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Reviewer: Awestruck (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2013 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom

WOW!



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it!  Thanks!

Reviewer: cruli (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2013 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 35 - The Future

amazing... you make me cry more times than I remember!! Incredible writing... I hope you write more stories like this!!

Author's Response:

Aww, so sorry I made you cry so much!  I have to admit, I cried writing it.  Thrilled that you enjoyed the story.  I do have a lot more stories I'll be posting, although they'll all be pretty different.  I have a lot of ideas I want to explore.

Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2013 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 35 - The Future

Yay for happy endings! In addition to good things happening for all the majors, I'm glad to see everyone being gracious towards Heidi. So much fanfic vilifies people for not wanting kids, like it's evil and wrong, and you manage to avoid condemning her non-mainstream life choices.



Author's Response:

So glad you liked the happy ending and all of the good things happening for everyone!  Personally, I made the choice not to have children and I've been very happy with it, so I am a bit more sympathetic toward Heidi.  She made a lot of bad choices, and could have gone about things a lot differently, even after she was pregnant with Maggie.  I definitely didn't want to vilify her, just be frank about what consequences her choices made.  Glad you liked the way I approached her character!

Thank you for the nice review!

Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 35 - The Future

that was just so much fun without too much drama. loved how it all came together at the end. Love a HEA.

merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

So thrilled that you enjoyed the story.  I tried to keep the drama as realistic as possible and I am glad to hear you liked the way it came together at the end.  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 35 - The Future

I can't tell you enough how much I loved this story...In the beginning, I could so relate (lol..in just about every way...) Unfortunately, I didn't get the HEA...But I have no regrets, it was fun while it lasted....Thanks for another great story!!!



Author's Response:

I am sorry you didn't get your HEA, but I love hearing that you don't have any regrets.  That's important.  Thrilled that you enjoyed the story so much and thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 35 - The Future

beautiful! xoxo *.*



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you.  I am so glad you enjoyed the way the story wrapped up. 

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 35 - The Future

Well nostalgia on Bella & Maggie's part seems appropriate to end the story. I love a HEA

 

I can sort of relate to the age gap with the children although not quite that severe. My oldest daughter is graduating high school this Friday while my little ones are 2 1/2 & almost 4



Author's Response:

So glad you liked the nostalgic moments Bella and Maggie had.  No, not as big of an age gap as between Maggie and David, but that is still a big age gap between your kids.

I am sure Maggie and David will still have a great relationship, and he'll always have someone else to look up to/rely on. 

Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2013 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 34 - Edward's Desk

Totally love this. Really liked how you slipped in the mrs. Cullen part... I was like awww they're married. Anyway loved it.

Author's Response:

I am thrilled that you liked the way I slipped in the Mrs. Cullen part.  I thought it was a lot more fun than just telling you guys they were married!  :)

Reviewer: bella1 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2013 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 34 - Edward's Desk

Excellent! I hate to see it end! Bella19



Author's Response:

I am a little sad about this story ending too! So glad you enjoyed it so much!

Reviewer: Islandgrits (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2013 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Edward's Desk

I love how this chapter covers everything their beginning, their present, and their future.



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it.  It seemed like a good way to wrap things up, and you'll get a bit more of a glimpse into their future with the final chapter!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2013 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Edward's Desk

sniffle omg sniffle love it too perfect!!! dreamy!!!!



Author's Response:

Thrilled that you loved the chapter so much. I really hoped you would!

Reviewer: Red Koolaid (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2013 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Edward's Desk

OOOOOh. What a great chapter. I love the naughty "back to the office" episode where they started, and then how it ended at home with the baby announcement. The entire story was wonderful. Thank you. I will truly miss my Tuesday updates, but I look forward to your next work. Your writing rocks!   



Author's Response:

Thrilled that you liked the chapter.  I thought the "back to the office" bit would be a nice way to wrap things up.  I actually hadn't planned on including the baby announcement, but once the idea popped into my head I knew it would be perfect there. 

I have to admit, I am going to miss this story too, but there will be a new story coming up shortly. 

Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2013 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Edward's Desk

MARRIED !!!!! and pregnant no less, made my day....didn't he always want a big family, I say we shoot for Triplets !!!!!  Wonderful heart warming story, and I'm so glad to see that Maggie told her she loved her.... they certainly have come a long way, if only more torn families could come together a make a new mend like this one did.  The world would be a better place !!  Bravo   Let's see Edwella, Edwyna, and Missy and I don't know why but they should have all girls !! Ok well maybe one of them could be a boy! 



Author's Response:

No, Edward never said he wanted a big family, just a close, happy one.  :)  Thrilled that you liked that Maggie told Bella she loves her.  It was a pretty big moment for both of them.  LOL, I see you wanted to name one of the triplets after yourself!  ;)  Cute.

Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2013 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Delta Park

very nice 



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: mariac (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2013 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Delta Park

Love it!! Glad Heidi finally got her priorities sorted out! Do we get an epilogue?



Author's Response:

Yeah, Heidi really has come a long way, hasn’t she?  Thanks for the nice review!

There are two more chapters to go, which are both really epilogue type chapters because it takes them into their future.

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2013 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Delta Park

I loved all that cuteness lol! I'm glad Heidi apologized and talked it all out with Bella. I think all four of them needed that :)!

Author's Response:

Yeah, Heidi really has come a long way, hasn’t she?  You're absolutely right, all four of them need to be on the same page, and the better the adults are getting along, the easier it is on Maggie.  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2013 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Delta Park

I was about to joke about that cavity thing, but I'm nursing a miserable cat who just had ten teeth extracted, so instead I'll just say the chapter was heart-warming and a delight to read. :)



Author's Response:

Aww, poor kitty!  I am glad you found the chapter heart-warming.  After all of the angst, they certainly deserve some happiness, don't they?  Thanks for the nice review.

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2013 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Delta Park

Woohoo! Heidi's finally catching on!



Author's Response:

Yeah, Heidi really has come a long way, hasn’t she?  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2013 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Delta Park

sniffle more!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Two more chapters to go! 

Reviewer: bella1 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2013 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Delta Park

Awesome!



Author's Response:

Thrilled that you liked the chapter.  Thanks for the nice review.

Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2013 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Delta Park

<3

 



Author's Response:

So glad you liked the chapter and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2013 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 32 - The Rosewood Hotel Georgia

Omg I am having a heart attack from all this excitement!! The whole trip was super cute, but the stuff at the end... WOW!! I'm glad they finally talked about that important stuff concerning their future!

I'm not ready to let them go either so I'm glad we still have a few more chapters to go :D!

Author's Response:

Thrilled that you liked their trip and that they had their talk about the future.  That's always how I pictured it happening.  I think you'll really enjoy the next few chapters!  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2013 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Home

All of it was absolutely perfect

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I am so thrilled that you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: abk (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2013 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 32 - The Rosewood Hotel Georgia

Really enjoyed this story please keep me updated. Abk



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying the story! I think you'll really love the next three chapters.  Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2013 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 32 - The Rosewood Hotel Georgia

awwww....so happy for this couple and so happy that you are adding three more chapters!!  Yay!



Author's Response:

I've really had fun writing them.  After all they've been through, it's nice to enjoy some happy times with them, isn't it?  I think you'll love the next three chapters!  Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it!

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