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Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2013 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 32 - The Rosewood Hotel Georgia

I'm excited for future takes/ epilogue-type stuff. I especially would love to see Maggie interacting with a future sibling. She's redeemed herself and I want to see her happy. :p



Author's Response:

So glad you feel Maggie is redeemed.  She has a great future ahead of her, and you're going to see some glimpses of that, including her with a future sibling.  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2013 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 32 - The Rosewood Hotel Georgia

Holy SHIT FINALYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  ONG I love you lol!!!!!  I could so picture as an author hwo you could end it here but the demand is far to great like we all wish SM would continue give us something more she ended ok... but this was wow and the fact I get more has be bouncing like a high ass little school girl!!!!!   squeee!!!!



Author's Response:

Haha, I knew you'd be eager for that scene.  I've pictured it happening that way for a long, long time, so I hope it was worth the wait.  It could have ended there, but there were so many little scenes I had in my head that I thought it would be worth continuing just a little bit longer.  SO thrilled that you liked it!

Reviewer: mariac (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2013 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 32 - The Rosewood Hotel Georgia

Loved this chapter and how you went about writing it! Can't believe it's almost at its end :'( 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I am glad to hear you enjoyed the chapter.  I am having a hard time believing it's the end as well.  BUT, I think you're going to love the final three chapters. <3

 

Reviewer: DJamethyst (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2013 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Home

Aawwwwwww. :)

DJ



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it!  Thanks for the nice review.

Reviewer: mariac (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2013 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Home

LOVED this chapter!!!! I want pecan pie now lol glad they had a great time and that Edwards family have excepted bella and maggie wants bella to be a part of their family ;)



Author's Response:

So glad you liked the chapter.  Pecan pie does sound good, doesn't it? 


It's a huge relief to both of them that Edward's family has accepted her and that Maggie wants her to move in! 

Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: biohazard970 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2013 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Home

I love that Bella is finally going to move in and that CArlisle has come around.  Looks like these two have it in the bag



Author's Response:

So glad that you enjoyed it.  Yes, Bella is going to move in, and Carlisle has come around!  It's great progress and things are really coming together for them.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2013 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Home

squeeeeeeeeee love love love!!!  But s till will he want more children we fixed teh moving in thing but what about getting married etc etc...  and will J&A have their HEA?



Author's Response:

Aww, so glad you liked the chapter.

And you're just going to have to wait to find out about any future children and getting married.  And about J&A having their HEA.

Reviewer: appletini (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2013 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Home

when are they going to talk babies?! i'm just salivating to read that conversation, for some reason. let it happen soon!



Author's Response:

They're getting there, I promise.  It's all written!  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2013 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Silverton, Oregon

I like the symmetry in the difficulties with Maggie and Charlie.  Subtle, yet effective.



Author's Response:

So glad you liked that.  And yes, in many ways they are acting alike.  If nothing else, they were both quick to jump to conclusions and refuse to see the facts!


I really appreciate the feedback on this!

Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2013 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Bella's Desk

Uhmmm... Of course Heidi is suspicious.  No one told Maggie to be quiet about it, and I rather doubt she'd have not told her mother regardless!



Author's Response:

It would be pretty natural for Maggie to have told Heidi, and yes, that would make her suspicious.  Of course, it all depends on what exactly Maggie might have told her ...

 

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2013 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Terrace

Re: date night

Oh yeah, maaaaaaaaaaaaajor swoon!

I want an "Anthony" too!!

 



Author's Response:

lol, that confused me for a moment because that's my husband's name.  :)  But I suppose the swoony romantic things Edward does are based on my mister, so that's appropriate!

Thanks for the review, hun!

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2013 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 30 - The Guest Room

Lol alice and Jasper were so funny :)! I loved that Edward, Bella, and Edward had a lazy day together.

I love this story and am looking forward to more chapters :)!

Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed A&J, they are off to a good start.  A lazy day together is just what Edward, Maggie and Bella needed.  And at some point, Bella won't have to worry about leaving at the end of the day. 

Thrilled that you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2013 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 29 - The Party

Yay I have been anxiously awaiting the moment when Alice and Jasper meet! I knew there was no way that Bella and Edward would have best friends that wouldn't be associated lol. I loved everything about the party :)! I'm glad Bella and Charlie seen Maggie defending Bella. I love how Charlie and Maggie are developing their own relationship too lol!

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2013 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 28 - The Market

I didn't expect that apology lol! It was nice to see she apologized and that the other three had a great time decorating :)!

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2013 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 27 - The Marketing Department

Sorry I didn't review the other chapters, but I was too anxious to catch up lol! I need to leave a review now though. I love how Maggie has talked everything out with Bella and Edward and she seems to be doing better :)! It was great to see them spending time together. I hate how Heidi tried to blackmail Bella and Edward so I'm worried about what she's going to tell Bella :/.

I have loved everything I have read and I'm anxious to read more lol! Fabulous job!

