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Reviewer: Fantasy17 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2020 10:36 AM · On: Three
Wish this story was longer
Reviewer: Leslie Mc (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2018 07:20 AM · On: Three
I need more on this one too!
Reviewer: roon0 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2016 02:02 AM · On: Three
Awesome chapter
Reviewer: AlexSun (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2013 02:03 AM · On: Two
you really need to add more, this story is really good...
Author's Response: I'm working on chapter six now. I'm excited to finish and post it. :)
Reviewer: lmfirst (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2013 07:45 AM · On: Two
WTH???? She is 13!!!!
Reviewer: jlove34 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2013 01:07 AM · On: Two
Good chapter. Thanks
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2013 11:06 PM · On: Two
wowo oh wow!!!! Edward got there in time but now Paul is angry hurt and very much not just going to let this go he seems like a crazed man... I can't wait fo rmore so post again soon. Wow Bella has made a huge confession to Edwar I wonder hwo he will take it.
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2013 11:44 AM · On: Two
=) just when you think you can't shock a vampire..... so glad he got there just in time!
Reviewer: Lovesbooks (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2013 01:02 AM · On: One
I love this story. Great writing; I hope you update soon.
Reviewer: bubblettrocks (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2013 03:24 AM · On: One
Love it!!! Keep up the great work on this story!!
Reviewer: Edens_muse_74 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 07:17 AM · On: Prologue
i love this story
Reviewer: robyne67 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 01:11 AM · On: Prologue
Your firqt two chapters are promising! Update soon please
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2012 11:57 AM · On: One
Hmmm.....this is very intriguing...I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2012 11:17 AM · On: One
This story has me intrigued. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2012 10:19 AM · On: One
omg omg ogm what a sad chapter poor Bella but at teh same time so exciting I wonder if Jasper is with them yet does he feel Bellas emotions???
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2012 09:00 AM · On: One
aww, he's so sweet to her :D was Edward the one growling??? is he ok to be around her scent??? I hope Carlisle looks into her "home" situation.....
Reviewer: mommakat (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2012 05:43 AM · On: One
I'm hooked! I can't wait to see how you develope this story!
Thank you for sharing with us :)
Kathryn
Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2012 04:38 PM · On: Prologue
Good start. Will be interesting to see how it plays out.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2012 03:44 PM · On: Prologue
OMG Poor Bella... Talk about a wave of mixed emotion for 1 chap you want to feel bad that she lost her parents but relieved a nice family wants to take her in before tehy put her in some sort of group home... But then I remember your summary and think..looks can be decieving... post again soon!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2012 09:16 PM · On: Prologue
very interesting start....i can only guess what's ahead!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2012 10:37 AM · On: Prologue
good beginning, guess they are not all they seem.......
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