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Reviewer: neell (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2016 07:37 PM · On: Storm: Warning - A letter from Eve
Missing this story so much. I've been waiting/reading for years now! I always try to finish the story in my head, but I have no idea where everything is leading, it's such a page turner and so unique. I remember exactly how excited I was in 2011 when you added a new chapter -I hope it happens again soon!
Reviewer: right2write (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2015 01:37 PM · On: Part 2 - Focus
Sooooooooooo, I never read the last three chapters because I didn't want to torture myself with an unfinished story. I finally did and you chose the worst part to stop at. lol PLEASE! I know. You're a mom. Me too. I have an unfinished fic too that I am currently working on again. That being said. Please finish this, you are so close!
Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2013 11:19 PM · On: Part 2 - Focus
Please tell me at some point you will finish this great story.........no guilt or head trips..God knows, I understand real life screwing with ya....
Reviewer: annastarr (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2013 02:37 AM · On: Part 2 - Focus
Reviewer: Chello (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2012 01:41 PM · On: Storm: Warning - A letter from Eve
I so hope you will be continuing this story. The plot is original and hard to put down. The reunion really is up next, right?
Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2012 04:52 PM · On: Part 2 - Focus
OOOOOOOOOOOOO Please continue..................
Reviewer: black sadie (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 06:15 PM · On: Part 2 - Focus
Your story has been well written but tedious. I hope Bella and Edward's reunion is coming soon. I mean no disrespect, I am however impatient. I never have liked stories that put Bella or Edward with someone else, whatever the cercumstances. I'm also not crazy about stories that make Edward weak. I have always felt Edward was very strong to love Bella as he does and sacrifice so much for her. He never seems to receive much credit for that even from his own family. Bella seems to always be the victim which I hate because Edward is always to blame.
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 08:58 PM · On: Traces
Arrrgggghhhhh! You said it! "The reunion is coming!" The only question I wanted to know last.....and you did warn me......but...but...
I've waited for you so patiently to continue this marvelous story. There are very few that come up to this calibre. I'm in awe of your talents. Just keep writing....please?
Reviewer: Tressame (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2011 04:28 PM · On: Letters
Your writing is melancholy, angry, hopeful and lovely - all at once. I'm excited to see where the story goes, while simultaneaously feeling anxious for E&B (is that weird?).
Good job, lady!
Reviewer: mayday000 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2011 11:56 PM · On: Part 2 - Focus
HEY CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE, LOVE THIS STORY TO BITS IF I HAVENT ALREADY TOLD U ITS MY FAV LOTS OF LOVE BEK
Reviewer: ColdOneCullen (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2011 06:31 PM · On: Part 2 - Focus
Ahhhhhhhuuuuuuggggghhhhh I have been waiting for so long for this to happen and now we are left on a cliffy. So crule... so so crule. Please update soon, your story is fantastic and has great imagination behind it. Cant wait for the next installment.
Reviewer: Curlykate (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 12:35 PM · On: Storm: Control
very moving chapter
Reviewer: Curlykate (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 11:38 AM · On: Complicated
Fantastic chapter. Garrett changing Bella in order for her forget Edward and the Cullens and to protect her from Victoria is a believable idea.
Reviewer: Curlykate (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 11:15 AM · On: Storm: Proposition
I love how you portray Bella as seeing she brought trouble on the Cullens and that they chose to leave her because of this. To some extent that seems for more plasible than just leaving because overnight Edward stopped loving her.
Reviewer: Curlykate (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 10:33 AM · On: Storm: Fate
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.
Reviewer: Curlykate (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 10:19 AM · On: Letters
Wow, love it. So many questions in my head. What is Bella? She cries and appears to drink tea. What happened with Edward and the Volturi? Why does evreyone think she is dead.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2011 10:30 AM · On: Part 2 - Focus
I can't wait to see how this goes! And that trio is frighteningly cool, along with all the brain physiology. And how would it be that they would look at a vampire brain? Would it be alive without it's casing? Waiting to be burned? Shudder!
Reviewer: karin9166 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 08:32 PM · On: Part 2 - Focus
This is SOO good!! Please, please, please don't keep us waiting long for tyhe next "installment"... :}
Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 11:59 AM · On: Honesty
This is such a beautiful story....words cannot express how great a story this is...Thank you....
Reviewer: right2write (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2011 09:26 AM · On: Understanding
This is my second read and still shiver and squeals of glee!
Reviewer: lskmom (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2011 10:34 AM · On: part 1 - Introductions
OK, confused now...Bella seems to have been taught how to be around others with abilities but still, in Alice's vision, it didn't sound like it went well with all of the Cullen's at once. Hmmm...need more....soon please....finding these extra two chapters I didn't realize existed an hour ago has delayed my trip to the Petsmart but has perhaps made me even more impatient for more-LOL.
Reviewer: lskmom (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2011 10:14 AM · On: Traces
Oh my, there was more already...I thought when I finished the last chapter I was caught up but it turns out I had still had two more. Still one more to go...squeee....I am too old to do the fangirl squee thing but I am going to a Taylor Swift concert tonight so I suppose now is as good a time as any to channel my inner 12 year old. I suppose it is best to leave that up to my daughter though. Anyhow, loving this story...loving the letter. Loving the idea of Bella reading it...and getting very fearful of them actually meeting and perhaps imploding from being able to read every thought passing through each other's mind all at once. Seems like Edward's gift magnified when all the thoughts are about her might be a bit too much all at once....
Reviewer: lskmom (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2011 09:56 AM · On: Intentions
Ah, gosh...so fabulous. I tried to read this chapter a while back but my memory of the previous chapters was too fuzzy so over the last couple of days, I have had the pleasure of rereading all of the this story over again and it was just as fabulous as I remembered. Now I am all caught up and hoping for not another 2 year lag before we continue....you know, I had thought about writing you several times just to ask what the outline for this story had been cause I so wanted to know how it was all going to play out....but this is so much better. I am glad you are back to it now and hope you will be able to continue to the end this time cause really, this story is fabulous and I am totally thrilled that you are back to it and hopefully able to make it to the end this time. Can't wait for more....Alison
Reviewer: Bella Landaeta (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2011 09:53 PM · On: part 1 - Introductions
Ahh i hope you update! I find this story fascinating!
Reviewer: vamp1975 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2011 07:51 PM · On: part 1 - Introductions
ok cant wait started on Tuesday and now I need more please loving this fic
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