~Kym

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2013 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 30 - The Guest Room

Nice relaxing chapter. Surprise Alice and Jasper hit off really well. Alice's acceptance and apology to Edward and Bella was nice. Most of her bitterness stemmed from her own pain from her similar situation with James. Looking forward also when Bella won't have to go home to her apartment. Elizabeth already made mention of it when said to decorate house to her taste. I'm sure Bella will take into account her, Edward, and Maggie's taste for the finished product.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the chapter.  It was a relaxing one for a nice change of pace for them.  Couldn't resist having A&J hit it off, I think they're off to a pretty good start.  Yes, Alice's bitterness was because of her own situation with James and she's feeling completely differently.  Glad you liked her apology and acceptance of E&B.

E&B are concerned about moving too fast for Maggie, so they aren't rushing into moving in together until they're sure she's ready for it. But once she is, they'll all make the house a home for the three of them.  Probably one of the biggest things Bella will do for E&M, and that's bringing the three of them together as a unit and making Maggie feel like her opinion matters. 

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Islandgrits (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2013 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 30 - The Guest Room

I am also proud of Maggie. I love how the relationship between Bella and Maggie is developing. I enjoyed catching Alice and Jasper's morning goodbye.

 



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying Bella and Maggie's relationship.  They have come a long way, haven't they?  Alice and Jasper's goodbye was cute, wasn't it?  A&J are off to a good start!  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2013 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 30 - The Guest Room

omg omg omg love love love but holy hell talk about epic FINALLY Alice and jasper woot woot!!!!!   Cant wait for more have n oclue how you can say this story is winding down I feel liek we are just getting started!



Author's Response:

So glad you liked Alice and Jasper getting together.  It was about time, huh?  So glad you liked it. 

And yeah, I've gotten them to a good place.  I promise you'll see some glimpses of their future together, but the conflict is over, and life is going to be wonderful, and quite calm for them.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2013 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 30 - The Guest Room

it sounds like it's almost the end.... is it?



Author's Response:

The story is winding down.  There are a couple more regular chapters, then a few more outtake types that skip into the future. 

Reviewer: DJamethyst (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2013 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 30 - The Guest Room

OK, this is not the first story I've read that mentions a French Toast casserole. How about putting the recipe in an A/N? Please??

DJ



Author's Response:

Here you go.  This is a super rich version, but you could easily lighten it up with a bit less butter and substituting some of the cream for lower fat milk.

Baked French Toast
Prep Time 15 Minutes
Cook Time 1 Hour        Servings 8    


    FRENCH TOAST
    Butter, For Greasing
    1 loaf Crusty Sourdough Or French Bread
    8 whole Eggs
    2 cups Whole Milk
    ½ cups Heavy Cream
    ½ cups Sugar
    ½ cups Brown Sugar
    2 Tablespoons Vanilla Extract
    Topping
    ½ cups Flour
    ½ cups Firmly Packed Brown Sugar
    1 teaspoon Cinnamon
    ¼ teaspoons Salt
    Freshly Grated Nutmeg, Optional
    1 stick Cold Butter, Cut Into Pieces
    Warm Syrup, For Serving
    Butter, For Serving
    1 cup Fresh Blueberries, For Serving

Preparation Instructions

For the French toast: Grease the baking pan with butter. Tear the bread into chunks, or cut into cubes, and evenly distribute in the pan. Crack the eggs in a big bowl. Whisk together the eggs, milk, cream, granulated sugar, brown sugar and vanilla. Pour evenly over the bread. Cover the pan tightly and store in the fridge until needed (overnight preferably). Or you can make it and bake it right away—delicious no matter what!

For the topping: Mix the flour, brown sugar, cinnamon, salt and some nutmeg in a separate bowl. Stir together using a fork. Add the butter and with a pastry cutter, and mix it all together until the mixture resembles fine pebbles. Store in a plastic bag in the fridge.

When you’re ready to bake the casserole, preheat the oven to 350 degrees F. Remove the casserole from the fridge and sprinkle the topping over the top. Bake for 45 minutes for a softer, more bread pudding texture or for 1 hour-plus or more for a firmer, crisper texture.

Scoop out individual portions. Top with butter and drizzle with warm pancake syrup and sprinkle with blueberries.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2013 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 29 - The Party

love love love!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, hun! 

Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2013 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 29 - The Party

I adore Maggie and Charlie as partners in crime--metaphorically speaking, of course!



Author's Response:

Aww, yay! I had a lot of fun with Maggie and Charlie, too.  You'll see a bit more of them in the chapter after next.  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: Red Koolaid (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2013 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 29 - The Party

This was so good I read it twice. Love that Charlie and Maggie are liking each other, and everyone sees how good they are together. Awesome chapter. 



Author's Response:

Aww, that's a really great compliment! Thrilled that you liked it so much!  Aren't Charlie and Maggie fun?  I really had a blast writing those parts.  Everyone is definitely supportive of their relationship now, and they're off to a really good start.   Thank you so much for the review, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: Islandgrits (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2013 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 29 - The Party

Lovely party. I hope you are feeling better soon.



Author's Response:

I am not 100% yet, but I am definitely starting to feel better.  Thanks for the get well wishes!  So glad you liked the party! Thanks for the nice review.

Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2013 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 29 - The Party

Love, Love, Love this story!



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much for the review, I appreciate it!

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