ;).
" I made Emmett alternate between doing the ‘cabbage patch’ and ‘running man’ dances. Everyone laughed hysterically at this last display." I did exactly that!
I love how you've captured the characters personalities...Especially Alice...and I love that the girls got to have some bonding time!
One thing that I really love, that doesn't necessarily pertain to this chapter, is your writing style. I've said something along these lines before, but it's amazing. No matter how long the chapters are, they don't seem long. You reach the end of the chapter, and you just want to keep reading. That's something that's hard to come by. It's fun to read (much like Twilight).
Excellent as usual!
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