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Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Happy Surprises
great chapter loved the ending of course can't wait for more
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Breaking Through
i love the thrill of the hunt
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Combined Strength
i love Alice..
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Closure
this is perfect...you are a very good story teller
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Memories
very good and sad
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:01 AM · On: Doubt
edward is such a putz....he doesn't get it
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 04:56 AM · On: Theory
i also believed that sm would make bella the missing peice of the family...full circle.... great story
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Insecurities
okay she did have her interaction with jasper and alice...it totally slipped my mind...very good.
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 04:34 AM · On: Tenacity
i would've loved to see her reaction with jasper.
Reviewer: k89g (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2009 04:24 AM · On: Happy Surprises
Just fabulous! I don't really know what to say other than I absolutely love the progression you have taken Bella through in this story, talk about an emotional rollercoaster! Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 04:23 AM · On: Experimental Procedures
I LOVE BELLA....she is more what i would've imagin....thank you
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 04:01 AM · On: Side Effects
I love this...wonderful
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Change of Heart
I love the fact that Jacob is in this story...so many people cut him out
Reviewer: cb2brown (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 03:42 AM · On: Happy Surprises
OMG -- I cannot let my daughter read this because it would set her expectations unrealistically high! Edward is just the perfect man. I love this story.
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 03:40 AM · On: Concealing Evidence
i think the "grossness" was well planned out... good job
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Questions & Unexpected Responses
wonderful...ur a brilliant writer
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 03:19 AM · On: Awakening
great story so far....very good
Reviewer: cullenboys4ever (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 03:09 AM · On: Happy Surprises
wow! that was so sweet!
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 03:07 AM · On: Timing
I found this chapter very well written... good job
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 02:59 AM · On: Unresolved Issues
i truely hate to see alice in pain...she is my fav....wonderful story
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 02:43 AM · On: Phone Call
i like that you kept jacob
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 02:40 AM · On: Happy Surprises
Alice rules! ;)
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 02:39 AM · On: Retribution
if anything would happen to my love i would act just as crazy
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 02:34 AM · On: Harsh Reality
very well thought out
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 02:29 AM · On: Bliss, interrupted
great twist with bella this closes to death
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