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Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Revenge

I love Victoria's demise! I know that sounds terrible, but you wrote that scene, this chapter so well. I could almost feel Bella's anger!

I can't wait to read more. Please update soon?

Reviewer: snowwolf (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Anticipation

Woot woot!

Reviewer: leslieljs713 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Revenge

Loved it. The fight was amazing. I've really enjoyed reading this.

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Revenge

Wow.  That was fantastic.  I love the POWER she was able to control.  Really  intense scene.  It was so powerful.  I love that the Cullens let her have her revenge, but all surrounded her to support her, but not interfere.  I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter.  I am looking forward to what is still to come! 

Reviewer: lovetwilightforever (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Revenge

i love this story!!!!! thank you for putting so much of your time and effort into it!
:D

Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Revenge

Awesome-tastic!

Reviewer: kimmyg (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Revenge

It was amazing-perfect!! Im glad Victoria is finally finished! :)

Reviewer: cb2brown (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Revenge

This was a great ending for Victoria.  however, I wonder if Bella is going to feel some remorse later for acting like a monster, herself.  She seems like the type to struggle with that even though what she did was justified.

Reviewer: Dazzling (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Revenge

Please tell me that this is not the end!

Reviewer: sick_masochistic_lion (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Revenge

WOW!! you left me with a big cliffie last chapter but you certainly made up for it with this amazing chapter! the scene was so well described that i felt like i could have been there myself! Im soo happy to see victorias end at the hands of Bella and her making it torturoous and using everything she had to make victoria suffer. GREAT JOB BRAVOO

Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Revenge

Thank you! Bella was really impressive and unexpectedly vicious. I didn't think she'd be able to go through with it, but Victoria did deserve some torture. I'm looking forward to what happens now that the Victoria problem is resolved.

Reviewer: alicenative (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Anticipation

Come on!  Need update soon..

Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Anticipation

PLEASE continue!!!!!

Reviewer: DazzledBrunette (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 04:50 AM · On: Anticipation

OMG!!! great chapter as always, and i can't wait until your next update!!!

Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 01:06 AM · On: Anticipation

Such a mean cliffie. Please update soon.

Thanks for posting.

Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Anticipation

I love that they saved her for Bella to get her revenge!  I'm really looking forward to reading that!  She won't be able to get away! 

I really enjoyed strong Bella!  Her "let me do this" attitude was great!  All the others will just hem her in, forcing Victoria to face her.  Love it!

Reviewer: lovetwilightforever (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Anticipation

omg, i love it!
:D

Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 10:29 PM · On: Anticipation

Great Chapter, Leesa!

Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Anticipation

Wonderful scene! I really like how Edward dragged it out turning Victoria in different directions and made Victoria face all these people she'd enraged. Amazing. And I appreciate the few sentences from previous chapter. It makes it much easier to pick-up the storyline.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Anticipation

WOWOWOWOWOW

Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Anticipation

OMG A CLIFFYits a great chapter lol victoria is so in for it cant wait for next chapter

Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Anticipation

All I can say is you better get that next chapter up quick!

Reviewer: Haleylauren (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Anticipation

EEEEEPP! I HAVE TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! PLEASE HURRY!

Reviewer: brookie (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Anticipation

    OHHHHH! THATS SO MEAN!  when are you putting the next chapter up? i love this sory!



Author's Response:

*sorry* I know, I know - it was a horrible cliffhanger. I won't make you guys wait long. Thanks!  :)

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 01:04 PM · On: Anticipation

Brilliant!!!

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