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Reviewer: Barbara Champion (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2020 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Life of the Flesh is in the Blood

This was the best chapter of this story and I am looking forward to know about the next. Hope they both will be together as they should marry. Its my request that please don’t end this story on sad note, as this would be disaster. I must visit and recommend others as well for the further writing stuff.

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2016 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Life of the Flesh is in the Blood

  You know, I always wondered what would happen to the gang in the farther future.  Good thing you decided to explore the idea.        :)

  'The awkwardness of moving at human speed meant that he nearly knocked the tattered paperback book off the desk. “IMMORTAL PASSIONS,” proclaimed the lurid lime-green cover. BY BELLACQUA CYGNET. He allowed himself a few moments in his memory, picturing her as she handed the book to him, open to her ‘inscription’:        To Daddy        Thanks for Everything!        Please don’t read this book!        <3 Bella'        Heh, heh!  Tease!  It's like giving someone a piece of cake, telling him they can't eat.        X-)

  So, Charlie is a vamp, Bella writes romances. Some good stuff, at least.

  “Nothing too interesting in the night. Chased a couple of ice-dealers up the line. Took them out about forty miles outside the limits.”        “Good,” the man nodded. “Only two?”        “Yes, two. Though before I took care of them they gave me plenty of good info for follow-up.” He paused. “If Bella were here, I’d have given her the female, that’s for sure.” He wrinkled his nose dramatically and huffed. “She never seems to mind icers. They taste disgusting to me.”        Huuuhh...  Looks like some things  changed in the Cullen house.        :-/

  “Obviously, it is very serious for you. But I mean for everyone. Something isn’t adding up.(...) Since you are clearly telling the truth, I think we have a very serious case on our hands.”(...)        Edward spoke first. “If this is what I think it could be, this is more than just some case. I think we might have really stepped in something big here."(...)        "There’s no way the two of us can handle this by ourselves."(...)        "We need Bella.”        Hm-hm-hm.  Trouble ahead.

  Plenty of questions.  What is Bella doing?  What happened with the Cullens?  How is the world now?  Who are the two misterious figures in the beginning? Not to mention their new case.  Well, you got my attention, Cam.

Reviewer: Dark Angel (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2016 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Life of the Flesh is in the Blood

Well, damn, where's the rest of the chapters? Lol~~looking forward to more.

Reviewer: bullnala (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2016 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Life of the Flesh is in the Blood

I'm really intrigued as to where this is going. It's a grea start.

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