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Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:03 AM · On: Chapter Eight

Arrggh Edward Edward Edward!!! Alice is trying to help you and you are not listening!!!

Such a sad chapter. I feel so bad for both Bella and Edward.

I hope they can work through this.

Another well written chapter, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter Eight

It appears that Bella is trying to find her strength again, and doing so by reaching out to her other friends. I know Edward is confused and jealous, but Bella needs to be able to take care of herself too and not feel like such a helpless china doll. That's my take on why she's acting this way, anyway.

Reviewer: Stacey Joyce (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter Eight

A distraught Edward is almost too much to take :( I hope they make up soon!

Thanks for the update!!

Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter Eight

This is great! I'm enjoying the storyline so far. It's different from a lot of fics out there.

I hope Bella and Edward start talking soon, though I understand that she needs some time away to figure things out.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Chapter Eight

Perfect...as usual! Seriously, this is an amazing story. I don't know how your story is flowing so well when you don't update very often! You must just have a gift....and a good grasp on where you are going with this!

I am looking forward to more!!

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter Eight

oh no, how are they going to get past this? I understand why Bella is upset but still feel sorry for Edward, he loves her and just wants to help. Please update again real soon! :)

Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Chapter Eight

Always the control freak. Figures.

Cant wait for the next update. It's been a great story so far. :)

Reviewer: PhoenixRising (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 02:21 AM · On: Chapter Seven

Poor Bella :( I hope Edward can explain to her why he watched the video and that she can understand why he did it. Beautifully written story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

xoxo Danii

Reviewer: confusedbylyfee (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter Seven

wow! Great story! Very, very sad, but extremely intriguing. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: edwardsbabe (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter One

very good job

Reviewer: Cordelia (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter Seven

You're writing such a great Bella. Please keep it up, I can't wait to see where it goes!

Reviewer: Alyxandria (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter Seven

Yay! An update! I wasn't expecting the fact that he watched the tape to come out so soon - I figured it would fester a bit longer. Glad Charlie has seen the light. :)

Great update. Looking forward to more!

-Alyx

Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Chapter One

Great job! Good Scene! Just too short!! Great content and I love that Bella sent him away! I want to see him come back to her!

Author's Response:
Yeah I agree that the last chapter was really short - don't worry, chapter eight is longer and should be up soon. Thanks for the comments.

Reviewer: instantkarmagirl (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Chapter Seven

Poor Bella! It's understandable why she didn't want him to watch the tape and I liked that she made him leave because while they truly love each other, she doesn't want him to think of her like that. And now that she knows that he knows, she can't pretend that it didn't happen.

Poor Bella and Edward.

Thank god you updated!!

Reviewer: Cathy (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Chapter One

Wow that's pretty tough what happend to Bella! on the one hand I can understand that Edward had to look the tape but if I were Bella I would be hurt ,too because I wouldn't want him to seee that !I think I would have sent him away as well!

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Yours, Cathy

Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:54 AM · On: Chapter Seven

0.0,...

sad :(

but good.... cant wait for more!!

Reviewer: wintersage (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:58 AM · On: Chapter Seven

Wow, you did that scene perfectly. My heart is still aching...

Reviewer: cb2brown (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Chapter Seven

OK -- Carlisle needs to find Bella a vampire shrink -- like in the story Shrinking the Violets! She seriously needs help and so does Edward!!!

I like this story though -- keep up the good work.

Reviewer: werucchi (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Chapter Seven

Finally a new chapter! It was great though. I'm scared of Bella's nightmares D: James is sooo evil DX

Anyway, more please :D

Reviewer: Team Edward (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Chapter Seven

Awww, This was too short but it was great writing! My cereal got soggy from neglect because i couldn't look down:) Please update soon!!

Reviewer: miranda (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 11:11 PM · On: Chapter Seven

Please update again soon!!

Reviewer: breakingdusk (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter Seven

OMG please don't make me wait long for the next chapter, PLEASE!!!! It is like cliffhanger central over hear lol and I totally HAVE to know what happens next...soon. lol Great job!

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Chapter Seven

I am definitely sticking with it! :)

Poor Bella and Edward. That had to be hard.

Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter Seven

:( poor bella :( and poor edward!!

Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter Seven

OMG...I almost forgot how much I love this story!! Wow, what an amazing chapter! You know, there was another story I read about Bella being raped by James and afterwards everyone just kind of moved on. I love how you are dealing with the emotions that would really be there for Bella and Edward. This chapter was too short...I wanted to read more!! Bella made Edward leave!! Was he watching thru her window when she was sick?...probably not since he wouldn't have been able to stay away!!

Man, do I love angst or what!!

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