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Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Bella
Interesting first couple of chapters. I want to read more.
Reviewer: pipergirl (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Icy Ideas
Great first chapter! You've definitely piqued my curiosity :)
Author's Response: thanks! I'll update ASAP =]
Reviewer: Katrina (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Icy Ideas
This start has grabbed my attention and I'm interested in seeing where you go with it - lots of potential but not much else to comment on given the length of the post just that I hope you continue with this :) Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thanks alot, i get your point on the length, will make future posts longer!
Reviewer: Itz193 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Icy Ideas
Please post the next chapter. The story perked my interest & I want to read more. I think Bella's sort of in character here. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Yeah, i re-read it again a few days later and i can see a few mistakes in Bella's behaviour, some of it intential though!
Reviewer: Fallingstar (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Icy Ideas
Wouldn't that be nice. Having a really crap-tacular day and then you run into someone like Edward Cullen possibly. A girl can dream right? Loved it. Interesting premise. Please continue.
Author's Response: It's a dream to hold on to on days when you feel like you really would like to go cliff-diving!! thanks so much for the feedback!
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