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Reviewer: Hev99 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Nerves
Aww nice girly chapter there! I love Bella's wedding dress, I want to get married just so I can wear it! Great chapter, but can't wait to see how them refusing the volturi again goes down.. I'm gonna hazard a guess at not well!
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Nerves
I love it and the dresses are absolutely awesome.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: Leslie Mc (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Nerves
OK I can't wait! I figure the Volturi will somehow break up the wedding. I don't know if I can last much longer without knowing what is going to happen next and what the Volturi are going to do! Write woman, write!
BTW: The dresses are beautiful! !
Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 03:22 AM · On: Nerves
I want to be hearing the wedding march, but instead I'm hearing more of a dum, dum, dum, dum, dum or doom music, because I have a bad feeling that there are going to be some unwanted wedding crashers. I hope I'm wrong, but that's my feeling. Darn Volturi and stupid out of control, power hungry Aro get on my last nerve.
Still, I enjoyed this chapter very much. Emmett and Alice's "fight" at the beginning was too funny...so was Jasper's reaction...lol, and old fashioned Edward ignoring tradition and trying to sneak off to see Bella before the wedding was sweet and cute. This chapter was just fun to read...thanks for posting. :)
Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Nerves
Emmett and Alice cracked me up! They fight just like siblings, and I can easily imagine them behaving just that way.
The dresses are beautiful. I'm sure Edward will be very pleased. I'm really looking forward to the ceremony.
I thought you did a great job of inserting little reminders of the tension with the Volturi. I can feel the tension stirring right under the surface. It reminds me of a volcano. Everythiing seems calm and quiet as you look at the mountain, but inside it's set to blow. Great job!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Nerves
nice
Reviewer: Stephanie Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Nerves
AWsome..I am so excited that you put pics of the dressess up..I was trying to visualize in my head..lol..I cant wait for the next chapter,,YOu have done an excellent job so far..Keep up the good work!!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Nerves
I'm getting creeped out re: The Volturi.
Love the pics. Thank you!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Wedding Plans
This story has kept me up all night! lol It's about half past three in the a.m. and I simply MUST finish it.
I wasn't hugely into planning my wedding when I had to. I feel for Bella. I wanted simpler, too.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Happy Surprises
Nice ride!
And pretty proposal, too. I saw it coming. :D
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Revenge
Never.
But NEVER.
Make Bella angry. When she's got her family with her.
Like. Ever.
Whoa.
Reviewer: SaraCGeorgeBob (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Nerves
Thank you so much for the pictures! I try really hard to visualize but end up with some weird vision in my head that I know you're not trying to communicate. So, thank you.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Memories
That's a lovely memorial site for Charlie. Many kudos to you AND Esme.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Tenacity
Of COURSE Carlisle has a theory. He ALWAYS has a theory. *grin* I do hope it's a good one. Multi-amped Bella will be way too much like Superman Sans Kryptonite otherwise!
Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Nerves
those dresses are beautiful...exactly how i pictured Bella's wedding dress should be...thanks for the visual inside the chapter...other authors make us work for it and add the link on their profiles...while you added the pictures to the chapter itself brings a depth to your story! great job!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Nerves
LOVE IT!!!CAN'T WAIT FOR THE HONEYMOON!!!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Change of Heart
Dying from Bella-Curiosity now. Gak!
Jacob, from the original series, is one of my favorite characters, flaws and all. So far, he works for me in your story. Thank you. :)
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Concealing Evidence
What? Did Edward really say this:
Neither of you, or anyone else, needs to feel guilty, all right?
*gasp!* Well, we always knew Bella'd be good for him, huh? :)
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Timing
I hope people weren't horrid to you for killing Renée and Phil. I've had to off characters in books and it IS a compliment when they like people enough to protest, but I trust you. :)
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Retribution
I think this works for Edward. Darkly, but yeah. The fire was perfect.
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Nerves
Great job...i love the dresses
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Nerves
Great chapter. I can't wait to see them get married! It was hilarious that Alice was trying to take Emmett's leptop away from him, lol.
Please update soon?
Reviewer: caednkat (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Nerves
Great chapter. I'm interested to see how the whole thing with Aro plays out.
Reviewer: Tunesgrl (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Nerves
AWWW! I like this chapter, although I wish it was longer and would've included the wedding. Can't wait!! :)
Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:13 AM · On: Jacob's Happiness
I liked that Jacob found someone else to imprint on. I always wondered what would be the consequence if a wolf's imprint died young. Would there be another? I don't believe there is only one person out there for anyone, and having that translate to the imprint works beautifully! Just, once the imprint happens, they don't see anyone else, much like when we fall in love.
Ah, the wedding! I certainly hope the Volturi don't crash it!
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