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Reviews For Rough Waters
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2020 11:55 AM · On: Prologue

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Reviewer: dance mom 33 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2016 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Back on the Ship

Fun story.

Reviewer: cofey (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2014 08:27 PM · On: Prologue

wondering how long ur gonna leave us hanging and hope all is ok w u

Reviewer: Isabella Rig (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2014 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Back on the Ship

I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: cofey (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2014 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Back on the Ship

hi

i know that real life gets in the way often but hoping that u will finish this fic .. love ur work

xo

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2013 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Back on the Ship

a "long" and "hard" night teehee!!!  love love love so happy for the update.. I hope Bree is ok and someone just scared the crap out of her in a good way...  Bellas gonna be a wreck until she knows and this could mess up Alices wedding sniffle.

Reviewer: krystens (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2013 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Adventures in Grand Turk

OMGGGG!!! MORE PLEASE!!! LOVES IT! :D

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2013 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Adventures in Grand Turk

one step forward two steps back...  I see Bellas pov but shes got to understand people arent doing this to pity her or because they look down on her...

Reviewer: gadberry1 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2013 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Adventures in Grand Turk

Still loving it. Poor things, all that UST. And Bella's $$ hang-up. Plenty of time to resolve it,  breathless for more :-)

Reviewer: gadberry1 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2013 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Adventures in Grand Turk

Still loving it. Poor things, all that UST. And Bella's $$ hang-up. Plenty of time to resolve it,  breathless for more :-)

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2013 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Missing

I am still worried is your James going to come on to Bella next and start trouble... And how did teh girl get her ankle broken and why did James bounce on her like that....  Can't wait for more post again soon I adore this story and am so excited for an update! 

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2013 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Missing

Well I thought he might have killed her.. James that is.

Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2013 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Missing

i so look forward to your updates
this chappie gave me whiplash
love it when its not what i expect

good job
update soon

Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2013 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Missing

That was a lot of stuff happening in one chapter. So I think Rosalie is still two faced. nice for awhile and then back to her bitchy self. Wonder how long she can keep that up. Wondering if we'll see more of James ???

merrily

Kat

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2013 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Doesn't Always Stay in the Bahamas

Squeeee Alice is going to find them woot woot!!!!! love tis chap and Doctor Carlisle  always a yummy when he shows how caring and sweet and loving he is lucky Esme and wow Bella is going to be in shock when she finds out Edward stayed with her all night!

Reviewer: guinneth (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2013 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 7 - What Happens in the Bahamas...

I want more!  

 

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2013 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 7 - What Happens in the Bahamas...

I thought Bella would pull Bree into everything thus throwing Edward off.

Reviewer: MonkeyBars (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2013 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 7 - What Happens in the Bahamas...

love this story just started reading and i am hooked... you have something awesome here, cant wait for the rest.  thank you for sharing it with us

Reviewer: lynard69 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2013 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 7 - What Happens in the Bahamas...

So romantic and awkward.  Just like most relationships begin!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2013 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 7 - What Happens in the Bahamas...

Damn that was hot. Loved how these two are moving closer and closer together, and hopefully now, things are even closer. That kiss, damn damn damn. Hot hot hot. Loved it. Even though it looked like she made the walk of shame before, maybe it could happen soon, hehe. Loved it.

Reviewer: tigger12 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2013 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 7 - What Happens in the Bahamas...

I just started reading your story today and it's really awesome! I'm excited to read more!

Reviewer: tigger12 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2013 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 7 - What Happens in the Bahamas...

I just started reading your story today and it's really awesome! I'm excited to read more!

Reviewer: healthgirl1122 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2013 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 7 - What Happens in the Bahamas...

I wanna go on a waterslide! Great story! 

Reviewer: DJamethyst (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2013 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 7 - What Happens in the Bahamas...

been there, sorta done that. In high school, our school band went to a competition and on our way back visited a water park. My boyfriend tried to get me to jump off a 3-meter diving board but I was scared. He promised to wait below and catch me if I jumped. I did, he did, but my top came off on the way down to the bottom of the pool and floated away. DJ

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2013 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 7 - What Happens in the Bahamas...

Length wise this was perfect!!! Omg love love love that they finally kissed woot woot!!! wonder if the group will happen upon them when it happens muah hahahaha!!!!  

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