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Reviews For Concrete Angel
Reviewer: Fantasy17 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2020 03:36 PM · On: Three

Wish this story was longer

Reviewer: Leslie Mc (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2018 12:20 PM · On: Three

I need more on this one too!

Reviewer: roon0 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2016 07:02 AM · On: Three

Awesome chapter

Reviewer: AlexSun (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2013 07:03 AM · On: Two

you really need to add more, this story is really good...

Author's Response:

I'm working on chapter six now. I'm excited to finish and post it. :)

Reviewer: lmfirst (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2013 12:45 PM · On: Two

WTH???? She is 13!!!!

Reviewer: jlove34 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2013 06:07 AM · On: Two

Good chapter. Thanks 

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2013 04:06 AM · On: Two

wowo oh wow!!!!  Edward got there in time but now Paul is angry hurt and very much not just going to let this go he seems like a crazed man... I can't wait fo rmore so post again soon.  Wow Bella has made a huge confession to Edwar I wonder hwo he will take it.  

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2013 04:44 PM · On: Two

=) just when you think you can't shock a vampire..... so glad he got there just in time!

Reviewer: Lovesbooks (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2013 06:02 AM · On: One

I love this story. Great writing; I hope you update soon.

Reviewer: bubblettrocks (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2013 09:24 AM · On: One

Love it!!! Keep up the great work on this story!!

Reviewer: Edens_muse_74 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 01:17 PM · On: Prologue

i love this story

Reviewer: robyne67 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 07:11 AM · On: Prologue

Your firqt two chapters are promising! Update soon please

Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2012 05:57 PM · On: One

Hmmm.....this is very intriguing...I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2012 05:17 PM · On: One

This story has me intrigued. Looking forward to the next chapter! 

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2012 04:19 PM · On: One

omg omg ogm what a sad chapter poor Bella but at teh same time so exciting I wonder if Jasper is with them yet does he feel Bellas emotions???

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2012 03:00 PM · On: One

aww, he's so sweet to her :D was Edward the one growling??? is he ok to be around her scent??? I hope Carlisle looks into her "home" situation.....

Reviewer: mommakat (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2012 11:43 AM · On: One

I'm hooked! I can't wait to see how you develope this story!

Thank you for sharing with us :)


Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2012 10:38 PM · On: Prologue

Good start. Will be interesting to see how it plays out. 

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2012 09:44 PM · On: Prologue

OMG Poor Bella... Talk about a wave of mixed emotion for 1 chap you want to feel bad that she lost her parents but relieved a nice family wants to take her in before tehy put her in some sort of group home...  But then I remember your summary and think..looks can be decieving...  post again soon!

Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2012 03:16 AM · On: Prologue

very interesting start....i can only guess what's ahead!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2012 04:37 PM · On: Prologue

good beginning, guess they are not all they seem.......

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