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Reviewer: miaokuancha (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 02:04 PM · On: One Shot

This is such a wonderful and moving story that I had to read it again ... about my third or fourth time, actually. *sigh* Have to say it makes me a little teary, every time. Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: The Night (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 05:43 PM · On: One Shot

I really loved this! i almost cried during the part when he was in mexico. thanks for a great story :]

Reviewer: MusicAngel07 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 09:03 AM · On: One Shot

I loved it. Very good.

Reviewer: singingkat (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 02:35 AM · On: One Shot

I'm so glad that I've discovered your writing...it's absolutely exquisite. I love the way you use repetition to get your message across, but it's never excessive. And the way you've captured Edward's emotions is so in character and beautiful. Thanks for sharing this...lovely job!

Reviewer: LeahSylvia (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 11:41 AM · On: One Shot

How wonderful. Brought tears to my eyes at the end. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: miaokuancha (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 05:27 AM · On: One Shot

Wow, this is just exquisitely beautiful. I love the way you have shown Edward's character. His slow journey toward the unknown Bella who awaits him in his future. You hint so delicately, yet exactly enough, at the losses which are necessary to bring them together. And each vignette across the years is just so poignant. Beautiful, beautiful story-telling.

I thought I had reviewed when I first read it, but see that somehow I didn't, or it didn't post. So here is a reprise.

Bravo!

Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 08:22 AM · On: One Shot

That was absolutely stunning.

Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 05:16 AM · On: One Shot

that was really great. well done

Reviewer: VampGirl (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 02:49 PM · On: One Shot

That was perfect. I loved how he came full circle. Thanks for writing - I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 05:08 PM · On: One Shot

Beautiful story

Reviewer: Lyssie (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 02:27 PM · On: One Shot

An absolutely beautiful take on Edward. I loved the bits with his mother and Esme.

Just gorgeous. Thank you.

Reviewer: giselle (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 02:20 PM · On: One Shot

Wow, what an amazing, gut-wrenching, heart-breaking read. I'm so glad this got recommended to me. I absolutely shattered when Carlisle told Edward it never got any easier to be alone, and when Edward was gone during NM. What vivid, gorgeous imagery you evoke here.

I love, too, how you worked through his relationship with each family member--the Joy of Sex part was both funny and lovely at once. And I like very much the idea that Edward gave his mothers' pieces away as gifts. It was a really nice twist on the whole idea.

Masterful writing, and just a beautiful piece all around. Thank you for sharing this.

Reviewer: ChieriAn9el (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 01:21 PM · On: One Shot

I loved it!! That was beautiful.. Sadly, in the book it seems that Bella has not grasped the significance of him giving her the diamond heart or his real heart. But it's a very good study of Edward..

Reviewer: elnutella (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 01:02 PM · On: One Shot

Beautiful.

Reviewer: goldenmeadow (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 11:41 AM · On: One Shot

Well well well. That was stunning, poignant, beautiful and sensual!

Thank you for that little piece of the utterliy sublime. I read it all with a bittersweet smile, feeling my heartbreaking for Edward, and waiting for his time to come.

Soon.

Just gorgeous!

Reviewer: Ruby_Wednesday (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:03 PM · On: One Shot

what a wonderful story. thank you for sharing!

Reviewer: kalika (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 12:09 PM · On: One Shot

This story is too beautiful for words. That's all I can find to say. I am in awe.

Reviewer: The Old One (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 03:44 PM · On: One Shot

Really, really, fantastic writing.

Reviewer: irebporti (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2009 01:44 AM · On: One Shot

houroflead recommended this story in the MML thread... i have to say BRAVO

i've never read anything like it, you captured what edward was sure to have been feeling perfectly - to the t - amazing story

Reviewer: jace (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 08:08 AM · On: One Shot

This is absolutely lovely! I love how you kept using the "whole heart" theme, which of course tied in quite well with the heart charm Edward gave Bella. And the idea that Edward drew a picture of Bella before he'd ever seen her...and such a romantic, mature picture at that...very intense.

Thank you!

Reviewer: that_writr (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 03:58 PM · On: One Shot

Oh, I liked this! Very nice. I missed it at Christmas. :-)

Reviewer: houroflead (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 01:18 PM · On: One Shot

This was really lovely. The writing is eloquent and your use of repetition is sparse but timed such to be entirely effective. I love the span of time and images of Edward masturbating never hurt anything :)

The human peppered in was very fitting and subtle.

Great work.

Reviewer: missbluejuju (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 02:03 PM · On: One Shot

That was beautiful.

It was so very Edward. You really captured him well.

Oh, and the mental picture I got from your End Notes was totally weird and awesome. Tee hee.

Reviewer: redpanda (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 06:52 AM · On: One Shot

This is really, really wonderful. Adding to my Favorite Stories for sure.

Reviewer: Nimoko (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 11:07 AM · On: One Shot

Oh, wow. ::wipes a tire from her eye:: The ending literally made me tear up with happiness.

This is magnificent. Your snapshots of Edward's long life capture him perfectly. I loved getting into Edward's head; your characterization is spot on.

Thank you for this journey.

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