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Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 2: I don't know you

“YOU don’t understand. YOU have no idea. I want NOTHING more right now than to rip your clothes off, push you against that wall,” he motioned the wall next to the front door, “and have EVERY part of you. Right now.” He breathed in and out slowly with a strained control. A slow smile slipped across his face. “But that would be impolite.” Made me feel warm and fuzzy!

See, now why cant that happen to me! Hehe, jk. I'm liking this story, i'm confused a little bit, but i usually am, can not wait for an updatr!



Author's Response:

Lol yeah I love that line as well... as it comes up later too :)

Dont worry more will be explained with later chapters. I dont want to give away too much

Ive submitted the next chapter and just waiting for it to be accepted.

Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 2: I don't know you

I really like the story so far. Can't wait to see more...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. Its much appreciated!

Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

Holy crow! Gotta keep reading...

Reviewer: alya13 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

it was very good and very intresting i like mostly the end how u gave me the wanting more feeling.

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 2: I don't know you

I'm absolutely enthralled over here. And that last line, "I want NOTHING more right now than to rip your clothes off, push you against that wall,” he motioned the wall next to the front door, “and have EVERY part of you. Right now," just about killed me. I can't wait 'til you finish me off with your next chapter! YES!!!

Author's Response:

Aww thankyou!!

That line has certainly become more loved than me! hehe

Ive submitted my next chapter and Im waiting for it to be accepted!

Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 2: I don't know you

Oooohh.  Nice.  Great start.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing :) Im glad you like it. Keep reading!

Reviewer: Angel Wings 113 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was fairly intresting. I can't wait to see what all happens.

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2008 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

 

Very interesting, although I would imagine Edward having more trouble to not kill her, and that he would at least hold is breath...and how did he already know Bella's name?

Other than these little details that confused me, i enjoyed it. Please update soon1



Author's Response:

I guess Edward is slightly OOC, in that aspect anyway. More will be revaled in chapters to come. I dont want to spoil :)

Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2008 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, that's all i can say, wow. I like it, i like it alot... Update soon! So I did the unthinkable. I love that line, makes kisses seem so bad, hehe. Great story!

..:Taylor IS Jacob:..



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. I have a few chapters written already! :)

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