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Reviewer: Yvi-sama (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

i love the way you showed Carlisle´s worries, thoughts and reactions. it would be great to read more of Edward´s early weeks/years, don´t ya wanna write some more please?

Reviewer: blueeyeddemon (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is an amazing fic. I loved how you did the characters and Edward's reaction on waking up was perfect. I really wish you would continue it.

Reviewer: aerialla (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

Bravo Bravo. This was incredibly wonderful. Filled with angst, sorrow and hope and all hitting right in the solar plexus. This brought to life everything that Carlisle was going through when he decided to change Edward and you brought it to life.

Aerialla

Reviewer: delikizzz (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

This story is awsome! The way you wrote it, the way you explained Carlisle's feelings... I could actually feel and understand what he felt. By the ways Im a Carlisle obsessed person which made me love the story even more :)

great JOB!!!!!

10/10

Reviewer: lambTOslaughter (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 1

great story! I loved Carlisle's inner turmoil- so sad! But it made the story really believable.

Reviewer: kissyourself (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

wow, this is written quite well! i never ventured into the pre-twilight category, but when i saw this over at the recently added stories, i thought the summary was interesting. sure enough, i wasn't disappointed. it really is a good read. great job :)

Reviewer: Lynn_Jenny (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

Awesome story!

Reviewer: teamedward240 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

good job

Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, I really liked your characterizations and descriptions. This was really well written. Loved "bracing himself up practically on air, stuck to the wall like a spider, already poised in his hunting crouch" and the description of Carlisle as a man likely to become insane from loneliness, "but life without friendships could drive a man insane. A fate much worse than death. A fate that exemplified life and turned it every which way like a pancake left too long in the frying pan, until every inch of his being had been scorched and burned away. All that was left was a cinder of what used to be. A vaguely familiar silhouetted outline of what he used to be." Awesome job!

Reviewer: Angel Wings 113 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

This was really good. The way you portraid Carlisles's emotions is amazing and so complex

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