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Reviewer: Hev99 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Imminent Conclusions
Aww I do love a happy ending! Nice story, thanks for writing!
Reviewer: tmbilling20 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Imminent Conclusions
I absolutely loved your story! It's one of the better fan fictions that I've read! Although I absolutely adore what Stephenie Meyers chose to do with Bella's powers, I loved your version as well! I had always kind of thought that she would pull from everyone else's though not quite as well put as yours! I thought you did an awesome job!
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Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Imminent Conclusions
Well, you tied it all up in a nice little bow, now didn't you? You clever girl! Congratulations for finishing a wonderful story that I've thoroughly enjoyed reading. I loved Bella having Alec almost finish off Jane. That would have been quite fitting, right? Also, Felix really will NEVER touch Bella again. HA! That jerk! I still haven't forgiven him for "dibs". :-(
Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Thanks for the lovely read.
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Imminent Conclusions
That was great!
Reviewer: mandee81 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Imminent Conclusions
awesome story!! i loved that whole thing, congratulations on finishing it! it is sad to be done though, i will have to read more of your work:-)
Reviewer: minutewithoutyou (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 04:24 AM · On: Retribution
Woah that totally rocked how you had Edward kill Riley and I so hope he gets a chance at Victoria too! I totally love the story so far!
Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 03:17 AM · On: Imminent Conclusions
Thank you for writing this story and sharing it with us. I luved your ending...it was perfect. I was wondering how they would all get out of this alive. Your resolution was brilliant and very plausible. Great story from beginning to end. Thanks again. :)
Reviewer: cullen_gurl1924 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Imminent Conclusions
Great story!!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Imminent Conclusions
nice
Reviewer: Anniec (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Imminent Conclusions
I loved it was really awesome but is the voluturi going to go back on there word?
Reviewer: Sariana (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 12:34 PM · On: Imminent Conclusions
wonderful story!! as well as CFCT!! I have them both saved as favorites!! u ar amazingly talented!!!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Imminent Conclusions
sweet, i really liked it.
Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Imminent Conclusions
Great story, exciting and dramatic and I enjoyed it a lot.
My only regret is that you did not let Bella destroyed Jane, Alec and Demetri, for as long as they are alive there is a possibity that Aro and Caius will go back on their word, and they will be vulnerable especially if Bella and Edward are not around, and Alice is not around to tell them of the next Volturi threat. I hope that the sequel takes care of them.
Reviewer: twilightvamps (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Imminent Conclusions
great ending!!! i really enjoyed this story!!!
Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Caius's Decision
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Reviewer: KimberleeMichele (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Imminent Conclusions
I just found your story and couldn't stop until I had finished it! It was wonderful! I will be checking out your stories. :)
Reviewer: Mels78 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Imminent Conclusions
Very good. I wondered how you would wrap that up in one chapter but I like it. I wish we could have had more. :)
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:20 AM · On: Imminent Conclusions
Awesome ending. Thanks for the ride.
Reviewer: NightCullen (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Imminent Conclusions
i loved it!! amazing!!
Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Imminent Conclusions
You gorgeous, gorgeous, fantastical writer. Thank you for such excellent entertainment, beginning to end. I have thoroughly enjoyed losing myself in your craftily plotted words. Thank you.
~Mia
Reviewer: scrider (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Imminent Conclusions
Sequal to this story too???? You could totally pick up during their time in New Hampshire! Please?
I loved this story!!
Thanks for writing,
Sarah
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Imminent Conclusions
This chapter was great! I'm sad to see this story end. :(
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Caius's Decision
From a beautiful wedding and wedding night to this BS from Caius! Oh, he makes me so angry! I don't know how you're going to resolve things and wrap up this story in just one chapter, but you've taken us this far so I trust you. Disappointing that Edward and Bella have to postpone their honeymoon because of this nonsense though...
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 11:34 PM · On: The Ceremony
Sorry, I know this chapter has been out awhile, but I just now read it, so here's my review:
The wedding was wonderful. I felt a sense of calm and beauty along with purpose. The Cullen family was so loving and supportive. Jacob provided some great closure to his relationship with Bella by showing up with Ailen. The wolves were present as guests, and you didn't mention any "humans" so I'm thinking everyone was able to relax and enjoy themselves, no pretense necessary. Edward was so sweet and loving and patient with Bella. They are such a good couple. I wish we could all find our own Edward to love and love us in return. *sigh*
Reviewer: Sylvia Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Caius's Decision
OMG ....SO IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY DEF.. ONE OF MY FAVS CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!
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