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Reviewer: zoegerava (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 4

I really like your point of view. It's nice that someone actually gave her a voice.

Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 4

psht, with character development like this, I could go a long time without reading anything about Bella! Marvelous!

Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow. Interesting though, bringing another vampire into the midst!

Reviewer: lauraweasely (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 4

MOOOOOOOORE. I love the world you are creating. I'm a fan of 'back story' fics. This is really great so far. Keep it up.

Reviewer: lauraweasely (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 3

An excellent chapter again. You are writing the personalities of Edward, Esme, and Carlisle very well. I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Jody (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 4

I love that you have updated so quickly. The story is coming along great.

Reviewer: lauraweasely (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 2

I'm really enjoying this story. Getting into Rosalie's head is fascinating, please keep writing. However, vampires can't cry right? :)

Reviewer: Jody (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 3

I'm so happy you updated. I love love love this story. Keep it up it's really starting to develop into something great.

Reviewer: lauraweasely (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, this is very well written. Please continue writing, I'm really enjoying it. I like Edward's reaction, it makes sense, he wouldn't have liked Rosalie as a human.

Reviewer: dane_e04 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

An excellent start - well done and the vampire 'john' is a good plot point :)

Reviewer: dr cullens love (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 2

What a wonderful discription you spilled out in Rose's 1st hunt, it was awesome!!! I like how you bonded Esme & Rose as well, it would seem natural for Rose to become aggressive with the men. Bravo!! Next chapter paaaaaaaaaleeeeeeeeeeezeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!

Reviewer: Jody (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 2

I am so happy that you updated this story. it was the first rosalie fan fic I read and i love it. keep it coming your a great writer

Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

Really great story. I can't wait to read more. I have always wanted to get into Rose's head more. You are doing an excellant job.

Reviewer: antilleon (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting. Rosalie isn't my most favorite character, but I happen to enjoy this version of her story. I really look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: dr cullens love (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

Fabulous beginning! I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Sunrae (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh I absolutly love this story. I got to the end of the page and crossed my fingers there would be another chapter. I hope you will continue on with it. It is such a unique and fun story idea and the writing is great. Update soon.

Reviewer: r-pks (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

So far this seems really interesting you should keep it up. It could turn into something amazing.

Reviewer: EmilyCullen (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow. This has the potential to be great. I really like Rosalie and hope to end up liking her more, with you painting her 'life' for us. :)

--Emily

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